ArAnya SS: Raabta chapter-1 updated pg 3

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Hi guys, i am.not a great writer but just wanted to try something. Plz tell.me your honest reviews so i can improve.

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It was a night like every night but still was different. Millions of star embracing the sky. There they both were standing at balcony sipping warm cup.of coffee and staring at the star. She turned towards him overwelmed with all the feelings which she felt, with moist eyes finally gathering courage to.speak, tightly squeezing railing with her hands, closing eyes, taking a deep breath she turned towards him.

Arjun ji !

Hearing his name, he turned towards her. His soft ,deep.eyes used to.make her weak.

Mujhe kuch kehna tha

Kaho

Vo mein

He started noticing her eyes filled with so many emotions

She finally spoke with her voice breaking

Looked him in eyes

Vo mei.. mein apko pas..

She finally realised what she was going to say nd stopped .

For who would want to spoil such a pure and beautiful realtionship.

She turned around with tears in her eyes.

Vo mujhe na bahut neend aa rahi hai

Good nyt!


She ran and left him wondering what it was she wanted to say! What it was for girl who never lies lied !

He pondered as he saw her retreating figure.


Will they ever be able to step close? Or will they be caged in these unsaid emotions

What does future hold for them?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow Aranya first SS ....it's simple and beautiful❤️ ....plzzz do continue soon ....eager to read ur version of ArAnya love story ❤️❤️

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Beautiful written..

Plz do continue

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Okay. I'm really excited rn.

Please do continue soon

Puneett is ❤️

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Beautiful piece of writing

Please continue

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It's awesome.want to read more.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Plzz continue 🙏

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Sorry i am late just got busy with my duties

Will update today

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ziva01

Wow Aranya first SS ....it's simple and beautiful❤️ ....plzzz do continue soon ....eager to read ur version of ArAnya love story ❤️❤️

Thank you,.sorry for late reply

Was busy with duties

Will.try to.update today

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaurirane366

Beautiful written..

Plz do continue

Thank you

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Originally posted by: Guneet80

Okay. I'm really excited rn.

Please do continue soon

Puneett is ❤️

Thank you, will update today

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