Bekarari- A Ronakshi fanfic (6) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Andy3456

Totally loved the update 💖. Waiting for the next one💖💖

Thank you Andy! it means a lot to me.

I'll come up with the next one as soon as possible! :D❤️

Originally posted by: vaidehi1306

Hi..Nainu 🤗❤️

This was fab, dear..loved and loved itttt ❤️❤️❤️

Firstly, yes the place has been Pune since the start but for the first time I was reminded of the Pune episode of Mhatre track, perhaps bcz of the rain..

Yes, I get it that searching for him in every street and that too in a city like Pune is too much but the intensity was there mahn..👌🏻😍

Glad that she talked to Veena and commissioner uncle helped 😊

Thank you 😘 for making them come back to the park, it's been quite a lot of time since they'd been to that place.. I kinda missed them being there

I love this Ronakshi..❤️ I miss this Ronakshi..😭.. their patch up couldn't have been more perfect, just loved the way Sona confessed that she loves him and can't stay without him, and that bold avatar of hers was just perfect 👌🏻😍..she was successful in igniting Rohit's 🔥🔥

Can't wait for next....*ahem ahem* 😉❤️.. update soon 😊🤗

Thank you Vaidehi for this! You really made my day.❤️

Yes! I deliberately chose Pune, for multiple reasons. Both Sona and Rohit (Although single at the time) had a horrible time in Pune for their own reasons. I wanted to take that and give it something more. Glad you noticed.

Park! This too was done deliberately. I sort of wanted to draw a parallel to the Mumbai wali park the both frequented. ❤️

Same! I miss the TV wali Ronakshi as well. I haven't been watching the episodes for the past few days. I can't take so much drama and butchering.😒

Thank you! Yes the next chapter is A rated🤪 and it'll be up as soon as I finish writing it!

Originally posted by: Pri94

I've been following this story on wattpat since day 1 and let me tell you girl, you are an amazing amazing writer . Absolutely loving how the story is going ahead . This is the much needed relief amid the show's mess. And m so glad that you are so quick with your updates .Thankyou for this

Thank you Pri! Yes! Glad you noticed the story on wattpad. The reason I posted it there was because I didn't want it to disappear with time... Like how it does on the forums.

Thank you! You don't know how much your appreciation helps me in my writing❤️

And the only KHKT I'm getting now is from my story as I'm not even watching the episodes so I totally understand how you feel😆! I just hope the show gets better... Kaash ki pehle jaisa ho jata.

I'll try to be quick with the next update as well.❤️ Thanks again for posting! Really means a lot to me.

Read all the parts. Amazing.

Please update soon ☺️

Nainaaaa... 🤗

I am sorry for A late reply again dear... I am getting caught up real baad.. I hope you understand and don't mind.. 😭😭

Ok cutting on my crap...

This wassss beautiful😍😍... Especially after reading chapter 5 ❤... I really really really loved this one.. For me this was the best chapter among all.. ❤❤💞😍😍😍

I loved how their emotions played out... Nd I lovedddd how sona took the first step to seal the deal in the rain!! ☺️Nd that's all she has just set the fire inside Rohit ablaze... Usse sach mein nahi pata what she has done.. 💕💕😍😍❤❤❤💞💘💘💘

Ok, now I believe that writing a sensual scene should be completely writers take and how far they are comfortable writing it.. Coz the more as a writer you are comfortable with it.. The more it brings out the essence of it... If you feel the slightest bit of discomfort don't do it.. (Sorry agar bura laga toh😭... I am really sorry.. Agar kuch bhi galat ya hurt feel hua toh.. 😭😭)

But it's completely your take.. ❤

Nd I wouldn't mind reading.. you know.. Rohit showing his fire.. 😉😉

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.. 😍❤❤💕💞

Update soonishh.. 💕💕💕😍

Love, hugs and tc 😘❤🤗

Originally posted by: LoveInAutumn26

Read all the parts. Amazing.

Please update soon ☺️

Thank you! I will try to bring out the next one in a few days. It's taking me longer to write for some reason...

Originally posted by: sohit-mishbir

Nainaaaa... 🤗

I am sorry for A late reply again dear... I am getting caught up real baad.. I hope you understand and don't mind.. 😭😭

Ok cutting on my crap...

This wassss beautiful😍😍... Especially after reading chapter 5 ❤... I really really really loved this one.. For me this was the best chapter among all.. ❤❤💞😍😍😍

I loved how their emotions played out... Nd I lovedddd how sona took the first step to seal the deal in the rain!! ☺️Nd that's all she has just set the fire inside Rohit ablaze... Usse sach mein nahi pata what she has done.. 💕💕😍😍❤❤❤💞💘💘💘

Ok, now I believe that writing a sensual scene should be completely writers take and how far they are comfortable writing it.. Coz the more as a writer you are comfortable with it.. The more it brings out the essence of it... If you feel the slightest bit of discomfort don't do it.. (Sorry agar bura laga toh😭... I am really sorry.. Agar kuch bhi galat ya hurt feel hua toh.. 😭😭)

But it's completely your take.. ❤

Nd I wouldn't mind reading.. you know.. Rohit showing his fire.. 😉😉

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.. 😍❤❤💕💞

Update soonishh.. 💕💕💕😍

Love, hugs and tc 😘❤🤗

Alisha!!! No problem! I'm just glad you're here.😊

I hope your parents' anniversary went well!

Thank you! I'm glad you like this chapter. I did put some effort into it.🤗

And nahiii you didn't offend me in any way. ❤️ I completely understand and agree with you 100%. I'm still not sure about what to do but rest assured, I'll post the chapter only when I'm sure that it is good enough to be read and understood.

I'll do my best to put up the next one ASAP. Take care! 🤗❤️

Read all the six parts in one go 😆

Amazing Naina 🤗 I started reading the first part and then just went on and on and completed it even🙈

Originally posted by: YoursDearly

Thank you Vaidehi for this! You really made my day.❤️

Yes! I deliberately chose Pune, for multiple reasons. Both Sona and Rohit (Although single at the time) had a horrible time in Pune for their own reasons. I wanted to take that and give it something more. Glad you noticed.

Park! This too was done deliberately. I sort of wanted to draw a parallel to the Mumbai wali park the both frequented. ❤️

Same! I miss the TV wali Ronakshi as well. I haven't been watching the episodes for the past few days. I can't take so much drama and butchering.😒

Thank you! Yes the next chapter is A rated🤪 and it'll be up as soon as I finish writing it!

You're welcome dear ❤️😘

And update soonish 😍😍

Originally posted by: roshni_az

Read all the six parts in one go 😆

Amazing Naina 🤗 I started reading the first part and then just went on and on and completed it even🙈

Thank you Roshni! I'm glad you liked it :D