Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 47

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Right now I can think about when PiNam marriage was on hold and Piya was bashing Ansh left, right and center. So Ansh might be sitting alone and curse his fate when AE will mark his entry. 😈

Okay... So, you mean the time period between Navratri and 'Aag ka Dariya' track??

Can you give me a slightly elaborate prompt?? Like what could be going on in Ansh's mind and how will Ruby's identity of a Daayan be revealed???

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Okay... So, you mean the time period between Navratri and 'Aag ka Dariya' track??

Can you give me a slightly elaborate prompt?? Like what could be going on in Ansh's mind and how will Ruby's identity of a Daayan be revealed???

No! I am talking about the time between Ved's petrification and Ansh revealing everything to Piya on the terrace. Navratri to uske baad aya tha.

Well, Ved had promised that she'll arrange PiNam wedding so definitely Ansh would be sad and curse his fate. So AE will taunt him and say how Gs had insulted Piya and GM and how it's only befitting that Ansh was getting earful from her.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

No! I am talking about the time between Ved's petrification and Ansh revealing everything to Piya on the terrace. Navratri to uske baad aya tha.

Well, Ved had promised that she'll arrange PiNam wedding so definitely Ansh would be sad and curse his fate. So AE will taunt him and say how Gs had insulted Piya and GM and how it's only befitting that Ansh was getting earful from her.

But then Ansh was practically a zombie throughout that time... In fact, post coming out of the effect of the DC, he remembered very few things... He did not remember all those insults which the family hurled at Pia and GM and everything that he said... It was Neha who told him that he had behaved very rudely with Pia.

So, if Ansh doesn't remember, then how will his alter-ego know that??

Haan, he definitely remembered that terrace kiss though!!! Use nahi bhoola banda... Pehle kya hua, baad main kya hua, shaadi ke liya haan kab kaha, sagai kab hui, shaadi kab hui, sab bhool gaya par kiss nahi bhoola!!! 😆

Haan, he definitely remembered that terrace kiss though!!! Use nahi bhoola banda... Pehle kya hua, baad main kya hua, shaadi ke liya haan kab kaha, sagai kab hui, shaadi kab hui, sab bhool gaya par kiss nahi bhoola!!! 😆

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Ab FF Hain. To thoda creative liberty to hum le hi sakte hain. Original sequence mein to AE bhi nahi tha. To aisa karna ki Ansh Majnu banke bethe rahega aur AE Ji Neha ki naam leke saare kaarname bayan karenge! 😈

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Haan, he definitely remembered that terrace kiss though!!! Use nahi bhoola banda... Pehle kya hua, baad main kya hua, shaadi ke liya haan kab kaha, sagai kab hui, shaadi kab hui, sab bhool gaya par kiss nahi bhoola!!! 😆

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I am pretty much serious... 🤣

Be it the Navratri flashback or the Chudail track flashback, the terrace kiss was present in each and every flashback... 🤣 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Ab FF Hain. To thoda creative liberty to hum le hi sakte hain. Original sequence mein to AE bhi nahi tha. To aisa karna ki Ansh Majnu banke bethe rahega aur AE Ji Neha ki naam leke saare kaarname bayan karenge! 😈

Of course!! Creative liberty to le hi sakte hain... 😈 😈 😈

So, here Ansh is sitting in his room like a Majnu and AE is kheenchofying his taang as well as listing his kaarnames?? Quite interesting...

Although, I just realised while reading all the stories posted earlier that something similar to this idea of a convo between Ansh and his alter-ego has been written with the alter-ego being replaced by Ansh's Davansh side...

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

I am pretty much serious... 🤣

Be it the Navratri flashback or the Chudail track flashback, the terrace kiss was present in each and every flashback... 🤣 🤣 🤣

🤣 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Of course!! Creative liberty to le hi sakte hain... 😈 😈 😈

So, here Ansh is sitting in his room like a Majnu and AE is kheenchofying his taang as well as listing his kaarnames?? Quite interesting...

Although, I just realised while reading all the stories posted earlier that something similar to this idea of a convo between Ansh and his alter-ego has been written with the alter-ego being replaced by Ansh's Davansh side...

Yeah!

It was a story posted by mistofheaven I guess. He/she was simply brilliant. Really loved his/her one shots specially the DV-Ansh one. I wish, in the show they had given such explanation regarding why a Daivik comes for a Davaansh. Because technically a Daivik is the source of white/light magic while a Davaansh is or the Dayaanvanshi side is pure evil.

There was another member called dmegha. Loved her shots too. She started writing one post leap and it was amazing. But then she got vanished and there was no update. 😒

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Yeah!

It was a story posted by mistofheaven I guess. He/she was simply brilliant. Really loved his/her one shots specially the DV-Ansh one. I wish, in the show they had given such explanation regarding why a Daivik comes for a Davaansh. Because technically a Daivik is the source of white/light magic while a Davaansh is or the Dayaanvanshi side is pure evil.

There was another member called dmegha. Loved her shots too. She started writing one post leap and it was amazing. But then she got vanished and there was no update. 😒

Yes the same one... I really enjoyed reading that conversation between Ansh and his DV side. The Navratri episode OS was damn hilarious...

I wish they would have given an explanation as to why does a Daivik always come for a DV. GM said that Daivik and DV are made for each other... But they never told why. Just let us assume that a Daivik can save the DV from turning evil.

There was one more member, Annie... She had started one FF named 'Hidden Powers' and had updated two chapters. It was also really interesting... But she left the forum very soon...

And there was another member named @iamjapi... She too started one FF named 'You Are Mine' but she also left after seven chapters.

You see, this is the reason I was so apprehensive about writing stories.

Because even if there's one reader of my story, I feel I would be obliged to complete my story. The customized one that I had written for my friend, it had 24 Chapters and now when I think about it, it was indeed a big risk to start writing at all. 🤔

OSs are much better in that regard. 😊