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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

Very beautifully written..


🤗🤗Thank you so much😳 I am glad you like it 😃


Love the way jodha handle the poison related situation.. she is truly a campanian of life. I love this commanding jodha instead of sacrificing jodha.. both leads are so strong so commanding..

"Yes they both are strong headed couple 😉 I didn't wanted any of them to be sacrificial lamp or Lecturer 😆 and I am so pleased to know you're liking the commanding cool persona of both of them 😃 thank you so much 🤗🤗

The way you have woven the character of Man Singh is praise worthy.being a rajput his hesitation, his delimma his reluctance to kill his clan shows his maturity his far-sightedness..I love this Man Singh ,he is truly a gem.How wisely he thought about their position in History.. is true..

"Oh my I am so ❤️by this thank you so much 🤗for liking Maan part this way and putting word about him in comment 🤗 whenever I think about Rajput my ancestors I always find the people to be very against them expect few all of them discarded by them 😒 I wanted Everyone to once at least little bit think from their side to 😊specially people who lost everything just to fight for their own 😳 i read even though the brave-heart Son of Chitthor soil Maharana Pratap fight till his last 😎 his son later on after long time shake hands with Mughal so what that made him"? Hence Keeling this thought in mind I try to penned down this by Maan side and it's make me so happy to see you appreciate this 😃


Rashmi as a writer your growth is tremendous, your imagination power is so strong.. please keep writing and update ASAP..


I am so glad to know you enjoy this work so much 🤗🤗Thank you 🤗🤗 your words mean lot 🤗 I will keep it in mind 😳 and about updating well exam are nearing so I need to focus there though 😆but I will try thank you🤗 once again😊 for your kind review 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

🤗Thank you 🤗 keep reading 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

I have started reading once again. I have found following extract super engrossing and giving clear idea of jodha state of mind. Yes she is confused over her feelings little bit. She hate him hardcore but there is something between them. She is having clear idea abut his possessiveness and but not getting any his harsh and hurtful behaviour.


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How can he do this every damn time one minute he will act as if no one can care for her as much as he do and other minute he will act as if no one can hate her as much he do. Why he is so confusing why their relationship is so complicated why every damn time she want to avenge the humiliation she went through cause of him but she do nothing. Why it's so damn difficult for her to see him as her husband her partner she can't deny if she wish to live peacefully in Mughal harem she had to make a peace with him, No one support her no one pleased by her being here)."

Jalal is so extremely possessed towards her. Ya it's suffocating for her but she is the solution to his vulnerable state of mind. He just crave for her little move towards him. His confession of feeling are sometimes diehard romantic.

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If even claiming to hate the person you show gut to protect him with your life", "I wonder what would be limit of you claiming to love"! By the way nice try but I ain't letting you get out of my hold not even death can do us apart"!


What makes these 2 character immortal in our hearts is mystery. Answer to that is never ending. Ur story is one of the reason to think abt them in different manner. Sometimes fiction teach u a lot. Thanks.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreerane_79

I have started reading once again. I have found following extract super engrossing and giving clear idea of jodha state of mind. Yes she is confused over her feelings little bit. She hate him hardcore but there is something between them. She is having clear idea abut his possessiveness and but not getting any his harsh and hurtful behaviour.


"How can he do this every damn time one minute he will act as if no one can care for her as much as he do and other minute he will act as if no one can hate her as much he do. Why he is so confusing why their relationship is so complicated why every damn time she want to avenge the humiliation she went through cause of him but she do nothing. Why it's so damn difficult for her to see him as her husband her partner she can't deny if she wish to live peacefully in Mughal harem she had to make a peace with him, No one support her no one pleased by her being here)."


Oh my 😲 you're re-reading it 😃 oh Lord I am so happy not only you're re-reading it but finding it enjoyable like before thank you 🤗 for giving it another try 🤗 and again pointing out what you appreciate the most 😳 thank you 🤗 now coming to your point about Jo is very right and appreciable cause you're right 👍🏼 and analyse it very Expertily 👏 specially @Bold lines 👏 and this line of update was mean to speak her side her own vulnerability to not able to understand him completely 😊knowing she have to accept himcause he's the only one she can rely on in the place of people disliking her 😊 ofcourse that was phase when she hated him like anything, but his action confused the hell out of her 😆 and this still confused her not his action his ways then the circumstances of life after whatever you write about it I am left with nothing much to explain😆 cause you had wrote and understood very well 👏


Jalal is so extremely possessed towards her. Ya it's suffocating for her but she is the solution to his vulnerable state of mind. He just crave for her little move towards him. His confession of feeling are sometimes diehard romantic.


"If even claiming to hate the person you show gut to protect him with your life", "I wonder what would be limit of you claiming to love"! By the way nice try but I ain't letting you get out of my hold not even death can do us apart"!


"True again 👏 well said about Ja person and Effect Jo have or she can have😎 if she paid attention on him like he wants but she cannot understand what he wants on her own😊 he needs to vocal or expressive about it which he do but that's end up confusing her more 😆 cause then he say something else, do something else, show somthing else 😆 the never ending push pull make situation complicated for them and mysterious for readers 😆 there's saying "sometime one meeting is enough to know the person for eternity"! And sometime even years aren't enough"! Same goes for These two here 😉 but I am so glad slowly as the story go on the way I am unreveal their charachter working on them 😊is enough to make you all not only Understand them connect with them but hook up to them as well 😃this is truly a one of important success for me to know about it😳 by you all thank you 🤗


What makes these 2 character immortal in our hearts is mystery. Answer to that is never ending. Ur story is one of the reason to think abt them in different manner. Sometimes fiction teach u a lot. Thanks.


"You're absolutely right"!👍🏼 The fiction work with intention to purely entertain 😊held a motto to teach as well"! 😳However now that motto seems lost 😆 but I am truly delighted by your words here cause it's show it's at least have that motto and it happen to teach as well I am happy how much you're enjoying and loving Jo Ja characterization here🥳 the complexity of their character and mood swings their action infact you truly found this story to be mysterious cause of Charachter and plot 😃which make me aware I succeed in hooking all of you to this work of mine 😃 thank you 🤗 so much 🤗

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So much 🤗 for giving it another try

For investing time to write about it

Thank you 🤗 truly you ❤️ me🤗

Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Wow, Jo hat keine Ahnung, tolle Wendung!


Sehr schöne FF.👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago

Der Kommentar ist für das Kapitel 12😊😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Germanina

Wow, Jo hat keine Ahnung, tolle Wendung!


Sehr schöne FF.👍🏼

du bist deutsch "?

sie hat keine ahnung "! über was"?🤔

Freut mich dass es dir gefällt😳

ich danke dir sehr 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Germanina

Der Kommentar ist für das Kapitel 12😊😉

Okay, 👍🏼ich verstehe jetzt, danke für die Antwort. Ich war verwirrt😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey..may know which language you two are speaking in..
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: A.RTian

Hey..may know which language you two are speaking in..

"German my dear" 😳

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