Vitis Delight - ( The grey OS) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

I am speechless

Such a beautiful way u write it..

OMG I loved this gray shade Ani ....he has so many layers

He did right with Mini ...

So delighting to read it..even Boni accepting it n loving it..

omg this shade of ani how ruthlessly ...its treat for us....

Boni is so tempting n its good n different that she is not so shy n has her own desire....

loved boni n Ani moments its ☺️

do write more...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Rudhita Uffff 😳


Nancy 🤗 damn this os is amazing!! 👏

Thought, I can't imagine Ani in grey shade but the way you penned was like fab!!! this reminded me of a thought "Good guys are not always good" 😉

I've have ever read of a grey character and for me this is a great story concept of "grey" in which Ani is darker and mysterious too!!!

I like the way how he spontaneously agreed to bon who he is (evilness or righteousness)"I couldn't get the perfect word though"It is a delicate balance.

Last part ☺️

P.s love your writing nancy!!! Keep writing more 👍🏼

Looking forward to your next OS,SS,FF

Even for me , getting Anirudh here needed guts. I love him the way he is, but I won’t be surprised if he turns a bit like this in future - all the hardships make you a bit that way !

I am just so happy that you and all others are accepting this with such an open heart !!

Thank you !!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: bhshre95

Its amazing👏 i just love this grey anirudh so much😳 He has this dark and mysterious aura around him.

Loved his interactions with mini and bondita ( especially bondita☺️) Enjoyed reading it so much, you are really a wonderful writer⭐️ please write more

Weekends are so boring without the serial and your os just made my day⭐️

Thank you so much dear !!!!

Weekends are seriously a disaster - but I am happy that I can do something !

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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Laalchi_Reader

OMG what was this 😱

I'm still in daze and surely not getting over it soon.. This is such a brilliant piece of writing let me tell you you are a wonderful writer who knows how to maker her readers glued to the story.. All the while reading the update I was having my mouth open and every now and then butterflies dancing in stomach

This shade of aniruddh is just so appealing and attracting and it's just because of your convincing writing I didn't had any difficulties in imagining it rather I could clearly picture this gray aniruddh in my head sitting in his den like a lion

Loved the explanation about being gray that no one is completely white or black we all are grey lighter or darker..

Aniruddh and bondita's conversation left me all mushy mushy.. I mean tell how to get over this aniruddh who can't leave a chance to make her wife go red with his suggestive talks.. "Call me aniruddh... " Not only bondita but I too felt something 😌

Bondita clearly stating her displeasure towards saudamini was really soothing to read and aniruddh all set to do more damage to her ahh I love it..

Now I please request you to soon come up with a new story.. Very soon

Till then I will keep reading this gem

Love

Laalchi reader


@bold: thank you so much !! I am still amateur as a writer - but seriously readers like you are the real motivation !

@italics: yeh to Anirudh Babu ka jadu hai #fangirls🥳

@underline: glad u liked it !!

@underline and italics : tell me who didn’t feel anything - god Ani and his amazing aura !!

@boldanditalic: love you too dear !!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Simply W-O-W 👏

I LOVED IT. IT WAS SO LAYERED AND WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY 👏

Glad u like it !!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Past1

🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 all the best for ur upcoming works yaar


Thanks dear !!!

Honestly I love your suggestions , keep them pouring

And obviously this os is credited to you !!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

I am speechless

Such a beautiful way u write it..

OMG I loved this gray shade Ani ....he has so many layers

He did right with Mini ...

So delighting to read it..even Boni accepting it n loving it..

omg this shade of ani how ruthlessly ...its treat for us....

Boni is so tempting n its good n different that she is not so shy n has her own desire....

loved boni n Ani moments its ☺️

do write more...

Thank you so much for accepting this so whole heartedly - I am obliged !!

Regarding Ani and Bondita - I enjoyed writing them - and I am happy that you loved reading them !

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

What are you Nancy? You're truly amazing. Your works are just simply superb. I am speechless😳. You're such a novel writer. The usage of words, narrations of scenes, elucidation of emotions were just outstanding. You're one of best writer here and one my favorite. Keep writing dear. Love reading your novel musings ❤️


You're like an Artist who gives a portrayal to the Art of magnificent minds. 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Home786

What are you Nancy? You're truly amazing. Your works are just simply superb. I am speechless😳. You're such a novel writer. The usage of words, narrations of scenes, elucidation of emotions were just outstanding. You're one of best writer here and one my favorite. Keep writing dear. Love reading your novel musings ❤️


You're like an Artist who gives a portrayal to the Art of magnificent minds. 🤗

Thank you so much dear !!

Praises coming from you has always been a pleasure !

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Loved it

The way you write them is so passionate and endearing

Awesome os

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