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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update. Let’s see how Arnav is going to fulfill his promise. Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Khushi used his own words against him. Nice going.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: freezie


Array Yaar, hum tho tujhe par fida hogae hain!

Your compliments, you analysis are just absolutely amazing and on point!!! It is scary, because as I was reading your comment, I thought many she read my mind. How did she know that. How did she figure that out. I was honestly in shock.


As for the shairi, I am now a fan of your writing! May I use this????


You are being very kind. It's only because I read the story in one go that I could see what I did :D


Of course, you're welcome to use the verse :)

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: CHERUKURI9

Nice update. Let’s see how Arnav is going to fulfill his promise. Waiting for the next update.


hehe. lets see what he does, or doesn't do. or tries to do. hahahah.. too much confusion. I know

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Posted: 6 years ago


Aww thanks. Any suggestions for what you want to see, or any concerns with the plot. Just let me know :)

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Originally posted by: coderlady

Khushi used his own words against him. Nice going.

told you Khushi was a smart cookie. ;)


But it might be some time for her to change into a more … gourmet cookie rather than the smart dieting one. hahhaha.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi67


You are being very kind. It's only because I read the story in one go that I could see what I did :D


Of course, you're welcome to use the verse :)


you are sooo sweet. lets see what happens next ;) ….

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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 85

Arnav: That was me just being very emotional, that is all. You know I am not that emotional at all, except for when it comes to you.

Khushi: Me agreeing to this, is my way of proving this. Right. Now all I ask is that you commit to what you said. That is all. I never suggested it, you did.

Khushi was thoroughly enjoying this. She looked at him. Trying to keep a straight face.

Arnav sighed. He had to get khushi to understand him, but how? He had an idea. He looked at her and raised his eyebrow. He gave a seductive smirk to her. She looked at him, her smile was gone. Her eyebrows furrowed. The look on his face had her concerned. He let go on her shoulders and slowly started to advance towards her. She would slowly take a step back with each step he took forward. Her heart started to beat a little faster. She gulped. He kept his gaze fixed and locked onto hers. He was now out for his prey!

Khushi has a small smile creep onto her lips, while he had a full smirk on his. She looked at the door of her room and noticed that it was closed. She looked back at him. He kept looking at her with one raised eyebrow. She kept on walking back until she hit the wall behind her. She looked over her shoulder, eyes widened. She gulped. She held onto the side of her kurti. She looked at him, He smiled and closed the distance between them. He took another step closer, until he was not against her. No air could pass between them. She looked to the side, and sucked in her bottom lip. He just looked down at her. Slowly and very gently he brought his hands up and held onto her waist. She gulped. What was he up to? He brought his head closer to hers. He slowly rested his forehead against hers. She closed her eyes. She could feel a tingling sensation start in her chest. Arnav very slowly and gently started to slid his left hand around her waist towards the back. But Aranv very sneakily slid his left hand under her kurti. Now the feeling of his hand was on her the tender skin of her back . Khushi gasped for air. Kept her eyes tightly closed and brought up her hands to hold onto his chest. He smiled, he knew the effect his touch was having on her. They hadnt been this close since the bonfire at the cottage. But he knew, he needed to tease her a bit more, before he could do what he intended on doing. He smirked gain.

While keeping his left palm and wrist in place, he started to gently slide this fingers around. Sometimes in circles, sometimes back and forth. Just enough to make sure that he could feel her heart beat increase. She knees started to weaken. She gulped. She had to keep a hold on herself. She could not let his touch do this to her. Or could she?

He slowly flattened out his fingers from his left hand and pushed her body more into his. Her head tilted a little up. She sucked in her lips. They noses now rubbed against each other. She Tightly closed her eyes. He smiled, He knew she would be hessitant. She tired to hold her lips in tighter. Biting them in. He leaned his head towards her left ear and in his husky voice whispered,

Arnav: dont worry. I wont kiss you.....

She smiled. He could fell her chest go down from the sigh of relief.

Arnav: yet...

He moved his head a little back and brought his tender lips to her soft cheeks. He closed his eyes and gently pressed his lips to her skin. He allowed for his lips to caress her cheek for some time. Now his heart was beating faster and faster. He moved his head back and placed it again against her forehead. Making sure to allow the tip of his nose to rub against the tip of hers. He slowly took his right hand and brought it up to her face. He gently and romantically slid his fingers around her neck to behind her ear. Now his right thumb was infront of her right ear on her cheek, while the other fingers curved around the left side of her neck. He moved his head towards the her right ear. She was starting to lose sensation in her legs, she held more tightly onto his shirt. Trying to keep a hold on her balance and her heart. In a slow manner, but deep husky voice arnav whispered to her,

Arnav: Khushi... are you sure you dont want me to touchhhhh. You.. anywhere....

She gulped. She closed her eyes more tightly. Keep control khushi, was all she was thinking at the moment. Dont lose control! Hang in there!...

Khushi answered in a scattered soft voice..

khushi: ggg..eeee...eeee.

Aranv smiled. He knew she was losing slowly losing control over her emotions.

Arnav: Not even with my hands?

He slowly started to rub his left hands finger on her back. Khushi leaned her head against his shoulder. She slowly started to shake her head.

“Good, now she cant talk, just shake her head, now just one more thing, and I am safe” thought Arnav.

Arnav: not even with my lipss?

With his lips parted he placed a gently kiss on her neck behind her right ear. Khushi let out a gasp of air. Her heart was pounding in her chest. Arnav slowly slid his parted lips along her neck until he reached the nape of her neck. Again he gently pressed his lips against her tender skin and placed a kiss. Khushi gasped for air even more loudly than before. She opened her eyes and gulped. She tried to move her head but arnavs right hand was holding her neck in place. She looked up. While his lips still rested on the nape of her neck. He slowly moved his head back and slid his lips back up her neck to her ear.

Arnav: Batao khushi.. not even with my lips. She gulped and closed her eyes while keeping her head faced upwards. What was she to say, he was seducing her. And he was very good at it. He always knew how to melt her heart and get her to stop thinking with her mind. He grinned.

“And in for the final touch” he thought.

He brought his lips back onto her neck, just a bit under her ear. Enough to be behind her jaw. He placed a gentle kiss. They slowly parted his lips and went into deeper and harder. Khushi held onto his shirt with all her strength. Arnav started to slowly slid his left hand up her back until he reached her mid back. He pulled her body more into his. Making sure that she couldnt move. She gulped.

“Hey Devi Maiyya” khushi mentally whispered to her self. She rolled her eyes up and closed them.

They heard a knock on the door. Arnav moved his head back and gently blew on her neck. The final blow was all that he needed to do. She gulped. They heard minta yelling from outside of the door.

Minta: Khushi,,, khushi.. Its auntys call. She wants to talk to you.

Arnav moved away and looked at her. She looked at him, but then shyfully lowered her gaze. Her cheeks were turning crimson red. He smiled as he lovingly looked at her. In his husky deep voice he asked her again,

Arnav: So khushi, Future Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada, I will ask you again. Are you sure you dont want me to touch you?

Khushi bit her bottom lip. She closed her eyes. She felt shy, nervous. What was she to say to Arnav. They hearts were beating faster.

Minta: Khushi, Your mom is on the phone. She said she needed to talk to you about something.

Khushi looked at the door. She lookedat arnav. He raised his eyebrow and smiled at her. She gestured that she had to go. But he refused to let he go.

Arnav: not without answering my question. Are you sure you dont want me to touch you?

Khushi sucked in her lips and gulped.

Arnav didnt need to ask her, ever. He had a right over her heart, and her body. Yes there were limitations, but, khushi had given him this right when she gave him her heart. But she couldnt say that. She felt nervous and extremely shy.

Khushi: Voh... I....

Arnav: I....

Khushi: like ....

She kept her gaze down. He his smile grew bigger and bigger. He liked where this was going.

Arnav: like...

khushi looked up at him. And tiptoed until she reached his ear. He leaned his head forward and held onto her waist with both of his hands.

Khushi held onto his shoulders to reach upto his ears.

Khushi: I.... Like... to.. not telling..

She giggled, pushed him back and ran out the door. He smiled and leaned forward until his forehead was against the wall. He scrunched his nose. He was madly in love with this girl, and she felt no less for him.

Khushi opened the door and walked up to Minta. She tried to control her blushing and just smiled at Minta. Minta gave her a weird look. Khushi took the phone and went over to help continue packing Mintas stuff. She started to speak to her mom.

Khushi licked her lips and tried to keep a hold on her heart beat as she saw arnav coming out of the room. She looked down and took a deep breath, trying to still keep engaged in the conversation that her and her mother were having.

Arnav came outside of the room and went and sat beside tom to help him finish with the box he was working at. Arnav had a smile on his face. And that smile was not going to disappear anytime soon. That was for sure.

Khushi finished speaking to her mother and hung up the phone. Minta came from behind her and passed her something to pack into the box. Khushi turned her head towards the right and took it. Minta's eye were left wide open. She noticed the mark on her neck behind her ear. She looked at Arnav who was busy with Tom.

Minta: Arnav...I must say.. nice job!

Arnav looked at her and was confused. Khushi looked up at Minta and questioned as to what she was referring to. Arnav wasn't really packing, he was just helping Tom, so what was minta complimenting him for?

Minta cleared her throat and shook her head. Tom was also there, and she didnt want khushi to become uncomfortable. Even though it would have been a blast to tease those two right now.

Khushi looked at her and minta gestured to her that she would talk to her afterwards. She got her phone and messaged Arnav.

Minta: Seems like Khushi forgave you.

Arnav got the messaged and was confused how she knew that. They both came together and nothing of such happened.

Arnav: yes, luckily she loves me enough. And i love her just as much.

Minta started to laugh.

Minta: I could see that, on her neck :P

Arnavs eyes were left in wide open in shock.

Arnav: What the...

Everyone looked at Aranv. He cleared his throat. He tried to look at khushi to give her the hint, but didnt know how to tell her without bringing it to everyone elses attention. He decided that he would tell her when the time was right. They all continued to work when Arnav received a phone call. It was from an old University friend of his. He got up and went outside to answer it. Khushi was a bit confused to see Arnav do that. He never did that before. To leave to answer a call.

Tom: Ok, Minta, I am going to head out, I have to do a lot preps for you tomorrow. See you then.

He went over and gave Minta a small peck. Minta walked behind him and closed the door.Minta was blushing. Minta displayed a lot emotions, but shyness was not one of them that Khushi would see often.

Khushi: Aee haii.. kya baat hai.. sooo sweet.

She started to laugh. Minta made a straight face.

Minta: Oh really, look who is talking. Me and Arnav dont kiss, Me and Arnav cant get too physical. Whatever. You are such a liar.

Khushi: What are you talking about. Me and Him, dont.. kiss. And I am a bit hessitant to get more physical. So what lie did I say? Hmm.

Minta walked upto khushi and gave a very sarcastic smile. She folded her arms infront of her. Raised Eyebrow. Khushi had a straight face, but she was confused. What was Minta talking about.

Minta: ahem...seriously. You are going to play the innocent game with me. Hey, me and Tom are close, we kiss. But at least I dont lie about it.

Khushi: Minta, what are you talking about. We dont. I am telling you, we dont!

Minta grabbed her arm and took her to her bed room. She made khushi stand infront of the mirror. And pointed at her neck. Khushi looked into the mirror and her eyes were left wide open. She gulped.

Minta just smiled, a sarcastic, your lie is caught smile.

Khushi: Hai Devi Maiiya, yeh.. Its not like that. I swear.

Minta: tell me what ever you want, but what will you say to the other students here. As you walk by the halls, go to classes, labs, meaning you hair must be pinned up and closed. What then? Hmm.

Khushi: Arnavvvvv.. arghhh.. What do I do? What do I do? Minta, helpppp..Please...

Minta started to laugh. She had never seen khushi get frustrated or annoyed. But this was the cute type. Minta sighed.

Minta: let me get my foundation. We can cover this up. Dont worry.

Minta walked out of her room and noticed Aranv walking in. She just smiled at him. Arnav stared at her.

Arnav: What.

Minta: Oh nothing, just that khushi wanted to see you, right now. In her roooommm.

Arnav raised his eyebrow and smiled. Oh really, he thought. Minta snarled and went to her room and then closed her door. Arnav quickely went over to khushis room to see her staring at herself in mirror. She was just staring at how dark the mark was. Arnav didnt knock, he just walked in. He smiled at his accomplisment.

Arnav: Kya howa khushi?

Khushi turned her head around and showed him the mark. He grinned. But immediately made a straight face as she turned her head back.

Arnav: Kya, i dont know what you are talking about khushi?

Khushi: Arnav, dont act innocent. You know what I am talking about.

Arnav just shook his head and shrugged his shoulders.

Khushi: Arnav, what am i to do now? I cant even hide this? I have classes tomorrow.

Arnav: I .. I dont know what you are talking about..

He tried to bite his lips to keep his smile down. He gulped, while she was staring to get worked up.

Khushi: I have labs tomorrow. I have to tie my hair up.

She turned the other way in anger, folding her hands infront of her.

Aranv cracked up laughing. He held his stomach with both of his hands. Bending forward. Khushi was now mad.

Khushi turned around and looked at him. She had a straight face. Last time he did that was at the cottage, and she was able to hide it with her duppata. But what was she to do in this case? How? What? Khushi went over to her bed and grabbed a pillow. She had a straight face and walked back towards arnav. He just stared at her with a raised eyebrow. She threw the pillow at him. Arnav ducked. He stood backup and stared at her. He tried not to smile, but couldnt help it. He kept on laughing. He ran out of the room, and khushi followed him. She grabbed the pillow on the sofa and started to throw them at him. He would duck or hit it away with his hands. They kept on running about the dorm like little kids. She kept on trying to get him. But he just kept on looking at her and smiling. When she had no more pillows near by, she stopped and stomped her feet back into her room. Arnav just loved seeing her all worked up. He put his hands up in the air, as if he was surrendering and slowly walked towards her. She looked at him with a stern face and her arms folded infront of her.

He came and held onto her elbows. He kept on smiling while she just sighed.

Khushi: its not funny arnav, what am i going to do. Do you know how embaressing this is?

Arnav: its not that bad khushi.

He tilted his head and used his left hand to move her hair so he could see it. She turned her head the other way exposing the mark.

Arnav: no seriously, its not that bad. Probably just a day or two. Sorry. I am really really sorry. I didnt know it would be like this.

He held onto his ears and scrunched his face. She sighed and kept a straight face.

Arnav: Sorry na. Ok fine. You can give me one too, and I will walk around the entire university with it. Tit for tat. Huh.

He said that with a huge smirk on his face. Khushis eyes widened.

Khushi: no, arnav. I am not going to do that.

She turned her face the other way.

Arnav: Ok fine you can give me whatever punishment you want. And i will not complain. Promise. I would suggest the same thing as you, but, its your choice.

Khushi looked at him with a raised eyebrow. She just stared at him for a few moments. She cleared her throat and took a deep breath.

Khushi: you have to commit to your words. You have to honour what you said. That is your punishment

Arnav: that is not fair khushi. This is just a small thing, that is a big punishment

Khushi: I challenge you Aranv, I am challenging you to honour your words, and prove that you love me. Bas.

She sighed and looked down. .She knew Arnav would not be able to do that. She took a deep breath and then looked at him again. His pleading eyes, his hopelessness.

She gave a faint smile.

Khushi: Its ok, you dont have to. Dont worry.

She smiled again and started to walk away. Aranv grabbed her arm. While looking down he took a deep breath.

Arnav: Fine, if it means this much to you, then I wont touch you while we are living together. Hmmm.

She looked at him in disbelief. Did he actually agree to this? He gave an authentic smile. With that he left the dorm.

Precap: new entry to add some spice to life, and some sizzle to their romance. ;)

Waiting for everyones detailed comments. I love reading them, they keep me going. Plus adds a lot of inspiration for writing.

Edited by freezie - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Hope the new entry is a girl who want to get close to Arnav and try to seduce him with short clothes and being touchy, clingy.....

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Posted: 6 years ago

Arnav sure has some delicious ideas! Waise, his tit for tat idea bura nahi tha ;) This reminded me of the time in the serial when Khushi had told Arnav he could thappad maro her to even things out after the mosquito scene... sigh, that look on his face and the husky "Chhodo, tum seh nahi paogi"

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