FF// Untold Stories; Chapter 26 updated; (Dec 29) - Page 27

Wishing you all a very happy 2020 with loads of health and happiness! 🤗🤗

Cheers 🥂

Happy new year !!!!!! Also hoping to lowkey bump this up (promotion) and hoping for an update soon if possible!!? If you can of course.. whenever you want. It’s me being greedy.. what can i say? I lov your work! :)😳

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-JB

Happy new year !!!!!! Also hoping to lowkey bump this up (promotion) and hoping for an update soon if possible!!? If you can of course.. whenever you want. It’s me being greedy.. what can i say? I lov your work! :)😳

🤗Happy new year dammit! Update's here ❤️

Hi!

Chapter XII: Of Late Night Conversations is now up on the blog. See you there :)

In case you haven't already, here's how you can access the blog:

• If you have a WordPress account, search for 'Saucechips' in the Reader and you should be able to find it immediately.
• If you don't have a WP account, but know the address of my old blog, you can find the link posted there.
• You can also google for the name of this story with the search-words 'saucechips'/'storiesbysabi'. I've been told it works.
• Drop in a scrap, and I'll help you out 🙂

You do not have to necessarily hold a WP account to follow or comment, and can use your e-mail instead which will not be displayed publicly. Eagerly awaiting your thoughts on the chapter.

Love!

AHHHHHHHH OMG YAY YOU UPDATED !!!!! So i’m working from home today.. quickly went on the IPKKND forum, saw you updated the chapter name, grinned, read your comment to my previous comment, grinned some more, saw you legit posted an update, grinned and shook my legs on the bed upwards (i’m so bad with words but i hope that made sense LOL).. and then totally just left my laptop out and started reading the update !!!

WOW.. i never realise just how excited i get when you update until there’s an actual update! This chapter was so so good!!! Khushi is such a beauty man !!! .. so the beginning!! I thought you were talking about Arnav there until it became clear the guy is an arrogant, aggravated psycho. Reading that snippet was quite scary to be honest. I felt scared for Khushi reading it.. Shyaam slamming items, glaring, being patronising. It is so flipping scary to read.. i was scared for Khushi and i’m grateful we didn’t get a specific scene with Shyaam raising his hands on her although I don’t know whether to assume he will do so (or in the current context, he has done so already?). This also got me wondering about something else.. apologies if it is inappropriate but have they “done” it? I’m just wondering because of the wording here.. the way you wrote “another night without him” - major paraphrasing there but these thoughts did come to mind. I realise this is important to read and understand because this type of abuse does exist unfortunately but my god, it’s so daunting! I’m so glad Khushi has left him but i can only imagine what he done/does in the future.. also once again, hats off for being able to write about such a topic in such a delicate and sophisticated manner. I mean.. damn !!

Everything about this FIC makes me so protective over Khushi. I loved her chastising herself for her reaction - argh my baby! She is so precious.. and then the fact that she goes up to Arnav and rambles and lets it all out !!! I specifically LOVED the way you spoke about Arnav’s reaction and his demeanor changes.. the way he crosses his arms against his chest.. the upturned smile.. argh SO FEELSY.. ngl i wanted to continue to hear Khushi rambling. The woman is just so lovely!!!! Also crap.. i forgot to mention the most softest thing - Arnav snubbing his cigarette.. for Khushi and for her to realise that. To see that someone is modifying their behaviour/habit for her was so so soft.. and i think it was equally soft for Arnav to realise Khushi notices things about him e.g. smoking before he heads home. Again.. so cute and soft and touching .. MY HEART !!! (Also LOL at Anjali and nani’s thing !!! I concur with them tho.. also a smoking Arnav is HAWT. But totally not cool because smoking is not cool.. but hawt.. but not cool. You see my dilemma?)

I love how he couldn’t help it.. it just had to come out. “Why did you resign” .. loved it loved it loved it !!! And her “why” .. it was almost diabolical that you ended the update here LOL.. because that was beautiful and intense and i am soooo ready to read on LOL!! But yes.. finally confrontation.. or no, more so communication! I cannot wait for the next update. Ecstatic!!!!

Arnav said the right thing to her at the right time unintentionally, but it still made a difference. Khushi picked his secret santa gift. Will Arnav tell her she will be missed after she tells why she is leaving?

It's a wonderful update

Both of them have been noticing things about each other since long n also want to know more.. But quite skeptical about it.. But, again, these are untold stories.. So we get to know them slowly..

Love reading the story..

Though I am yet to start reading Prescribed Insanity.. Sitting at shop n giggling with my hubby around will not do any good to me😅, when he is not very happy abt me spending time on reading stories.. But still, will soon read it as well..

Update next soon

Love

Vandie

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-JB

AHHHHHHHH OMG YAY YOU UPDATED !!!!! So i’m working from home today.. quickly went on the IPKKND forum, saw you updated the chapter name, grinned, read your comment to my previous comment, grinned some more, saw you legit posted an update, grinned and shook my legs on the bed upwards (i’m so bad with words but i hope that made sense LOL).. and then totally just left my laptop out and started reading the update !!!

WOW.. i never realise just how excited i get when you update until there’s an actual update! This chapter was so so good!!! Khushi is such a beauty man !!! .. so the beginning!! I thought you were talking about Arnav there until it became clear the guy is an arrogant, aggravated psycho. Reading that snippet was quite scary to be honest. I felt scared for Khushi reading it.. Shyaam slamming items, glaring, being patronising. It is so flipping scary to read.. i was scared for Khushi and i’m grateful we didn’t get a specific scene with Shyaam raising his hands on her although I don’t know whether to assume he will do so (or in the current context, he has done so already?). This also got me wondering about something else.. apologies if it is inappropriate but have they “done” it? I’m just wondering because of the wording here.. the way you wrote “another night without him” - major paraphrasing there but these thoughts did come to mind. I realise this is important to read and understand because this type of abuse does exist unfortunately but my god, it’s so daunting! I’m so glad Khushi has left him but i can only imagine what he done/does in the future.. also once again, hats off for being able to write about such a topic in such a delicate and sophisticated manner. I mean.. damn !!

Everything about this FIC makes me so protective over Khushi. I loved her chastising herself for her reaction - argh my baby! She is so precious.. and then the fact that she goes up to Arnav and rambles and lets it all out !!! I specifically LOVED the way you spoke about Arnav’s reaction and his demeanor changes.. the way he crosses his arms against his chest.. the upturned smile.. argh SO FEELSY.. ngl i wanted to continue to hear Khushi rambling. The woman is just so lovely!!!! Also crap.. i forgot to mention the most softest thing - Arnav snubbing his cigarette.. for Khushi and for her to realise that. To see that someone is modifying their behaviour/habit for her was so so soft.. and i think it was equally soft for Arnav to realise Khushi notices things about him e.g. smoking before he heads home. Again.. so cute and soft and touching .. MY HEART !!! (Also LOL at Anjali and nani’s thing !!! I concur with them tho.. also a smoking Arnav is HAWT. But totally not cool because smoking is not cool.. but hawt.. but not cool. You see my dilemma?)

I love how he couldn’t help it.. it just had to come out. “Why did you resign” .. loved it loved it loved it !!! And her “why” .. it was almost diabolical that you ended the update here LOL.. because that was beautiful and intense and i am soooo ready to read on LOL!! But yes.. finally confrontation.. or no, more so communication! I cannot wait for the next update. Ecstatic!!!!

This was one of the cutest comment I have read!! 😆

@bold Very well said 👍🏼

"a smoking Arnav is HAWT. But totally not cool because smoking is not cool.. but hawt.. but not cool. " 🤣

Happy New Year!!!!

Thank you for the update. I honestly don't know how you are able to write two very different genres so effortlessly though what looks effortless I am sure is a result of all the hard work that you put in.

Coming to the update, what touched the most is the sentence " it's okay, I will be there". There are some instances in all our lives too that something somebody said would have made.your day and giving you the confidence to pull through whatever low you are going through. Khushi knew though her thoughts on the sentence were not correct, still it instilled the much needed confidence at that time.

I am so loving this chattering of Khushi and Arnav's reaction to it. Also Khushi's disbelief that somebody could do something just for her was heart wrenching.

Shyam's character is giving me dayya ho feels. Good she found a way out from that scoundrel's clutches.

How could you stop the story at a cliffhanger???😩Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Cheers!

Khushi's mind is busy conjecturing about the reasons as to why did Arnav give her those beautiful gifts..

She wants him to come out of guilt..

Her way of caring about him is so heart warming..

On the other hand,her resignation is bothering him too much..

Thus WHY??

He too cares for her..

Awwww..

PI n US..Both the stories r ruling my heart..

Sabi..

Mujhe yaad hai zara zara..

Once u write an FF where Khushi leaves RM after Shyam's fiasco ..

It was about Arnav's redemption but in his akdoo style..

He threatens Khushi that he'll eat jalebis if she won't come to his car..

I dont remember the name..

Pls share it with us