MayRa OS Series- Boss Baby (Completed on page 12) - Page 11

Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

Amazing.👏

Its so peaceful and over whelming to witness such a beautiful father-daughter bond. Very well described Rudra's emotions for his daughter.

Loved how despite not being present in the scene, you reminded us of Rajeev and Jai too.👍🏼

Thanks Ayush🤗

Abhi I had to show the entire family in the last epi na, somehow😆 Also, I thought it would nice for Maya-Rajeev's childhood belongings to be passed down to their kids like it happens in normal families😳

Originally posted by: Sh18

Beautiful, peaceful and calming is how I felt ready this story.❤️

The moments Rudra describes of Risha journey with him to now so beautiful.. I'm fallen short of words to have synonyms for beautiful.🤗

Nandhini-Rudra convo also was so endearing.😊

Your writing has a free flowing through feel to it that automatically makes readers transcend to the world of you created.

In short Absolutely loved it❤️

Thanks Shru🤗

@second last para, that means a lot☺️

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Kya hum idhar aa sakte hai?

Padhaaro humre des😆

Do read and let me know how it is🤗

Congratulations for becoming a Viewbie⭐️

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Thanks Ayush🤗

Abhi I had to show the entire family in the last epi na, somehow😆 Also, I thought it would nice for Maya-Rajeev's childhood belongings to be passed down to their kids like it happens in normal families😳

Arey I didnt realise it was the last one.😲😆

@last line- Nice thought, these small observations add alot of value😳

Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

Arey I didnt realise it was the last one.😲😆

@last line- Nice thought, these small observations add alot of value😳

I had said naa, it will be a 4-5 part series😆

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

I had said naa, it will be a 4-5 part series😆

Haan but I got so lost into reading it ❤️ so didnt realise kab khatam ho gaya.😆

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Thanks Miss T🤗

@last line, I actually wanted to end this with a fifteen old Rish getting ehr first live letter and talking about love, sex and sexuality with her parents but you all connected with a younger Risha very well, so wasn't sure how it would be to connect with older MayRa. So if you any suggestion for this universe, do let me know🤗

That's so sweet of you Shibz🤗

I was actually imagining something for Rudra and Risha, I'll PM you in details. I am sad to see your Boss baby end. I'll miss Risha. Hope you continue writing more. 🤗

very beautiful bond of father daughter rudra & risha shared🤗

Originally posted by: cuteariya

very beautiful bond of father daughter rudra & risha shared🤗

Glad you liked it😳