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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

Mr and Mrs Bajaj❤️

They are married🥳, without any relation to the past, without any compulsion, without any force or blackmail. He called her mother, just a great gesture.

I like Rishabs quality of understanding her needs without her asking so wanted to keep that.

She resting her head on his knee is such a beautiful moment.

I think what Prerna feels for him is hard to depict in words and so it has to be portrayed in a different way. Probs same goes for him too.

She has understood her own feelings for him and his feelings for her too. She is now dependent on Bajaj emotionally. As he said, he will make her strong in the future. They are husband and wife in every sense now❤️.

Agree they’re undergoing a process especially Prerna


Lovely chapter Jagruti🤗. Please continue soon.

Thanks

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

There's something so beautiful and simplistic about your writing. I love the depth and conversations which are minimalistic. Good work! I can finally read some fictions at ease given the lockdown. This one is definitely bookmarked and one of my favourite.

thank you keep reading and I’ll keep trying to write stuff which is enjoyable to read.


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: oa2019

another great update. ready nicely done. can't wait for the next one.

thanks ! 👏🏼


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyoti8

Beautiful update

Prerana keeping her head on rishab's knee that so emotional and sensitive.. personally I loved it...

It’s one you either love or hate glad you liked it.

Veena presences was an acceptance of prerish from Sharma family...

I think so it was also RBs soft side to blur the line a bit when he’s put in place a condition of Prerna not to return to India and per past until he thinks she’s up to the mark

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8

Hey beautiful part .. loved it .. the whole ceremony was so surreal ..!! Rishab gesture of taking approval of his marriage with Prerna through having Veena being present there .. was so thoughtful ..!! The most beautiful part was their moment at their bedroom.. the conversation followed by their acceptance of each other and passion filled moment later just makes us believe in pure love, respect and being there for each other as companion. Loved it !! Thank you for this wonderful update !! Please continue soon !! Eager to read more.. :)

I was hoping that would be the catch of the chapter 😉 glad to see it was well received.

Thank you for your kind words very encouraging.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks


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Posted: 5 years ago

Please update this Jagruti.... It's been a week 😒

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Please update this Jagruti.... It's been a week 😒

will do this evening sorry hectic few days

I’ve started it just need tidying up

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid

will do this evening sorry hectic few days

I’ve started it just need tidying up

OK... Np....if we have info we can wait 😆...Will wait now😛

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sorry all I’ve had a bit of a family emergency over last week which has been really stressful but here it is. - stay well all and let me know what you think.


6. The morning after the night before

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Good morning Mrs Bajaj he said over his newspaper as he saw her stir on her pillow.

Good morning ..Prerna replied sitting up to see him putting his newspaper to a side to give her his undivided attention.

Prerna reached for her night gown at the bed post behind her.

it might have been okay for Rishab to be shirtless but she would be inviting trouble if she didn’t put anything on.

Along with it she picked up her wedding ring put it on and then her mangalsutra.

When he saw her ponder on the marital chain he spoke.

“I know you didn’t ask for one of these but I asked your mother to bring one anyway.”


Prerna had always said she wanted a simple wedding the things associated with a traditional wedding like sindur had lost its appeal to her after all former instances of giving it so much meaning yet it has only ended up meaningless in the end.


His eyes tried to make her heart but before he needed to say anything she replied.


“Thank you, udhura sa lagta is ke bina.”

(Thank you it would have felt strange without this)

He understood that well “Its your choice whether you choose to wear it or not you’re Mrs Rishab bajaj either way.” He He saw a hint of bewilderment in her expression before she smiled.

In her mind she’d revisited the past for a second when he’d called her Mrs Bajaj time and time again and tried to understand why this time round it gave her a feeling in her stomach.,

“Still nervous?” He said seeing her defer her gaze.

He was trying to tease her about the way she’d been ever since his proposal she could sense that.

“Even more now, Pati joh ho chuke aap hamare” she said lightly some of which was a little true the rest of it playfulness.,

He smirked with a certain pride in his eyes that their was relationship was one where they could humour but there was also a meaningful side where he could give her butterfly’s.

He took her hand within his.

“You said very little last night” She looked towards him a moment as he questioned her, theek hai aap? .

“Ji ...”(yes) she said getting a little reluctant to talk about their wedding night.

After a moment she asked him something more of him.

“Mr bajaj Aap se kuch pooch sakti hoon”

(Can I ask you something) she says.

“Hmm” He replies..

Can you tell me a little bit about your childhood And kukis mom..

She looked towards him like she was worried about having overstepping the Mark.

He pondered for a moment and then agreed.

Very well let’s talk about that this evening he promised.

..

Kuki stopped eating her cereal and smiled from cheek to cheek when she saw her pa and Prerna mom walk down the staircase.

Rishab took the lead and Prerna elegantly followed, they looked very married was one way to put it. The blue of rishabs suit matched Prernas Saari.

Veena who was asking kuki to finish her cereal looks up to see the distraction and smiles herself.

Her daughter looked very happy.

Rishab folded his hands in greeting for Veena and Prerna touched her mother’s feet and gave her a hug.

Kuki was quick to run into her fathers arms.

“Breakfast?” said Prerna after a moment.

Rishab nodded taking a seat at the head of the table with kuki in his lap.

“Make something sweet won’t you” says Veena and Prerna agrees.

Sure, Kuki likes pancakes ? Right kuki?

Kuki nodds with a even bigger smile.

“Aap?” (and yourself) Says Prerna looking towards Rishab

“I’ll have some too!” smiles Rishab back at her.

Prerna agrees and walks off into the kitchen to prepare.

..

Whilst Prerna is away from the breakfast table.

Mr bajaj takes this as a opportunity to bond with Veena.

Veena however starts the conversion.

“Thank you Mr bajaj, Prerna ka khyal rakhne ke liyey.” (Thank you Mr bajaj for looking after Prerna.)

“For helping her grow stronger.

Hoshyari dikhati hai magar Nadaan hai meri batchi. Uski galtiyan maaf kijiyega please.”

Spoken like a traditional mother Veena is hoping Rishab be accepting of Prernas quirks.

“Be reassured I will always look after her.”

He says in his own distinct manner. A gentleman yet a very powerful man said everything about his manner and Veena noticed that.

“Prerna ne aap ko bataya hoga ke mein nahin chahta ke woh is vakt India ayey. I don’t think she’s ready yet.”

“Ji, Jaisa aap chahe” said Veena but was wise enough to understand that all the work that was going to rebuilding Prerna would come undone if she was to come to India now.

..

Pan cakes! Says Prerna as she walks in with a plate. Serves up a small pan cake with chocolate sauce for Kuki and two other potions one for Rishab and the other for her mother.

“Won’t you eat?” Asks Rishab looking up towards Prerna stood by his side.

Mein baad mein karloongi, (i’ll eat later) she says giving him presidency.

When she said she wanted to be just a wife for a few days she certainly meant it he thought.

He saw her fidget with her bangles for a moment but he didn’t make much of it.
She later walked into the kitchen. Veena excused herself discreetly to check on her daughter.

Prerna was washing her hands and her forearm under the cold water tap.

Where Mr bajaj had left a mark was now causing a burning sensation. The cool water under the tap helped.

By the time Veena entered Prerna had dried up.

Priyu ..

Said Veena as she walked towards her.

Tu theek hai na beta, khush hai ? “You’re alright aren’t you love” you’re happy?

Prerna smiled with her eyes not just her lips and Veena in response couldn’t help but do the same.

...

Next: Love bites

Edited by jagrutid - 5 years ago

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