Okk guys.... Introducing a small piece written by our dear friend cute.manasi on Jodha-Jalal's most anticipated suhaag-raat. Needless to say how much honored I was to see someone imagining and writing their own fictions based on a fanfiction written by me. No writer can ask for a greater award than this. Thank you Manasi again and again and again...❤️
She sent it to me before the marriage wala chapter came up; I wanted to post it but she threatened me. After persuading her again and again, at last just now she is ready to share this with you... 🥳(Because she wants you all to be happy with something till I come up with another chapter that is actually taking life-time 🥱) She is indeed a great friend. And a great writer as well... She hides it very well, but it is very much evident in the following piece. (I am afraid that you will be demanding her writings instead of this poor girl from now on.🤣) Okk... kidding, but she is great!
Read it, enjoy, comment, send her good wishes and nudge her to write many more fics like this.
And you people also can surprise me with some of your stuffs like that... Come on guys... 😎
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[ Jalal and Jodha both got to know everything during the wedding but kept their emotions in control , maintained the exterior self . ]
While when the wedding is done & after the music programmes when he has to join his bride offcourse he was waiting for that waiting to get back to poornima to start from where they left , to solve the unintenional mystery thus keeping his delighted self in check he gets into the kheema , sees his love sitting on bed in her new bridal custom but as he gets near the bed he notices something shining under her veil he finds it recognizable but she is clutching it very hard to herself as he nears he realizes & gets completely overwhelmed . Taken by this old sentimental emotion he sits near her , softly nudges her by taking her name finds her shifting from him... understands her coyness & wariness hence wishes to add the lovingness more but this time to his shock .....she throws her veil like a lightening & he receives a strong punch on his ribs from her one hand & with her another hand she has set her target on his neck.....ready to attack him with his own khanjar which he so fondly kept in her hands many months ago .
GOSH …
No his throat would not hv slained but surely a great slash on his cheekbone …anyways kudos to his brilliant reflexes . he is saved for now , no not really he soon realized as he focused on his sinless bride ..his fortune , his hope . he knew this look that same valiant look from the flashes of past .
the unflinching eyes which he saw that day as well when he was leaving her in outskirts of amer because she found out his false & considered a deception on his part but only for some moments because soon she withhold her trust back on him , that terrific connect they had…where there can be no misconception.
& that will happen today as well… he will make sure of it , The determination in him was back .
Undoubtedly ,The dangerous clash it was…
Here the intensity of the action & reaction led to a beautiful accident , when their hands striked in a perfect momentum , the deep long tresses of jodha which were fixed in a heavy bun , ornamented in a fresh mogra flowers & exotic rosebuds …could not bore the sudden mighty blow & gave up to the flows hence came cascading down , scattered those lovelies & along with the enduring fragrances , adding more to the moment .
As he continued looking at her , he noticed the changes like the sparkling big nath replaced the nose ring she wore before , signs of the married women that she is now . a complete splendour infront of him in all her finery , all his…a soul he desired with all his heart came to him in the strangest ways of destiny . the innumerable yearnings from innumerable days of their separation had bore him this fruitful moment , he had to be careful ….very cautious while treading this path as this leads to his most personal sanctuary . toughest it will be , as the king & lover both hv to step in & make it right before he could glide in with her towards his dreams , same dreams which appeared unattainable to him some moons back . as his mind kept pondering jubilantly with the latest developments between possibilities & past , his eyes under more scrutiny kept reading her….her ferocity , the same dilemma is returning on her & she cannot hide it from him , now this is his opening , his chance ….
As his lips parted to begin & before he could be heard even , she beat him then & there with her clear one word shriek
CHEATER!
Cheater...
Did u call me….that ,
Wow…thought jalal ,
okk it will begin now he really needs to be patient & sharp witted .
if am a cheater , then what u will call yourself…poornima bai
NEVER say that name again…came the instant warning , as she breathed again .
FIRE is what she is exhaling now , every fibre in her body is burning .
yes she is burning , that blazing which kept company with her misery in all these months when she was silently suffering in the walls of her room of her own palace . she used to think nothing could be worse than this , she has touched the extreme now nothing can pain her anymore than this but , she was mistaken there was more which had the potentiality to break her , to kill her or turn her insane .
after the deposition she faced in the hands of her brother , she was essentially fallen . only two wishes were left either she gets to do something useful for the motherland or , in the light of the love of her creator & admirer she closes her eyes for forever . with this same dagger she fell into the memories of her Chandrajeet & kept soothing her soul that day until her father came .
she said what her heart felt about the miseries of her state , what she would willing do for her land & for her father . she accepted his request though the pain pierced her , but it was unknown to her very soon he will come with another request .
now that ,
that was something which was enough to shaken her all spirits , & ditch her conscience .
any rebuttal , ever forming could never reach to her mouth as her own willingness for the sacrifice & painful past months strangely numbed her . as her elder brother Kunwar Bhagwaandas had enough till then with trembling vexation just put his hand on her shoulder but never voice any word & left the room showing his strong dissatisfaction with the setting , after speaking some more her father too left .
how dastardly fated .
coming to present , as she squirmed & thinks again what he just said …Poornima Bai
ha ha ha …(giggled she)
so Jahaaan panaaah , likes poornima bai …waah!
HUH …what is happening to her
In the tension he strangely twisted her hand which was already in his captivity , making the grip of her hand on dagger loosening & the special dagger lost himself from his captor couple’s hold & found himself taking its place on ground but before clashing with the side stool thus making a heavy sound .
TRR..rrrr…
Sudden sound made both of them coming to actuality , strong distaste her face was turning into from the strangely amused features that she posed before & she does not want his touch one second more , pain of her heart is enough she don’t wish to bore any physical signs . jalal comprehended his unintentional folly & immediately tried rubbing the discomfort on her wrist but she will not let him . she started pulling her hand back fiercely with all the emotional hurts overpowering her yet he is not done didn’t showed any signs of leaving .
Stop poornima … he dangerously began ,
I told u not to UTTER that ….she wildly reacted
ENOUGH BEGUM !
A momentary still , from both sides one has great anxiousness & madness while another has turned authoritative now . she has halted he really needs to begin now
U can taunt me again , I will hear it
I wish to hear it but understand one thing its not only u who is bearing & u were never alone in this hell which is every second burning ur heart .
A momentary still , from both sides one has great anxiousness & madness while another has turned authoritative now . she has halted he really needs to begin now
U can taunt me again , I will hear it
I wish to hear it but understand one thing its not only u who is bearing & u were never alone in this hell which is every second burning ur heart .
But stop now !
see am here , u here . we both r there
our miseries , our yearnings have finally took us to each other . we hv won , can’t u see…
yes we won , everything was meant to be…
our meeting ,
again meeting , your coming to me with my needs , quenching my yearn , our constant discovering of each other , & irrevocably falling for each other
all predestined
then the parting
but the hearts who have already taken possession of each other could ever loose ?
two pools of honey eyes freshly filling up he saw , & strong but slow turning of her head from right to left & then again left to right , is she denying ….
WHAT r u denying , r u trying to disbelieve it all .
No stop this grievance , I tell u ….look here , as he clutched her side face with another hand but she removed it instantly without letting him get any more feel of her if only she could remove her captive hand as well . more closer they hv got in this push pull but none intentionally made it , its just one action led to other .
His touch she cannot bear , FINE… but she needs to know the facts .
Again his hand made his way to her hand because he cannot see her tearing so hard , he has to make it fine between them .
Why r u doing this to yourself ..
My jaan , am here …ur chandrajeet . u know mee , I..
NOOOOO……
Another trick , again cheating
U do it whenever ur game is up , am not falling for it (sobbing heavily now)
POORNIMA
AM NOT POORNIMA ….NO NO NOOO!
To his shock she just dashed herself in the bed covering her head with the bolster & really whimpering in pain .
ALLAH… he cannot let her doing this to herself , one hand still in his hold he wished to soothe her with his lips , almost brought them to her knuckles but stopped , she will scratch him …she is no more in her rightful senses ,the strong women he knew has still not emerged something has caused her so acutely , that she has lost all her strength now . her emotions r all over , world might hv not understood her but he will always be there , though he is greatly disturbed with her state something he cannot just let go as his mind is now strongly registering her reaction , the deep down hurt & with every doubt he is really finding it tough to stop himself , with her helpless rage even he is becoming helpless .
Again he went near her & before he could pull the bolster , she shifted but her hold became more tight .
Ziddi ,
Shehzaadi u’re totally ziddi , & I feel like am dealing with the tough little girl .
But u’re my girl , a slow small smile carved .
I can sense ur despair , & there is lot more than just being hurt with the revelation but I will not press u anymore FOR TODAY .
But very soon u’ll speak , everything will be shared . you’ll hear me , everything I hv to say . it’s a divine blessing of our lives , an exquisite dream of ours which cannot be put to trash my jaan .
Afterall its one life to live , its our duty to live it as fully as possible & cherish the memories , he completed tenderly looking at her .
He lied then & there , she so near to him . his hand still holding her , both of them lying horizontally on their wedding bed , he closed his eye quietly , trying to vision a better tomorrow , a relief for his strained eyes & slowly he let her hand found its way on his chest .
As he was in his thoughts , it struck to him why her hand is so at ease no reaction , has she..
He got up , stretched himself towards her only to realize the exhaustion has finally pushed her to sleep & she dozed off...
As the dawn breaks , her eyes opens . she rummages the room , realizes herself covered in blanket & resting rightfully on bed but she did not rested like this .
She has been laid & covered by HIM .
He…he did ,
Arrghh…again , as she regain her composure she saw the dagger kept on the bed stand .
Where is HE , again she tried checking the surroundings but no sign of him
Fresh wave of relaxation passed her , as the mind & body were better . surprisingly that after such a dramatic turn of events still she could sleep so soundly , that her eyes opened only in the dawn .
Maybe she needed this . a fresh mind to understand things & accept the mysteries .
He is the emperor , shehenshah of Mughal sultanate . the famous invader , she fell for him & now married to him , still this new info is not going better with her .
Chandrajeet … who was he ?
As she again revisits the past & the points which kept bothering her then made a point now . he was successfully hiding it all , there were hints always but she could never believe it .
Now , what will she do ? how to deal with this , last night still echoing in her all the details but she was too feeble , broken , had no control … Too bad ,
but its already done , she needs to get her cue from there . his expectations were similar to the Mathura day , but he knew his real identity is unleashed infront of her now hence he had been cautious .
she cannot trust him , he did what he did now she will do what she has to do , lot of emotions she burst out already , without care . he was soft , then authoritative , then loving but ultimately optimistic , he is trying to make it all fine by his terms & used the power of convincing .
BUT AM NOT CONVINCED .
Oh king , u think just because u had the emotional control on poornima u will get jodha too in ur games ..no way .
U hv got lot to prove , & lot to justify before I come to decide about us .
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