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Posted: 6 years ago
#91

Awesome part

Looks like Payal is the smarter sister

Beautiful surprise planned by Arnav

Glad khushi wore it

I want to know y the difference between Akash and others

He’s going on date is cool but what about Arshi

Didn’t they grew up in same culture

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Posted: 6 years ago
#92

They will have to be separated for a couple of years so these moments count a lot.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: rockingsoni

Awww, Arnav is such a Gentleman...

Waiting for the next part....


So sweet of you. yes ARanv is a gentleman, a true gentleman. See there are different ways of getting to spend time with your significant other, its just a matter of going about it the right way. ;)

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Posted: 6 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: anjs

Khushi is too shy.... It's a miracle that Arnav is not frustrated with her behaviour.......


HAHAHA that is very very true. BUTTTT.. I will explain khushis behaviour in the next couple of chapters. Not the next one, that deals with aranvs 'frustration' as you mentioned. The one after deals with khushis reasoning. SPOILERS ALERT!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#95


Thank you :) I love the laughing emoji!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It is the innocence that makes it beautiful.. I just hope not to lose it :S I wish to stay true to the characters and story, but all stories need to progress.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: tina_1234

Awesome part

Looks like Payal is the smarter sister

Beautiful surprise planned by Arnav

Glad khushi wore it

I want to know y the difference between Akash and others

He’s going on date is cool but what about Arshi

Didn’t they grew up in same culture


Payal yes! she is a true sister, one that eveyorne needs!

Aranvs surprise is not as much as khushis for him. She actually wore it. something that was completely against khushis character. But it shows how with time, each relation gains trust and matures.

As for Aaksh, you did raise a good point I must say. I will try to address it in the next to next chapter. just please do remind me. :S


As for the same culture, there is a nature vs. nature debate that has been going on for years and years. Sometimes the nurture may be the same, meaning environment, but all people are different. All kids to the same parents are different. Its just a matter of personality I guess. If he wasn't, then he wouldn't be this friendly with everyone.

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Originally posted by: coderlady

They will have to be separated for a couple of years so these moments count a lot.


Exaclty, they need to make every moment count! Need to make and cherish each and every memory.

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Chapter 73

Before I begin, there is a somewhat mature content warning in this chapter. I have never ever, in my entire life written something like this. So a bit nervous. :S this is not the type of writer that i am, i tend to write more innocent love content, but due to the requirements of the story, a bit more physical aspect is required. Sigh... God help me. :S

If you would like, you can put on the instrumental song of Tum hi Ho from Ashiqui 2. Trust me. It adds a lot of effect while reading this one chapter!

Arnav: We should go inside, you are already cold. He moved his hands from around her and started to walk inside. Khushi stayed there for a few moments. Light Rain drops started to caress her face. Winds started to pick up. She looked down and took a deep breath. Arnav was now a few feet away from her. She tightened her eyes closed and then slowly opened them. The next song started to play on aranvs phone. It was just the tunes for Tum Hi Ho from the movie Ashiqui 2.

She still kept her gaze down she called at arnavs name.

Khushi: Arnav.

Arnav stopped and turned around to look at her. While still keeping her gaze down, she held tightly onto the two sides of the blanket. Very slowly she started to move her hands apart and allowed for the blanket to fall down off her shoulders. Her chest was heavy heavinly. She gulped. She was nervous to say the least.

Arnav just stood there. He was amazed. His eyes were fixed on her. She wore the full black net lace sari. He just looked at her. Her petit figure was fully outlined and showing through the black net lace. He looked at her face. Her long beautfiul silky black hair flowing with the winds, and some strands gently caressing her face. His eyes slowly moved down. He looked at her lips, partically covered by some strands of hair, but parted. His eyes went further down. He noticed her neck, He saw a drop of rain slowly making its way down her neck. How he wished he was the drop of rain, that could caress her body like that. His eyes went further down. Her chest was heaving heavily. The sari was completely see through, so he would see the complete outline of her blouse. He had a burning sensation start in his heart. He gulped. He looked further down, he could see the curves of her body gently wrapped in the black lace. He looked further down. He saw her delicate hands decorated with some red bangles, and her hands tightly holding onto the blanket. He looked further down, the curves of her body were tightly outlined by the black sari. He looked up at her again. She was now biting her lip. Nervous, anxious, not knowing what was going to happen next. His heart was racing, he was taking deep breaths. The site infront of him was like a dream come true for him. How many times he had imagined khushi to be standing infront of him like this. Khushi started to lick her lips. She kept on looking down. She knew arnavs eyes were on her. She was nervous, anxious, a bit excited, but also scared. Her heart was racing. Her breathing was very scattered. She felt butterflies in her stomach. She didnt have the courage to look up at arnav. He had given her this gift, he wanted to see her in this. She remembered how she said that she also wanted to fulfil his desires. She started to blush.

Arnav started to slowly walk towards her. She was becoming more and more nervous. Her heart was beating harder and faster. His was no less. With every step he took towards her, his heart beat harder, much much harder. He stood infront of her. She became more conscious than ever. He slowly raised his right hand and with his index finger he rasied her chin. She moved her head up, but kept her gaze down. The light water drops from the rain were slowly falling on her face. She gulped. He raised his left hand and very gently slid his index finger across her forehead, moving the loose strands of her that were covering her face to the side. She closed her eyes, where ever he touched her, there was a tingling sensation there. Her hands that were holding the blanket let go of the blanket. The blanket now fell to the ground. Very slowly he leaned towards her ear, and in a soft husky voice he whispered...

Arnav: thank you...

She smiled and put her head down onto his shoulder.

His right hands that was holding her chin up, pushed her chin up again. This time his fingers were curved around the nape of her neck and he used his right thumb to push her chin up. She looked down. It was evident that she was shy, nervous and blushing tremendously. Arnav knew he had to take it easy. It was not easy for khushi to wear something like this. As much as he wanted to look at her, as much as he wanted to caress her body, he couldnt. Not yet anyways.

He smiled and then started to softly speak.

Arnav: Khushi, please look at me.

She shyfully shook her head while keeping her gaze down. He smiled.

Arnav: Khushi, i wont look at your..... I mean.. I will only look into your eyes. Promise. But for that you need to look at me. Please, trust me. I wont look at you not until you are ready.

She smiled and slowly raised her eyes. She looked into his deep brown eyes. She saw love, desire inside of them. She saw a fire in them, that only she could extinguish. He looked at her eyes, filled with love. A bit shy, but had nothing else but love for him in them. While keeping his eyes locked with her he slowly took his right hand and started to slide it across her left shoulder, and down the bare arm. Her heart was racing. Where ever he touched her, she felt sparks. He slid his right hand down her left arm until he got to the tips of her fingers. While still looking at her, he curved his fingers around to hold her left hand. He brought her hand up and gently placed a tender kiss on them. She smiled. He made sure to keep his lips on her soft fingers for a few moments, while still looking at her. He refused to move his eyes, or let his eyes wonder. Not until she was ready. He took her left hand and placed on his right shoulder. With his left hand he took her right hand and placed it on his left shoulder. He then slowly placed his hands onto her waist. Very gently and delicately he started to slide both of his hands around to her back, pulling her more into him. she raised her chest and came closer to him. She wrapped her hand around the back of his neck. They kept on looking into each other eyes.

Arnav: Dance, please?

She smiled and her eyes lit up with a sparkle in them. Very slowly, he started to sway side to side. She kept on looking at him. This moment was theirs. The light rain, the light music, and just them.

She looked down and softly whispered.

Khushi: Arnav...

He leaned in, and placed his forehead against her, slowly rubbing his nose against hers. Both of them closed their eyes.

Arnav: hmmmm.

Khushi: Thank you..

She sighed and he smiled.

Arnav: for what?

Khushi: For making me feel comfortable.

He smiled at her innocence. He took a deep breath, while they kept their foreheads gently placed against each others, holding onto eachother and dancing.

He put his head backup and lifted khushi from the waist into the sky. She looked down at him, while bending one knee up from the back. He just kept on looking at her eyes. He started to turn while holding her. He gently placed her on the ground and she turned away. He held onto her right hand with his left hand. He pulled her in and she twirled into his arms. She held onto his right hand with her left, while crossing her arms infront of her body. They swayed side to side. He leaned more forward into her and crossed his arms infront of her. He closed his eyes while he placed his head gently against hers. She closed her eyes and hugged his arms. Both of them took slow deep breaths. They swayed side to side. Taking deep breaths, they were cherishing this moment. She turned around and now faced him again. He left his right hand on her back and slid his left hand to behind her head. He slowly dipped her down. She bent one knee and started to slide down. He just looked into her eyes. The shine of the stars was nothing compared to the sparkle in her eyes. She closed her eyes and he gently brought her back up. She turned around and went two steps forward, he grabbed her right hand with his left hand. He looked at her, and she looked at him. He raised his hand and she started to slowly turn around him, twirl like a soft feather. Her hair flowed around her as she twirled around him. The saree pallo wrapping itself around her body. She stopped and looked at him. He pulled her into him. She chest came crashing into his. Her hands were on his chest. He held her tightly around her waist. He looked at her, the gently flowing rain drops that were gently caressing her lips. How he wished he was that close to her. She could see him just looking at her slighted parted lips. She sucked in the side of her bottom lips. He leaned forward, She gulped and gasped for air. She then hid her face into his chest. He sighed.

The song finished, and arnav started the same song again, tum hi ho, from ashiqui 2. Arnav wanted to ask khushi something, but didnt know how. He didnt know what to say. He moved his head to the side to her left ear. He was hessitant. She understood from the way he tried to say something, but would stop. She softly whispered to him.

Khushi: Keh dain. Jo bhi dil main hain.

Arnav: khushi, you can say no to this.

He furrowed his eyesbrows. He was breathing very hard. He gulped. She slowly raised her left hand and cupped his cheek. He needed a moment to get the courage to ask her. She knew what he wanted to ask. She raised her head to his ear and softly whispered.

Khushi: I trust you.

He sighed. He waited for a moment. The rain had stopped.

Arnav: Khushi.. Kya...

He gulped.

ARnaV: tumhay choo nay ki aur daikhnay ki ijazat hai?

He closed his eyes a little tighter. He didnt know why he asked her that. What would she be thinking about him. What would she say. Would she even say anything, would she run away. Would this bring them back to the first stage. Would she just leave, or would she say yes just because he asked her. His mind has a millions questions running through it.

She waited a moment. Her eyes were wide opened. Her skipped a beat. Her arnav just asked to touch her and look at her. All she knew at that moment was that arnav was the one that she loved the most and loved her to the most. Just like the song that was playing in the background, Tum hi ho, meri ashiqui tum hi ho. She gulped. She slowly raised her head, and gently placed a soft kiss on his left cheek, allowing her lips to touch the tenderness of his skin. HE took a deep breath. He slowly tightened his hands around her back.. He slowly raised his left hand up along her back. She moved her head back and left it rest against his chest. She placed both of his hands onto his chest. He slowly kept on sliding his left hand more up. He could feel the ribbon that she tied on the blouse. Her heart started to beat faster and faster. What was aranv going to do. He started to play with the ribbon a bit, but didn't pull it. He then pushed his left thumb under the ribbon of her blouse. She gulped. He gently rubbed his left thumb under the ribbon. His heart was racing, and so was hers. She held on tightly to his shirt. He slid his thumb out and continued to raise his left hand more up. His hand was not covering the tender skin of her back. He raised his hand more until he reached her neck. He gathered the hair that was on the left side near her neck. He ran his fingers and gathered all the hair, twisted it and pulled it to the right side of her body. Her left side of the neck was now exposed. Arnav tilted his head towards khushis face and gently placed his lips against her left jaw. He started to press his lips against her tender skin. He gently kissed her there. She started to gasp for air. He moved his head a little more down, making sure to slide his parted lips along her neck. He finally reached the bottom of her neck. He started to push his face and lips into the nape of her neck. Making sure to compress his lips against her neck. She was breathing very very heavily. She gulped. She turned her head more towards her right. He brought his right hand up and fanned it across her neck from the right side. He burried his face and lips more into her neck. He pressed his tender lips on her neck. She rolled her eyes. He was sending shivers down her spine. His heart was racing, beating harder and harder each time. Her senses were not under her control. She folded her shoulders inwards and pushed her self a little back. He kept his head down, but let go of his grip on her. She turned around. He raised his head and held onto both of her hands with his. He slowly pulled her back. Her chest was heaving heavily. Her breathing was scattered. Her lips parted. Eyes lightly closed. She rested the back of her head against his chest.

He slowly started to slide the tips of his fingers up her arms. Very gently and slowly, he was able to feel the goosebumps on her skin. He slighted opened his eyes. He looked at her. He was not under his control anymore, but still needed to make sure that she was ok. He just kissed her neck, and now had his fingers roaming her arms. He tilted his head towards her face. He noticed her eyes tightly shut, eyebrows furrowed, lips parted, and heavy breathing. She wasnt shy, she was nervous. She had no control over her emotions at that moment. He smiled. Once his hands reached the top of her arms, he slowly slid his right hand across her from the front. He made sure to just go from shoulder to shoulder. He could feel her chest rising up and down. He held onto her left shoulder with his right hand. Very gently he slid the tips of fingers on his left hand down her left arm again. She gulped. She didnt know what he was going to do, but all she did know was that today she would not be able to stop him. They needed this moment of theirs to be memorable. He would be leaving soon for a couple of years.

He then very slowly took his left hand and placed it under her saree pallo. Right onto the bare skin of her waist. She gasped for air. He started to slide his hand very hard against the delicate skin on her bare stomach. She was now breathing very heavily. He could hear her scattered breathing. He continued to move his hand across. Making sure to hold his right hand tighter onto her left shoulder, He knew should would not be able to handle it, she would need him to hold her up. He continued to push his left hand on her delicate stomach with his fanned out fingers. She wasnt able to handle it anymore. She quickly placed her hands onto of his hand that was on her stomach. She folded her shoulders inwards and bent her head down. Since her hair was already on her right shoulder, he gently placed his parted lips on her left shoulder and slid them inwards. She could feel his warm lips rub against her. As he reached her neck, he whispered.

Arna: tum theek ho?

She smiled, but didnt have the courage to say anything.

He smirked seeing her smile.

He brought his right hand back, but kept his left hand stretched across her stomach. He slowly moved all her hair to her right side. He held her right shoulder tightly and gently placed his lips on the back of her left shoulder near the nape of her neck. He first placed a gentle kiss. She gasped for air. He slowly parted his lips and started to make a mark on her.

Khushi: ssssss..

He stopped and slowly moved his head back. His heart was not under his control. None of his senses were under his control. He closed his eyes and slowly turned her around. She now faced him. her head bent down and her eyes were closed. They both didnt know what was to happen next. She sucked in her lips and gulped. Her eyebrows furrowed in nervousness. His breathing was also scattered. He took a deep breath and slowly bent his knees down. He now was kneeling on the ground infront of her. He opened his eyes and held onto her waist. He took his left hand and slowly and very gently moved the pallo that was covering her stomach. She felt a tingling sensation as his left hands fingers slid across her the tender skin on her stomach. She could sense his glare on her skin. She gulped. She felt her knees weaken. He looked at the soft and delicate curves infront of him. He took his right hand and slowly started to rub the thumb around her navel. Her stomach started to tighten and go in. Her shoulders started to fold in and fall down. Her head started to spin, She was taking hard breaths. And he was no less. She wasnt able to stand anymore. She held onto both of his shoulders. She scrunched his shirt into her hands. Tightening her grip. He stopped and looked at her. Her eyes were closed, hair falling along the side of her face. Her chest heaving heavily through the see through black lace net sari. He knew he had to try to control himself, but didnt know if he was able to. He took a deep breath and leaned his face onto the tender skin of her stomach. He closed his eyes. The side of his face was now against the tenderness of her stomach. He snuggled inmore. His lips parted, but to the side. She could feel his warm hard breaths crashing against her stomach. He wrapped his arms around her, and hugged her tightly from the back. She took her left hand and hugged his head. She then spread her fingers through his hair. They both stayed like that for a few moments. Everything was moving too fast for them, they needed to take a moment to get a control on their senses. Aranv moved his head back and slowly stood up. He held onto her waist with both of his hands. She held onto his shoulders, keeping her gaze down. He just looked at her. Both of them with their lips parted. Breathing heavily. He slowly leaned in. Keeping his eyes on her lips. She bit the side of her bottom lip. As he leaned more and more in, in a husky soft voice he whispered to her.

Arnav: Can..... We.....

Their hearts beating harder and harder. His eyes fixed on her lips and her gaze down. He slowly moved his face closer to his, and started to rub the side of his nose along hers. She slowly raised her right hand and very gently slid her soft fingers across his lips. He closed his eyes. She wasnt ready. He understood that. She closed her eyes as well. They heard a car pulling into the cottage parking. They were a little far away, so no one could really see them. After a moment, she quietly whispered.

Khushi: Arnav... We both have no control on our selvesright now.

They both sighed. He gently put his forehead against her. Her fingers still covering her lips. Their eyes closed. They had become too close right now. They heard Payal and Anjali get out of the car and go inside. Khushi quietly whispered again.

Khushi: Everyone is back. I should go inside.

He sighed and hesitantly moved his head back. Keeping his gaze down. He took a step back. He knew that if he looked at Khushi right now, she would feel uncomfortable. Khushi started to walk away.

Arnav: Khushi..

She turned to her left and all of a sudden she saw a flash. He took a picture of her. He captured her, he captured this moment of theirs. She smiled, blushed and got the blanket that she wore when she first came out. He sighed. He looked at his phone. He saw khushi. Her left shoulder faced him. The blouse ribbon at her back exposed, her hair pulled over her right shoulder, her sari pallo gently caressing the left side of her body, and her smile, a soft gently smile, while she looked down shyfully. This was khushi, only arnavs khushi.


Precap: This update took a long time. Sorry. Please do comment and let me know what you think. I honestly need some feedback on this type of writing style. Really do! Take a guess as to what happens next.


Note: I see a lot, a lot of views. Which I am loving btw! But, please do like the post at least and do comment. I wont be able to upload the next chapter for a couple of days. Will try though, but leaving for a holiday with the family. This is the perfect time for you guys to comment!!!!


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Edited by freezie - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Lovely and very romantic! ❤️

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