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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kriya_12


Most of the books paint her in that light , but say what u read

It was long thing what you want to hear"?

"There's in book I heard the relation between Jahangir with her was warm but because of her son she end up losing her home again. Mean same cold walks build up cause of Amer sided with His son To rebel.

You know I happen to come to know she was poetess and artist to she was very skilled being Rajput was well aware of many thing which Mughal empress didn't ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kriya_12

wonderful pieces one after other....๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

("Thank you ๐Ÿค— so much ๐Ÿค— take a ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผbow kriya ๐Ÿ˜ for such a long โค๏ธ warming review ๐Ÿ˜ƒ)


in this story you play with lot of shades , different characters , different mindsets , complex situations .

(Yes โ˜บ๏ธ you're right ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ absolutely this one is mix of many things ๐Ÿ˜Š).


i would like to start with the war u showed in rajputana where jalal uses maan singh . it was just so mind boggling . the perspectives that came in light , what man singh goes through....its emotionally draining . the realization with which he has to live , i felt so bad there , very cruel fate . from heart i just truly abhor the circumstances around it & off course jalal then....๐Ÿ˜’

(Awe ๐Ÿค—so relatable kriya I understand your feelings ๐Ÿ˜ณthis is what I feel ๐Ÿ˜’whenever I read about our ancestors and find others People talking against them as if they're the one horrendous people their struggle their emotion nobe bother about it at all ๐Ÿ˜’. To glorify one you needn't to demean other๐Ÿ˜Ž but in this century we're doing this only ๐Ÿ˜’ we idealise those who fought till end, while let go of those who made a pact to preserve, even though one who fought till end struggle as well, so other who made pact struggle to ๐Ÿค“ but no one we pull in category of traitors, ๐Ÿ˜’other we pull on category of brave and patriot๐Ÿ˜Ž result we are again divided ).


jalal's assasination attempt , another trouble & testing which the couple had to pass , went well but offcourse some uninvited troubles.... ๐Ÿ˜›, loved the way jo did it with full grace & managed it well infront of court...very queenly & fully admired by her king who definitely supports her like no other & let her lead with no interference.

(Well written kriya ๐Ÿ‘ so true ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ @underline are best ๐Ÿ‘ I wanted to see such a thing in JA series without hearing long long lecture from Jo or watching Ja being fooled around ๐Ÿ˜Š alas EK nevertheless that's past here I was while writting such part was afraid of one thing what if, while making jo as queen to show her shades I end up sidelining Jabut then it turn out well and no obe find him weak ๐Ÿ˜ณ).

then their hush hush affair....ok its not so hush hush anymore.....๐Ÿ˜†

right from the game part , ohh so emperor plays those gamess.....๐Ÿ˜ฒ

& in the ending oops..., so this time he lands on someone else & the camphor smell(i love camphors) turn him on to some different level....๐Ÿ˜†

very well written.....๐Ÿ˜ณ

(@,bold underline I love it to โ˜บ๏ธ well yes they did play those games for the sake of their own sanity of kids they had besides if we can see Ja turning horse for sake of Rahim later on Aram then why not to make him play aankh Michauli๐Ÿ˜‰ very well said it's not longer hush hush love they're very open about the affection they have in heart for each other ๐Ÿ˜Ž I am glad๐Ÿ˜ƒ you enjoyed their moments thank you ๐Ÿค—).


now the latest one , well u covered it very well with different psychs of different people . i may not feel anything for queen mother but i felt for ruqs the one u wrote....i forgot asking with memories or love ...ohh it was so strong , women ahh how many delicacies they have to suffer . her life has its own tragedies & she just lived her with the manual rules never tried stepping out of it to keep it going her position is powerful , her husband is powerful but also he is a piercing personality , his likes r not ordinary or like his predecessors . he is unique & this trait he searches in his companion . never bending attitude , taking her stand , strength , intellect , sharpness , bravery , valour & the possessiveness is all what jodha is , & all her traits hv always managed to hit right across his heart . this attraction has been in such a way that he was obsessed with her , a very strong emotion he has for her which he never determines to let go of . two beautiful people , strongly attracted to each other strangely share a very burning chemistry . jodha's fears around him are all very justified , very convincingly you're showing she has accepted him , fallen for him in similar ways but she is still understanding the dynamics not yet called the marriage perfect or being goody goody to all despite of their attitude & behaviour she is dealing with them all so far very meaningfully . but there is still long way to go & the best part is jalal is totally there & he truly loves & feels for her strongly .

("Oh my my my ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜you had wrote so much๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ and everything so well ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘that I am speechless what to say back over this but there's few thing I will like to say yes you're undoubtedly absolutely right over your analysis about Ruk this is how I shaped her here ๐Ÿ˜ณand this how well you understood her ๐Ÿ‘ she has lost her parents at young age, moulded to become empress at hands of Dowger Empress, one who herself never look apart from law rules and regulations won't teach same to other ๐Ÿ˜Š so here Ruk is more a law keeper then a law breaker at demand of time for her it's easier to obey and continue having things lawfully in certain manner then endure the Hassel of going against anything she happen to deal with rest of women get to advise emperor was enough but now the actions of her husband had her out in tough position and she happen to go in very low point ๐Ÿ˜’. Underlined is what I to wonder as well, how much they have to suffer what they had done to endure things as such and then get judge for the same even thinking make me feel revolted . But I love the way you had wrote on own about Ruk๐Ÿ˜Š Ja ๐Ÿ˜Ž Jo ๐Ÿ˜ณ how they all are what connect the three of them, what make their relation stood out how they so convincingly find solace with each other. Most importantly your review answer the why of Ruk why not she why Jo why ja did what he's doing, cause he's more then one could predict upon even coming so close Jo still get her guard up whenever he look stressed ๐Ÿ˜‰this is what s person can do to you by his love ๐Ÿ˜Ž Ja is spoiled by choice and he's isn't one to bound by anything this Ruk knew from start hence she never really dare to oppose him assuming he may end up using her argument as excuse to stay away, and her not opposing made him take her for granted ๐Ÿ˜’ but with Jo it's different cause she's she a fire which cannot be understimate at all ๐Ÿ˜‰ she's oppose him become challenge to him, and a men of dare he want to win in the process he happen to come way do long to turn back now he's in love happen to experience things he never felt with others. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ result two of them are quite happy in little word but end adding fuel on fire evoking insecurity and fear in others heart ๐Ÿ˜Š).


coming to queen mother , huh ....hamida is trying to do something which is gaining control of her son , she is not as smart as she thinks before her son might gave full weightage to her words which surely surprises me but now its different . jalal is the king & being king he has to be beyond her especially when she is biased . she is closer to ruqs , salima cannot tolerate her...& jodha can see through her so she is left with ruqs , unfortunately ruqs gets tangled because queen mother is not really beneficial for her & maham was offcourse selfish & greedy plus smart controller . but the real reason for hamida is definitely the lineage thing the truth laid out in last for which she has to hang on ruqs....

(Again๐Ÿ‘ you penned down Marvelously ๐Ÿ‘all the reasons of Hamida side ๐Ÿ˜† she's biased she's turning out controlling freak insecure mother๐Ÿ˜† who fear to lose control over her son at hands of Daughter in law ๐Ÿคฃ she have her own past , there's like you know fear people are, what I went through I won't let my family went through at all type ๐Ÿ˜‰ here she doesn't want Ruk to go through when she had as well she does possess fondness for her first DIL. But it's not enough to suppress her own motives ๐Ÿ˜ˆ. nevertheless two points are worth notable from your side ๐Ÿ‘ first one - Salima cannot tolerate her , Jo can see right through her ๐Ÿ˜Žso she's left with Ruk second one - pricely cause of Lingege ๐Ÿ˜ˆSo in way she care about none but her own self๐Ÿ˜Š her character is little complicated ๐Ÿ˜†

But see how everyone's life rely over Ja ๐Ÿ˜ˆat end of day who is so unpredictable and boundless persona himself ๐Ÿ˜Ž he doesn't gave heed to Maham forget about other ๐Ÿ˜†

at one part they all know they cannot rule over him. ๐Ÿ˜‰ yet they try Ruk lost hope to get Hamida didn't Jo didn't even at her hating mode she never gave up, then now she's in love she won't dare to give up at all again there life are very shady complicated which could be handled sensibly ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


jodha feels the vibe , & just not like her but never disrespect the lady in court thus giving no chance to the queen mother , she has a better control on her actions . hamida needs to fast understand or she will end up loosing her son's respect as well.

(Yes ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Jo does know what to do ๐Ÿ˜‰ she's shrewd women here behind four wall's she express her emotion to Ja but outside she act opposite ๐Ÿ˜Ž now what Ja as son as husband will think๐Ÿ˜‰ see how even by honouring Dowger Empress by accepting her present ๐Ÿ˜ƒshe ended up belittling her before Ja ๐Ÿ˜‰and Hamida doesn't even know yet ๐Ÿ˜† @ bold underlined that's what I was heading at ).

Thank you ๐Ÿค— thank you๐Ÿ˜ so much ๐Ÿค—fot such beautiful well analysis review over story ๐Ÿ˜ณthis is best๐Ÿ‘ you had penned down about plot about character their depth of understaning issues their action upon demand of time๐Ÿ˜Ž all of it which take me days to penned down๐Ÿ˜† you did within such short span of time in few long para ๐Ÿ‘ and how awesomely ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜you had done it's remarkable ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ thank you Kriya thanks allot my dear ๐Ÿค—

Stay safe๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ take care ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

It was long thing what you want to hear"?

"There's in book I heard the relation between Jahangir with her was warm but because of her son she end up losing her home again. Mean same cold walks build up cause of Amer sided with His son To rebel.

You know I happen to come to know she was poetess and artist to she was very skilled being Rajput was well aware of many thing which Mughal empress didn't ๐Ÿ˜†

since u put a ๐Ÿ’” so i wanted to know why
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kriya_12

since u put a ๐Ÿ’” so i wanted to know why

It was cause she was subjected to loneliness hatred humilation๐Ÿ˜ญ just for having different faith belonging to different clan and obeying her own family for accepting enemy ๐Ÿ˜ญ the difference between family didn't let her get warm to her husband much๐Ÿ˜’, later on difference between her son and husband didn't let her get peace either ๐Ÿ˜ญ and even handling the bussiness and doing many thing she lost her strength to even mend ways between son and father ๐Ÿ˜’

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Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

It was cause she was subjected to loneliness hatred humilation๐Ÿ˜ญ just for having different faith belonging to different clan and obeying her own family for accepting enemy ๐Ÿ˜ญ the difference between family didn't let her get warm to her husband much๐Ÿ˜’, later on difference between her son and husband didn't let her get peace either ๐Ÿ˜ญ and even handling the bussiness and doing many thing she lost her strength to even mend ways between son and father ๐Ÿ˜’


By any chance is this book - the moghuls by alex Rutherford .

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("Thank you ๐Ÿค— so much smiley31 take a ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผbow kriya ๐Ÿ˜ for such a long smiley42 smiley27 warming review smiley4)



When is the next part coming ?

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(Awe smiley31so relatable kriya I understand your feelings smiley9this is what I feel smiley13whenever I read about our ancestors and find others People talking against themsmiley18 as if they're the one horrendous people their struggle their emotion nobe bother about it at all smiley13. To glorify one you needn't to demean othersmiley16 but in this century we're doing this only smiley13 we idealise those who fought till end, while let go of those who made a pact to preserve, even though one who fought till end struggle as well, so other who made pact struggle to smiley23 but no one we pull in category of traitors, smiley13other we pull on category of brave and patriotsmiley16 result we are again divided smiley29).


Some unsolved issues & will remain so , but we r oldest civilization a fact needs to be proudly remebered & celebrated.. .

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(Well written kriya smiley32 so true smiley20 @underline are best smiley32 I wanted to see such a thing in JA series smiley42without hearing long long lecture from Jo or watching Ja being fooled around smiley1 alas EK nevertheless that's past here I was while writting such part was afraid of one thing what if, while making jo as queen to show her shades smiley42 I end up sidelining Jasmiley44but then it turn out well and no obe find him weak smiley9


Now i want to read next

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@,bold underline I love it to smiley43 well yes they did play those games for the sake of their own sanity of kids they had smiley42 besides if we can see Ja turning horse for sake of Rahim later on Aram smiley42 then why not to make him play aankh Michaulismiley2 very well said it's not longer hush hush love they're very open about the affection they have in heart for each other smiley16 I am gladsmiley4 you enjoyed their moments smiley14 thank you ๐Ÿค—).

I meant the climax of the game....๐Ÿ˜†

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("Oh my my my ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜you had wrote so much๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ and everything so well ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘that I am speechless what to say back over this smiley42 but there's few thing I will like to say yes you're undoubtedly absolutely right over your analysis about Ruk this is how I shaped her here smiley9and this how well you understood her smiley32 she has lost her parents at young age, moulded to become empress at hands of Dowger Empress, one who herself never look apart from law rules and regulations won't teach same to other smiley1 so here Ruk is more a law keeper then a law breaker at demand of time for her it's easier to obey and continue having things lawfully in certain manner then endure the Hassel of going against anything smiley14 she happen to deal with rest of women get to advise emperor was enough but now the actions of her husband had her out in tough positionsmiley14 and she happen to go in very low point smiley13. Underlined is what I to wonder as well, smiley44 how much they have to suffer what they had done to endure things as such and then get judge for the same even thinking make me feel revolted smiley18. But I love the way you had wrote on own about Ruksmiley1 Ja smiley16 Jo smiley9 how they all are what connect the three of them, what make their relation stood out how they so convincingly find solace with each other. Most importantly your review answer the why of Ruk smiley42why not she why Jo why ja did what he's doing, cause he's more then one could predict upon even coming so close Jo still get her guard up whenever he look stressed smiley2this is what s person can do to you by his love smiley16 Ja is spoiled by choice and he's isn't one to bound by anything this Ruk knew from start hence she never really dare to oppose him assuming he may end up using her argument as excuse to stay away, and her not opposing made him take her for granted smiley13 but with Jo it's different cause she's she a fire which cannot be understimate at all smiley2 she's oppose him become challenge to him, and a men of dare he want to win in the process he happen to come way do long to turn back now he's in love happen to experience things he never felt with others. smiley4 result two of them are quite happy in little word but end adding fuel on fire evoking insecurity and fear in others heart smiley1).


Exactly

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