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Posted: 6 years ago
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Some big misunderstanding happened between the two.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Saiba got hurt and Veer started bleeding too. How did that happen?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandini25

Congrats for starting it again. Lovely story. Do update soon.

thanks dear for your comment means alot..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Saiba got hurt and Veer started bleeding too. How did that happen?

true love can make it happen and this love story started way before they meet in Canada.... that's why they are confused about their feelings about why they feel they know each other.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 7.

Raj I really am not hungry please don’t force me said saiba requesting raj not to force her to eat.


Come one saiba just few bites and than you can do whatever you want said raj hopefully.


Ok fine said saiba giving up.


She started to eat her and raj just kept looking at her and wished there was a way to make her like before.


What’s going guys asked saiba dad?


Just making saiba eat said raj.


That’s great how you feeling honey saibas dad asked?


I am fine dad said saiba not meeting his eyes.


Vijay knew how she felt but it was not important right now what was important was that she eats because she hadn’t eat anything for last 2 days but thanks to raj she eat a little today.


He looked at raj their eyes meet and thank you was said without a sound.


Uncle I have to go now to clinic but once I am finished I will be back ok said raj assuring.


Okay my boy be back soon said saiba dad.


Bye uncle bye saiba take care said raj.


Ya bye said saiba.


You want me to bring some more saibas dad asked?


No paa I am full said saiba.


Ok honey said saibas dad kissing her for head.


I am sorry dad about last night said saiba guilty.


It’s ok baby just don’t do it again please said saiba dad begging.


Ok paa i won’t said saiba hugging him.


Saiba from what ever you told me last night I can only imagine what would you have gone through when finding out who he was but at the same time I know how much you were happy and alive when you were with him said saibas dad sadly.


I wish I could change it paa I wish I could change the fact I ever meet him and erase him from my life forever said saiba helplessly.


I know honey but we can’t do anything about it those memories are something we can never forget said saiba dad.


What happen after that saiba dad asked?


After that things only got more serious said saiba..
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3 years ago.


You said you don’t know her veer why did you lie to me saiba asked angrily.


Yes i know her but not like that I told you she is the daughter of my aunty with whom I was suppose to live I saw her just one and last time in her home before moving to hostel said veer promisingly.


You are not lieing are you saiba asked veer?


To this veer got hold of her waist and pushed her towards him self..


You think i would lie to you saiba said veer slowly touching her cheeks.


It made saibas heart beat rapidly blushing hardly it made her think she never became so close to anyone before it should have felt wrong but it felt so warm and secure her hands on veers solid chests she was soo close to him it was barely inches away she could actually feel the breath he breathed.


Veer just didn’t wanted to let go off her she was so close he just kept stroking her cheeks which were only getting darker with her blush by the minute he just touched those big almond shape eyes the rose petal lips slowly he moved towards her lips their eyes were closed saibas heart skipping the beats when he barely touched her lips veer phone ringed. saiba opened her eyes and pushed away.


They broke apart rapidly unable to look each other saiba ran away from veer she was confused about what the hell happened. Running as fast as she could the flashes of the moment kept coming in front of her eyes but she couldn’t stop.


She went hided herself behind a tree until she could control her heart. What just happen why did everything felt so right when it should had been wrong why did veer touch made her melt in his arms why did she wanted to stay in his arms so warm so secure what if he the phone hadn’t ringed would he have kissed her noo how she couldn’t have let that happen.


Veer kept the phone in his pocket it was his mother who called he looked around the hostel and saw saiba was no where to be seen he walked a little further and sat on a bench unable to understand what happened he never felt like this with anyone a lot of girls would try to seduce him or try to attract him but they have failed badly. But not once have he tried to get near to some one like the way he did with saiba.


Not once he actually felt like holding a girl so close or try to he shook his head what would have happen if mom hadn't called just the thought made him guilty what would she must be thinking about me veer thought sadly.


Moments passed by when finally saiba was in controll over her heart saiba got up and headed to her hostel lost in thoughts she just walked silently when she saw veer who was still seated on the bench.


He must have been guilty of what happen but it was her fault too she let him get close didn’t she. She did not push him away or did anything for him to take his step back so why should he alone feel that guilt. She started to walk towards him and sat silently next to him.


She slowly kept her hand on his he slowly looked at her feeling relived but unable to say anything.


I am sorry saiba i don’t know what got into me I am really sorry I shouldn't have done that said veer sadly.


It’s okay veer let's not think about it said saiba thinking what to say to make him feel better but no word would comfort them at this point of time.


I am getting late I should go to hostel said saiba.


I will drop you come said veer sadly.


They got up and started to go towards her hostel silently. Veer was confused as she was nothing happen between them yet it felt like committing a mistake a beautiful mistake he stopped fighting his feelings but acting on them felt strange when you didn’t know what was in the other person heart. Million questions and no answer it would drive anyone mad.


They reached her hostel keeping the silence between them they looked at each other.


I will see you around ok said veer.


Ya okay bye take care said saiba said frowning

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You too take care said veer heading back to his hostel.


Saiba sadly looked at him go because he felt guilty angry because of his action and confused.


her emotions for him was water clear but it was the first time a boy took her like that in his arms and she didn’t mind but his reacting was different he felt guilty was it because he did not felt the same for her or was it something else.
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Veer was setting at the edge of the bed lost in his thoughts regretting the action. he was deeply in love with her and she thinks of him as friend than how can he stoop so low before even knowing how she felt about him. He can lose his life but not her right now life without her was useless it was as if he was just breathing but now he was actually living.


A Message came to his mobile he picked the mobile and saw it was from saiba.


Hi she Messaged.


He smiled forgetting everything else started to reply.


Hi are you okay veer Messaged worriedly


Ya I am fine why would you ask saiba typed.


I don’t know feeling restless veer typed.


You don't have too veer i didn’t mind saiba typed trying to ease his guilt.


Than why did you ran away and hide veer typed anxiously.


What was i suppose to do it was the first time when some one actually hold me like and tried too...... saiba typed blushing.


Veer didn’t had to see saiba to see those red cheeks he smiled and the image of that.


Well it was my first time too you know veer typed.


Lier saiba typed mockingly.


I know I am too hot to be ignored but I couldn't find princess snow white before in those girls I ever meet veer typed.


You did now saiba typed teasingly.


Maybe veer typed with awe.


A faint smile lighted on saiba face the happiness of being important or being loved deeply was something she desired for a long time maybe the wait was now.


Oyo princess come back veer typed teasingly.


You are to cute for your own good saiba typed sheepishly.


Best weapon to use against you veer typed grinning.


Tomorrow is Sunday going out you want to join veer typed hopefully.


Simple tour not date if that’s what you think veer typed again as if reading her thoughts.


Saiba got surprised with his answer how did he know what was I thinking confused a tour won’t be bad Canada is a beautiful place would love to check it out.


Ok deal I will come saiba typed blushing.


I would have taken you even if you said no veer typed.


Haha very funny ok now enough teasing i have some work see you later saiba typed.


Ok see you later bye veer typed happily.
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Saiba got up took her books and started to arrange them on the table since she was a lot with the on going things since she arrived she got very little time to arranged everything properly in her room. She started with the books than the wardrobe and than the rest room when the room was finished she headed towards the bathroom to clean it by the time every thing was finished she got really tired she just took shower wore her night dress and went to bed and was quick asleep.


A small girl kept running as fast as she could she kept looking at her back in fear the shadow was following her but she couldn’t be found she thought she had to hide from everyone eyes it was a promise she made.


Suddenly she stopped everything was a dark she couldn’t see anything tears dropping from eyes she felt scared she wanted to be held in arms safely cuddled but there was no one to hold her there was no where to go suddenly she heard a gun shot she screamed she felt her hands wet she thought it was because of the fear she felt numb slowly she started to bring her hands up to her eyes and she was shocked her hands were covered with blood she rapidly saw around who’s blood it was.


She kept looking around when she saw a body it was covered with shroud she slowly made her way to see who’s body it was when she got near enough the wind blow the shroud was off from the body and everything went dark the little girl felt unconscious.


Breathing rapidly saiba woke up she thought the dreams stopped after coming Canada but she was wrong it started again panting heavily she drank class of water in one go shaking badly she needed to calm down it was over everything was over it was a night mare and nothing else she got up and went to the balcony she took deep breaths with the soft breeze playing with her open her heart relaxed she looked at veer hostel direction she would do anything to see him at once.
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Edited by saiba007 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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thank you if you find any mistake or wonna give any idea feel free dear thank you.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Veer sounds like a very nice person. There must be some misunderstanding between the two.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 8.

Veer sleeping lazily on his back anyone could have guessed how lazy he was just looking around the room it felt more like 10-year-old kids room than a teenager since everything was a mess in his room.


The lazy boy didn’t even change to his PJ and half of the books were on the table half on the floor and a few on the bed the jacket was thrown away carelessly on the chair windows open and yet the prince was in a deep sleep like everything was perfect.


His phone was thrown next on the side table it soon started to ring a name Karan kept flashing and he was unaware after two attempts getting failed on the third attempt he moved slowly and reached on to his phone picked it and kept it on his ear eyes still closed set.


Hello, veer said in a sleepy voice.


Hey veer get up dad wants to talk to you Karan said.


Dad....veer opened his eyes in a flash and sat on the bed the only person in this world that could awake veer from his deep sleep in a second was his dad.


Hello, veer...


Hello dad how are you said veer tensed?


I am fine son how are you how are your studies going on veers dad asked.


I am fine dad my studies are also good said veer nervous.


and your stay is comfortable you need anything veers dad asked worriedly.



everything is fine my stay too is very comfortable don’t worry dad if I needed anything I know it’ a matter of a Message to send you said veer reassuringly.



Yes, son, it’s a matter of one message I know it’s late at night I woke you up from sleep but I had to talk to you since I didn’t for 3 days said veers dad emotionally.



Its okay dad I missed you too I glad you called said veer happily.


Ok now go to sleep I will call later or tomorrow said, veers dad.



Good night dad give my love to mom and everyone bye said veer.


Ok, I will Good night son bye said, veer dad.



The phone was disconnected and he took a deep breath as if he has won a battle talking to his dad either on phone or face to face it always has been like a battle.


The wind was coming from the balcony, he was too much sleepy to close it and it was getting a little cold veer got up and went to the balcony to close it as he was closing the door he saw someone he moved further and saw it was saiba he got confused what on the earth was she doing in this time of night standing like a statute was it really her or he was daydreaming.



He shook his head again and again but she was really there he took his phone opened his phone camera and hold towards saiba he zoomed and what he saw shocked him she was so pale like blood was drained from her face lost in thoughts she didn’t even look at his direction.


He knew something was wrong and he had to be with her but how then he saw there was a ladder under her balcony and her room was not that high he saw a chance.



He took his jacket and made his way out of the room he peeked outside to see if someone was there and to his luck no one was he went out and ran as fast as he could finally he reached the main door and grinned to see the watchman was sleeping he slowly went out of the main door and when he was far enough from the watchman he started to run again towards Saiba hostel.



When he finally reached breathing hard he looked up to the balcony, it was not high enough sure he could make it he looked around and saw the aluminium ladder he grabbed it and put it in front of the balcony he stopped and looked around to see if someone was there but no one was he started to go up on ladder.

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Saiba was in deep thoughts silently she looked in the depth of night the only thing she ever wanted was to forget or erase that chapter which was a nightmare for her it was not possible the pain and the lose both of them were making it impossible to forget.


She put her arms around her protectively and made her way to the room when she stopped on hearing something.


She heard someone panting heavily she could hear the voice but not being able to see who it was.


Deep down Saiba knew who it was but feeling like it was her imagination she felt he would disappear if she blinked after all the time she has spent with him she knew somehow he will be there for her whenever she needed him.



Veer slowly jumped to the balcony and looked towards Saiba who was in amazement as well as shocked he didn’t want her to think wrong about his entry he had to explain it to her he was here only because he was worried the sadness on her face would never let him sleep and he couldn’t wait till morning.



Saiba I am sorry for coming like this I just saw......veer tried to say but before he could complete the sentence he just saw saiba looking at him in a helpless way and with the blink of the eyes she had covered the distance put her hands around his waist and hugged him tightly.



Hold me veer just hold me tightly I am scared Saiba begged with closed eyes.


On her request veer moved his hands up and hugged her back holding her warmly he didn’t know what was wrong but he knew if saiba asked for this it only meant something was wrong and it was killing her in loneliness.


How long was she standing like this sad and broken veer thought to himself sadly and it only made him tighten his hug around her.


Seconds minutes or hours veer didn’t know how long they have been standing like this no one moved and no one tried to easy the hold. veer didn’t have any problem but he knew Saiba was trembling she was getting tired by the minute without looking at her or trying to unlock saibas hold he loosened his hold and bent down took her in his arms and made way to the room saibas hands we’re still around his neck and her face was buried in his neck.



Saiba didn’t know what he was doing and neither she cared he was here when she needed him the most and she just wanted him to stay with her.



Veer slowly made his way to her bed he gently put her on the bed and grabbed the blanket and pulled it on her. She looked at him she wanted to say a lot of things.


Veer I saiba tried to say something but veer put his finger on her lips it only made saiba blush and she couldn’t hide it from veer.


Veer smiled at her blush.


Not now sleep I am here ok said veer.


Even after being put to silent she wanted to say something but her lips wouldn’t accompany her.


Veer went to the other side of the bed and sat next to her while she lied down he slowly kept his hand on her forehead and started stroking her hair.


Saiba thanked him silently for the silent treatment he had given her she wouldn’t have had the answer if he had asked her but he didn’t he was just with her and that’s all she needed.



Saiba slowly moved towards veer who was sitting with on leg stretched out and one was folded he leaned back. Saiba slowly put her head and arm on his stretched leg while he just kept stroking her hair.


He looked at saiba with so much intense he could not stop thinking about her state and he would sit here all night if it made her feel happy but the pain she was in now it was unbearable for him to see her in.


Veer looked at saiba and saw she was asleep he just kept stroking her hair and kept staring at her.


Wishing the night would never end he didn’t know what was going in saibas life but he would never let anything harm her again. He looked at her and was relaxed to see her in peace he bent down and slowly afraid to wake her up he kissed her forehead and kept his hand on hers.

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It was 9 o’clock when saiba phone started to ring she jumped in her sleep looked for her phone when she found it she saw it was her dad.

Hi, paa said saiba.


Hi honey how are you saiba dad asked?


I am fine paa how are you and Sara saiba asked?


Both are fine I was missing you so much so just thought to call you said, saiba dad.


I miss you too dad saiba said.


you ok honey saiba dad asked?


Yes, paa everything is fine saiba lied.


Ok honey take care bye said, saiba dad.


Ok, paa bye said saiba.


She knew her dad understood her mood that’s why he cut the phone fast right now she couldn't talk to anyone for a few hours she just needed to be alone.


Speaking of alone she turned around to see veer was still there he was sleeping in the same position as he was at night. She turned around to see it was 9 o'clock she had to wake him up before sister Mary comes.


Veer...veer...veer wake up veer wake up said saiba trying to wake him up.



Veer slowly opened his eyes and saw saiba was in front of him he smiled and yawned.


Good morning snow-white said veer happily.


Till now it is good morning wait till sister Mary comes saiba said warningly.


Sister Mary why would she come here said veer alarmingly.


She always goes to every room on Sunday for inspection said saiba worriedly.


Oh shit, we are in trouble said veer.


You have to go right now veer said saiba panicking.

Veer got up and took his jacket and headed to the balcony.


Wait what was wrong with you at night veer asked frowned


It’s not the right time just go we will talk later said saiba pushing him to the balcony.


Ok..ok...ok I am going don’t be mean said veer teasingly.


Veer hurried to the balcony and reached the ladder and started to go down.


Veer be careful said saiba worriedly.


Veer just stared at her and coming up with mischief he winked at her and started to go down.


Saiba laugh at his doing and kept looking at him getting down until he safely landed down.


Veer put the ladder where it was and headed to his hostel before anyone finds out what he did. He ran towards his hostel and in a matter of a few minutes, he reached his room and closed the door luckily he escaped from the disaster that would someone some one had found out.


he went and lied down on his back on his bed breathing heavily he tried to calm down. Once he was normal the breathing eased he went to the bathroom to fresh up and change.


All this time he was lost in thoughts thinking what had really happen to saiba why was she so sad and how long was she standing there before he saw her.


He went to the balcony and saw she was standing there with someone from the outfit it looked like a nun maybe that was sister Mary so she was not wrong in panicking.


Thank God they weren’t caught veer thought and sighed.


Veer took out his mobile and Messaged saiba.


Thank you snow white for panicking if you hadn’t made hurry to make me go we were so busted veer typed.


No problem you are welcome saiba typed smiling.


If sister mary hadn’t came I think I would have been there the whole day couldn’t have missed the chance to be alone with you said veer teasingly.


In your dreams, Saiba typed blushingly.


Ohh, come on don’t tell me you were not damn happy to see me veer typed grinning.


Who said I was happy Saiba asked rolling eyes.


You are welcome but your teasing can wait now tell me what happen to you yesterday night veer typed?


Oh, that I had a nightmare got really scared Saiba replied.


What kind of nightmare veer asked.


I was having to have a dream that someone took me away from the people I love the most I was really lonely and scared I just wanted someone to help me but no one was there said saiba sadly.


I am here for you saiba I will always be here for you I promise I will never let anyone take you away from your beloved once said veer promisingly.


Saiba didn’t know what to say but she knew in her heart he was telling the truth he was really going to be there when I need him but will he understand my past saiba thought sadly.


Hey come back I am still here veer typed impatiently.


Yes, I am here you are so impatient saiba typed.


And you are so slow snow-white veer typed.


It’s Sunday let’s go out veer typed hoping she would say yes.


But where will we go saiba asked?


Hmm, let me guess we will go to some cheap store and get two wedding rings and go to some church and ask father to get us married once we are done with marriage we will come back to our hostels and pretend nothing happens and resume our studies show is that of a plan veer typed mockingly.


Saiba burst into laughter before she could reply to another message came she opened it.


Don’t have laugh I have another plan and it contains kidnapping and eloping and the third plan is to go out have lunch and explore the city have fun and come back choice is yours veer typed.


And it only made saiba laughter worse when she had control she just typed 3 and send it.


Smart choice gets ready to see you at the gate in 1-hour veer messaged.


1-hour hour why you need one hour saiba messaged.


I have a date you think it’s only fare for girls to take hours to get ready veer asked laughing silently.


Haha, very funny bye see you saiba messaged.

Some happiness are too good to last.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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u really think so😫😫😫😫😭😭😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
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thanks so much.

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