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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: zalima

Anjali đŸ€—

Holi milegiâ˜ș

Lekin tumara agar mann kare toh tum b kuch hume holi dose de sakti ho

Hum mana nahi karnege

holi ka baad mein sochenge filhaal to mere dimag mein neil ki backstory ka idea chal raha hai😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: anjali0111

holi ka baad mein sochenge filhaal to mere dimag mein neil ki backstory ka idea chal raha hai😆

Waah..tu b back story lekar aa rahi hai đŸ„ł

Kya hoga ?.

Mera 007 â˜ș

Ya kuch out of the box PB style mein?

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Posted: 6 years ago
#73

hii friends


I know i said that i will write something about Neil's backstory but after seeing todays episode I am very happy and relieved and I trust that Mineil are going to be fine chaahe jaisi bhi situation ho. so I came with this drabble. Here I didnt mention exactly what is neil's past. this drabble focuses on what will happen when his past is revealed.



-:DRABBLE 3:-

Mini was pacing in her room agitated at the thought what will happen when Neil will leave her. Yesterday they had holi party in the colony and she had made lots of plans for it but it all got ruined. Neither she nor Neil could have guessed that Neil’s past will come into light like this in front of everyone. After Kammo filed a FIR against Khatri he blamed Mini of ruining his married life and was hell bent on taking revenge from Mini and she still didn’t know how he got his hands on Neil’s past but he made it public to defame Neil and he also brought Mini’s name into this by pointing finger on her character for having alleged affair with Neil.


Neil who was everyone’s favourite suddenly got cornered by everyone from colony including Mini’s family members. They were putting allegations on him. Hurt by all this and more importantly hurt by the thought that because of him Mini’s name and reputation is also at stake he had declared that he will leave the haveli in the morning. Dadu had also slapped him in front of everyone. Biji and Naeem bi also questioned him about his intentions. Mini tried to explain everyone that whatever happened with him in the past was not his fault and he didn’t cheat anyone by hiding anything. He had told Mini everything the day he decided to confess his love. But nobody listened to her. He was waiting for Mini’s response. Mini was shocked first to know about his past but then she had placed her trust on him and decided to stay by his side no matter what. She has fallen head over heels in love with him and wanted to confess her love but then she decided she will do it in grand way on holi but that Khatri ruined everything. Neil was so hurt and was packing his bags to leave Haveli in the morning. Mini was thinking how to stop him. She cant let him go. She cant lose her love like this.


Mini went to Neil’s room. She knocked the door and Neil opened it. Mini looked at Neil, it was evident that he was crying. Mini’s heart broke seeing him like that. She tried to wipe his tears but he caught her hand, “I don’t need your sympathy.” Said Neil wiping his tears himself. “Its not sympathy, its love
.my love for you Neil.” Said Mini as she hold his hand. Neil looked up in shock. He was waiting to hear this from her mouth since the day he confessed his love but now it doesn’t matter any more because he would be leaving this house and her in the morning. He had suffered a lot because of his past and he didn’t want its fire to engulf Mini also into its darkness. “Mini, please don’t say anything further. I am going tomorrow
..away from you. You should also move on in life and find someone who is worthy of you and not comes with the burden of past.” Neil tried to explain. “Neil Oberoi, tumhe jaana hai to jao par mujhe kisse pyar karna hai kisse nahi ye tum mujhe nahi bataoge.” Replied Mini angrily. Neil looked at her in wonder, what was she made of? after all this she still dared to love him back. Mini continued, “What do you think of yourself? Only you can love me more than your life more than your happiness more than anything in this world? You are wrong Neil Oberoi. I can love you even more than this and my love possesses that courage to accept you with your past.” Mini said confidently.


Neil was overwhelmed by Mini’s love declaration. He couldn’t believe that life which was so unfair with him once has given him such an angel like Mini who loved him to such an extent. But he cant take advantage of her innocent love like this. With him she would not get anything but humiliation and taunts from society. He cant be that selfish. “Mini, you don’t understand what will be the repercussions of your decision. Please stay away from me and let me go.” Said Neil as he felt fresh tears coming in his eyes. “You don’t understand Neil what will be the repercussions if will stay away from you
.I will not be able to live and I know you will also die without me. We both need each other. Like you always supported me now I want to stand by you in your difficult time. We are into this together and we will face every hurdle together. Have trust in our love” said Mini as she tried to step forward into his room but Neil stopped her.


“Ek bar aur soch lo Mini, ye dahleej paar karne se pehle. Ye sirf ek dahleej nahi hai ye wo lakeer hai jo samaj ne hamare beech khichi hai. Isko paar karke mere sath khade rehne ka matlab jaanti ho na?” said Neil as he tried last time to persuade her to leave him. “I know Neil aur main sab sehne ke liye taiyar hoon
..tumhare liye
.apne liye
..hamare pyar ke liye.” Said Mini with determination.

“Society ki ungliyan uthengi” said Neil

“Parwaah nahi” replied Mini.

“Tumhare apne bhi tumhara sath nahi denge” said Neil

“Zarurat nahi kisi ki jab tak tum sath ho” replied Mini.

“Logo ke sawaalo ke jawab dene padenge, ladai ladni padegi puri duniya se” said Neil

“Itna kamjor nahi mera pyar ke chand sawal jawab se darr jaye aur duniya se apne liye to hamesha main ladti aayi hoon is bar tumhare liye sahi” replied Mini.


Neil couldn’t find any excuse anymore but then he warned her, “I love you so much aur main tumhe khona nahi chahta. Ek bar tum meri duniya mein aa gayi to phir main tumhe wapas nahi jane dunga khud se durr” he tried to scare her away as a last resort. “Neil Oberoi, tum chahoge bhi tab bhi mujhse peechha nahi chhuda paoge” replied Mini as she smiled at him amidst her tears.


Finally Neil moved backwards in his room from the door making space for Mini to come in. He extended his arms to welcome her in his world and she came inside his room closed the door and happily ran towards him throwing herself in his arms.They kept hugging like giving each other solace and courage. They didn’t know what tomorrow holds for them but whatever it is they will fight it together.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Brilliant writing Anjali. I loved each and everything thing about this and I hope we get such kind of scenes in show .SouNoor will shine ❀

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Posted: 6 years ago
#75

Anjali you are relaxed just like Mini in FF after meeting Ashok.Am so happy finally our Anjali is back đŸ€—

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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Nice update

Mini neil ko support kare ye to chahiye hi hame đŸ€—


By the way Neil ki back story se arya pe kya asar hua

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Brilliant writing Anjali. I loved each and everything thing about this and I hope we get such kind of scenes in show .SouNoor will shine ❀

Thanks

After yesterday's episode i am hopeful now...getting postivie vibes😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Anjali you are relaxed just like Mini in FF after meeting Ashok.Am so happy finally our Anjali is back đŸ€—

Yes i was so worked up after that locket precap

But now i am fine😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Nice update

Mini neil ko support kare ye to chahiye hi hame đŸ€—


By the way Neil ki back story se arya pe kya asar hua

Thanks

Neil ki back story kya hai ispe ek separate drabble banta hai

Is wale mein sirf mineil par likhna chahti thi.....arya ke reaction ki space nahi thi


Waise ab har koi janta hai ki jo bhi neil ka past hai it involves a woman but maine to ek bahut hi whacky si zalima style ki story soch rakhi thi😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Thanks

Neil ki back story kya hai ispe ek separate drabble banta hai

Is wale mein sirf mineil par likhna chahti thi.....arya ke reaction ki space nahi thi


Waise ab har koi janta hai ki jo bhi neil ka past hai it involves a woman but maine to ek bahut hi whacky si zalima style ki story soch rakhi thi😆


You are spoiling @zalima more đŸ€Łshe is first of all out of control and you motivate her more đŸ€Ł

Edited by N_sharmaa - 6 years ago

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