Tangled | ArShi FF | Thread #2 | Ch 19 | 20.11 | Pg 13 - Page 15

Can we contact writer?

Hey!! Waiting for this from so long.....

When will you update?

This is one amazing story... Waiting for the next update...

hey,, its been 3 months now since you last updated..

are you going to complete story or not.. as u stopped at such crucial points..

waiting for your revert

Hi Dear,

Are you OK?

We are concerned about you.

Cheers.......

Hoped to find more on this forum but alas... Do you plan to take this forward? Please let is know

Hello!! Hope you are Ok.. you haven't updated in a long time.. While we all await for you to come up with new chapters eagerly, I want to let you know that I have enjoyed this story most of all.

I like the fact that in this story, you have made the FL khushi completely in control of her life.. she is not bullied, thrown around and taken for granted. Instead you have made her strong, independent and totally capable of making her own decisions and also seeing them through.

I wish we had more FLs like the one in your story. I had loved the chemistry between the leads on the show, but didnt like how our FL was treated throughout the show.

Secondly, you have portrayed the chemistry between the leads in a very realistic manner. Loved the texts and the gradual move towards the relationship. It does happen this way between two people, at least in metro cities! I am sure nobody falls in anybody’s arms like shown in the shows😊

keep going! Hope you update soon. But more than that, i hope you are OK.

Meanwhile, if anyone has any recommendation for arnav-khushi ffs with a stronger FL character, please pour in..

Originally posted by: Sweetypu

Hello!! Hope you are Ok.. you haven't updated in a long time.. While we all await for you to come up with new chapters eagerly, I want to let you know that I have enjoyed this story most of all.

I like the fact that in this story, you have made the FL khushi completely in control of her life.. she is not bullied, thrown around and taken for granted. Instead you have made her strong, independent and totally capable of making her own decisions and also seeing them through.

I wish we had more FLs like the one in your story. I had loved the chemistry between the leads on the show, but didnt like how our FL was treated throughout the show.

Secondly, you have portrayed the chemistry between the leads in a very realistic manner. Loved the texts and the gradual move towards the relationship. It does happen this way between two people, at least in metro cities! I am sure nobody falls in anybody’s arms like shown in the shows😊

keep going! Hope you update soon. But more than that, i hope you are OK.

Meanwhile, if anyone has any recommendation for arnav-khushi ffs with a stronger FL character, please pour in..

This is one of my fav stories, but I have given up hope of it continuing anymore. Hope the author is doing good :)

I am not sure if you have read One Day At A Time by Sohni. Khushi there is same way. Sohni has removed the story but now she is uploading it one chapter at a time again. Also there is spin off with Arnav’s daughter which is magical. If you are looking for strong female leads that where you go :)

Link to both stories is below.

https://sohnionedayatatime.wordpress.com/

https://sohnibluedust.home.blog/

Thanks ScarletNiki!! I will surely look up the suggested FF. As for this ff(tangled) i might do a re-read, and see if at any point in the story i would want the story to go another way. Not intending to hurt the author’s sentiments or flout the forum rules.

Originally posted by: ScarletNiki

This is one of my fav stories, but I have given up hope of it continuing anymore. Hope the author is doing good :)

I am not sure if you have read One Day At A Time by Sohni. Khushi there is same way. Sohni has removed the story but now she is uploading it one chapter at a time again. Also there is spin off with Arnav’s daughter which is magical. If you are looking for strong female leads that where you go :)

Link to both stories is below.

https://sohnionedayatatime.wordpress.com/

https://sohnibluedust.home.blog/

Niki..

Being with Sohni n the gang,I m sure u've read The River runs through it..

Have u ??

Fauzi..