Akdha FF- A tale of ice and fire Chap 10: Part I 03/22/2020 - Page 24

Originally posted by: ygayathri9

Ur story is really interesting and amazing

thankyou, here is the update..enjoy..

What a chappy....👏👏👏

I totally enjoyed the whole build up , the way jalal toughened himself for the deal , got as conceited as he could....😛, but anything for the safety of his girl .

Your bharmal , i really appreciate you for the awesome characterization . It was one of the best bharmal i hv come across....👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

By each chappy am loving ur story more & more ....😃

This part was totally delightful after last tension filled ones , with some light on the truth . Abdul decoded all things in a moment when calmed , while jo hmm ja has started dropping hints....ohhh am so loving it .

Originally posted by: kriya_12

What a chappy....👏👏👏

I totally enjoyed the whole build up , the way jalal toughened himself for the deal , got as conceited as he could....😛, but anything for the safety of his girl .

Your bharmal , i really appreciate you for the awesome characterization . It was one of the best bharmal i hv come across....👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

By each chappy am loving ur story more & more ....😃

This part was totally delightful after last tension filled ones , with some light on the truth . Abdul decoded all things in a moment when calmed , while jo hmm ja has started dropping hints....ohhh am so loving it .

Thank you so much..glad you liked the chap..n yup I totally agree..last few chapters were a tad bit intense and felt really heavy with so much of treachery..so I thought let's get done with this heaviness once n for all..I would love to keep the tone lighter at least from Jalal's perspective even if Jodha remains adamant...wondering how I'm gonna work on their banters..should be fun 😛 for me to write n you guys to read..

Originally posted by: sm1308

Thank you so much..glad you liked the chap..n yup I totally agree..last few chapters were a tad bit intense and felt really heavy with so much of treachery..so I thought let's get done with this heaviness once n for all..I would love to keep the tone lighter at least from Jalal's perspective even if Jodha remains adamant...wondering how I'm gonna work on their banters..should be fun 😛 for me to write n you guys to read..

I would love to read next parts , ur vision....the way u intend the characters & their manners .

For now it was relieving to see some lighter tone in jalal but he is a Emperor , responsible for all , hv to be hard where & when required .

Whereas jodha , she is dealing with her shocks & realization , ferocious as she is so is her temperament...😛 would love to see how u will manage her .

I seriously don't know what to write.... With the 2 updates... U have made me speechless... I think comments from my end will not justify how the story is taking its shape... If the wait is long to get such updates... Then dear writer... I am ready to wait for eternity to read the further chapters.... Marvellous 👏.... I couldn't comment on the previous chapter as I was busy.... I am Addicted to your writing, your characters portrayal, the emotions everything is bang on.... Ohh I just can't stop saying "so, when is the next update...? “ 😆

Originally posted by: PBDcrazy

I seriously don't know what to write.... With the 2 updates... U have made me speechless... I think comments from my end will not justify how the story is taking its shape... If the wait is long to get such updates... Then dear writer... I am ready to wait for eternity to read the further chapters.... Marvellous 👏.... I couldn't comment on the previous chapter as I was busy.... I am Addicted to your writing, your characters portrayal, the emotions everything is bang on.... Ohh I just can't stop saying "so, when is the next update...? “ 😆

Hey thankyou so much...it always feels so very good to have your msg :)..Thanks again that you liked the chapters..I so wait for you guys to drop in your reviews..kz thats the only way I get to know whether the written chapter met expectations or not..so again, cant thank you enough for the motivation you provide..n as far the update goes, probably by next week for sure :)

Originally posted by: ImmSamuel

Wow, wat an interestng pieces of act. İ felt alive y reading it

hey thanks tonnes :)

Originally posted by: A.RTian

Your story really amazing...loving the plot very much..update sooner...

Hey thanks!

glad you liked :)