' Pyaar hai '(Poetic ) Full story posted - Page 2

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Originally posted by: togepe30

Awesome 👏 ..........i loved it..!!!

Hi Vandana.... happy and glad u liked this.. u loved it make me much happier and feels my litle effort paid off..😃😳

Originally posted by: sanightingale

WOW Dii!!! Gr888 story....and fabulously written👏
thank u soooo much.....wonderful surprise... 😃 😃

"Pyaar ki jeet pyaar ki sachaayii mey hai,
Pyaar ki reet jasbaaton ki gehrayi mey hai,
Pyaar marne marney ka naam nahi Jeeney ka rukh hai,
Jahan Pyaar ka nivass ho wahi paayaa jaata Sukh hai"...

i really liked these lines..so true..
take care....luv Nida.. 🤗

Hi Nida dear,

am glad u liked thsi one..it was one of the experimental sort , am happy that u enjoyed it..and the last lines were ur fav..that means u felt it was right in tone.. feels really ncie that my little efort was appreciated so mcuh by u...

Story bhi acchi laggina..to Parul n Rocky story likhhi lee akhir mey...😆

luv u ..tc Allah hafiz

Bhoomi

Finally Finally Finally...I read ........................ n wowwwwwwwww...... uff ..maine kaise miss kardiya tha pata nahi ..... such a nice poem Bhoomi ... as usual ...main thakgayi yaar tumhari tariff karte karte ... tum khud samjhlo ke how i felt when i read it ....

love u ..keep up the fab work....

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Finally Finally Finally...I read ........................ n wowwwwwwwww...... uff ..maine kaise miss kardiya tha pata nahi ..... such a nice poem Bhoomi ... as usual ...main thakgayi yaar tumhari tariff karte karte ... tum khud samjhlo ke how i felt when i read it ....

love u ..keep up the fab work....

Hi my dear Sara,

Aww am so glad that finally i could persnally provide u the link.. or else.. yeh link dhundtey dhundtey main buddhi hojaungi... hope index mey ajaye..

Anywyas.. yaar u guys r the ones jinkey liye i started my Tumsey milkey Rk ko meri our se dedicated.. conitue karna hi tha na...

So enjoyed reading the poetic story.. Rocky and Parul...heheh... ab meri tariff..bas itna keh do.. dosto ki sangat bada rang laa rahi hai....😆😉😳 so als as i have wonderful friends around me u see... phir to meri wah bhai wah hi honi hai...😃..chalo happy u liked it.. tc care.. Onek Onek bhalobasha..luv u ...