Barrister Babu Chat Club #6 *Amidst the boredom,A Story Retold* - Page 73

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

I dont understand such people

Bhai itni mehnat se tum logon ke liye likha hai

And you can put the slightest efforts to write what you like ?

Kya matlab

Exactly! and what do they mean by update soon? unke kahe bina nahi karenge kya update😡 and they just copy paste the same thing for every update, sometimes I wonder if they are robots or something!

Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Main toh filhaal hoon😆

In the tranquil lay something evil

In the angel’s soul resided the devil

In love mortals found only hate

In the early love a sorry was too late

In the tale of love and heart break

Will they sleep forever or be awake?

Lucifer

He sat there contemplating over the prophecy spoken by the ladies of fate. It wasn’t something good anyway but what made him sour was the word love. He hated that word. Many stupid mortals sacrificed their lives for their so-called beloved ones. The unruly werewolves were always desperate for their mates. And the regalest, the vampires were delighted to be with their bonded ones. This was sickening for him. These so-called lovers, mates and bonded ones only made them weaker. Weaker and stupid. These lovers were nothing but destruction. Why sacrifice your whole life for this one person? Why be so stupid to destroy yourself? What profit will that give you anyway except sadness and destruction. Instead be heartless. Think about yourself first rather than someone else. He took sip from his goblet filled with rich red wine. As the wine seeped inside his body a warm feeling engulfed him. Out of no where the door creaked of his study revealing his friend Stephano from the other side. He usually hated such relations. Friends, family and lovers were just for those stupid mortals and supernatural beings. But he knew very well that Stephano deserved this recognition. Stephano seeing the goblet in his friend and superior’s hand spoke up, “Lucifer...” taking a dramatic pause he continued “What happened that you are drinking at such an odd hour?” Lucifer smirked and replied coyly, “I wasn’t knowing drinking has a time my dear friend. If so, then please grace me with the knowledge of it.” Stephano knew what was coming his way but still proceeded, “You very well know what I am talking about. It’s just you, jesting with me, isn’t it?” “Why will I do such an offensive crime? Jesting with you my dear? I can’t even dream about that.? Lucifer replied feigning innocence. “As innocent as you sound, we both know you don’t drink without a reason. What is the matter lucifer?” Stephanou asked with seriousness. Lucifer sighed knowing there wasn’t any escape. He got up from his majestic chair made of the finest

Its incomplete

Padh ke bata kaisa hai

If any changes and suggestion please tell me

Originally posted by: Sujz

Exactly! and what do they mean by update soon? unke kahe bina nahi karenge kya update😡 and they just copy paste the same thing for every update, sometimes I wonder if they are robots or something!

Its not like we wont update

Bhai we dont mind that sentence update soon but with a compliment for the chapter we feel that you are eager for the next update

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

In the tranquil lay something evil

In the angel’s soul resided the devil

In love mortals found only hate

In the early love a sorry was too late

In the tale of love and heart break

Will they sleep forever or be awake?

Lucifer

He sat there contemplating over the prophecy spoken by the ladies of fate. It wasn’t something good anyway but what made him sour was the word love. He hated that word. Many stupid mortals sacrificed their lives for their so-called beloved ones. The unruly werewolves were always desperate for their mates. And the regalest, the vampires were delighted to be with their bonded ones. This was sickening for him. These so-called lovers, mates and bonded ones only made them weaker. Weaker and stupid. These lovers were nothing but destruction. Why sacrifice your whole life for this one person? Why be so stupid to destroy yourself? What profit will that give you anyway except sadness and destruction. Instead be heartless. Think about yourself first rather than someone else. He took sip from his goblet filled with rich red wine. As the wine seeped inside his body a warm feeling engulfed him. Out of no where the door creaked of his study revealing his friend Stephano from the other side. He usually hated such relations. Friends, family and lovers were just for those stupid mortals and supernatural beings. But he knew very well that Stephano deserved this recognition. Stephano seeing the goblet in his friend and superior’s hand spoke up, “Lucifer...” taking a dramatic pause he continued “What happened that you are drinking at such an odd hour?” Lucifer smirked and replied coyly, “I wasn’t knowing drinking has a time my dear friend. If so, then please grace me with the knowledge of it.” Stephano knew what was coming his way but still proceeded, “You very well know what I am talking about. It’s just you, jesting with me, isn’t it?” “Why will I do such an offensive crime? Jesting with you my dear? I can’t even dream about that.? Lucifer replied feigning innocence. “As innocent as you sound, we both know you don’t drink without a reason. What is the matter lucifer?” Stephanou asked with seriousness. Lucifer sighed knowing there wasn’t any escape. He got up from his majestic chair made of the finest

Its incomplete

Padh ke bata kaisa hai

If any changes and suggestion please tell me

This is good Alexia. I felt bit cold about it and I think that is the setting of the scene. It has bit humour and also the apt amount of darkness. It's amazing. But, I feel it needs a little bit of heart, you know what I mean? These kinda scene should make the heart pound which I felt was little low on. But for the starters, it is good. I mean, when you'll complete this whole thing, you may just fill in the missing beads! But it is very good. 😳

Originally posted by: Octothorpe

This is good Alexia. I felt bit cold about it and I think that is the setting of the scene. It has bit humour and also the apt amount of darkness. It's amazing. But, I feel it needs a little bit of heart, you know what I mean? These kinda scene should make the heart pound which I felt was little low on. But for the starters, it is good. I mean, when you'll complete this whole thing, you may just fill in the missing beads! But it is very good. 😳

But heart as in?

Please explain me yaar mujhe tips chaiye

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

It was meant to be cold

But heart as in?

Please explain me yaar mujhe tips chaiye

I don't give good tips😆

Heart as in, bit of emotions, even if it is meant to be cold, that emotion of coldness was thoda missing. I did feel cold but not the cold I you want me to feel. Reading this should make be believe the love is for stupid people😆

Originally posted by: Octothorpe

I don't give good tips😆

Heart as in, bit of emotions, even if it is meant to be cold, that emotion of coldness was thoda missing. I did feel cold but not the cold I you want me to feel. Reading this should make be believe the love is for stupid people😆

Will try doing it

Thanks a lot Octo

Helped me🤗

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Okay

Will try doing it

Thanks a lot Octo

Helped me🤗

🤗

I like helping you guys🤗

Originally posted by: Sujz

hahaha, I believe it's better to finish a story than dragging it unnecessarily.😆

That's true though 😊 but still chahat deserves to be on for some more updates 😉

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

That's true though 😊 but still chahat deserves to be on for some more updates 😉

New chapter is updated😊

I will look into your suggestion.❤️