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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Hi haya good to see u again🤗

Both part r fabulous 😳n plz update ASAP.. I am waiting

hi lemon❤ same here yar😘 updating it after few minutes❤ TYSM❤😘

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[Chapter 15]

[WILL YOU BE MINE?]


Coming out his room he went to her and they left the mansion as it was already dusk


Reaching the house they went to their respective rooms without uttering a word

As Kritika was about to enter someone pulled her with a force and closed her eyes


Trying to release herself from the grip she wringgled in his hold


Once she was free after few seconds she saw a room full of darkness and she even cant see a single object

Getting afraid of what is fate holding next for her she started with baby steps as there was a horrifying darkness in the room


Suddenly hitting by something she fell in someone's embrace closing her eyes just then lights went on

Opening her eyes slowly meeting his gaze she lost herself in those dark brown eyes

There she saw him smiling after a long time


"Ranbir!"


"Hmmm"


"Do you also know how to smile?"


She said making that handsome smile to vanish but then came back as flashing smile 


"Yes! From the moment i saw you i know how to smile i know how to live i know how to breath"


Taking a breath he added


"And i know more than this do want to know"


He said huskly winkinh at her

Hearing his words she came out of her magical world and said 


"Shameless creature"


Freeing herself from his grip and Examining the place which was decorated with rose petals and candles she looked at him with raised brows


"What?" He asked


"What what? What is this for?"


"This is for you"


He said coming closer to her form and sliding his hand around her waist which sent shiver down her spine


"Leave me"


She said shyly


"Uff!!! Dont shy baby otherwise i will never leave you and will roam in whole house like this"


"Shutup! And leave me"


She said sternly now coming back to old jungli billi avatar as her naughty mind said to her to play with him


"I know you love me"


He said leaving her


"No i dont"


She said looking away just to stop her laugh


"I know you love me and i m sure"


He said overconfidently which made her to play more and she said


"No i dont.. take a side"


Leaving the room she smiled like a mad

He stomped his feet angrily and sat on bed making a pout as he knew her well that she is teasing him nothing more

After Few minutes of teasing therapy she came back to him with a stern face


"I know you were teasing me"


He said giving a flashing smile coming closer to her but was stopped by the action of her hand

He saw her in her eyes she was now really serious


"I dont love you as i said earlier..i...i love...i love Yash"


Saying so she left the place making him shocked

He became a statue there ...ground slipped away from his feet..he lost his balance and fell on ground with still not knowing what to do..no tears no emotions nothing just blank face..he sat there until the vase fell as his hand touched it making him to comeback from the 440 volts shock 

Tears started to form he sat on floor taking bed's support digging his face in his hands he cried and cried alot as he saw the seriousness in her face

When she was joking he knew that but when she was serious he knew that also 


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On the other side a soul  who just rejected a proposal was restless she knew he can do anything and if he is angry on himself he will hurt himself

But why is she caring when she just rejected the proposal?

She sat on bed digging her face in hands crying her heart out and remembering the past few minutes


------Few Minutes Earlier------


When she was coming back after teasing him alot

Someone pulled her inside her room

There she saw Yash kneeling down with a ring in his hand and a rose in mouth 

She stood there with a shock but came back to reality just when Yash said


"Will you be mine?"


"Noooo!"


It was more a scream than a simple no

Standing on his feet nearing her he asked her the reason of this rejection and this time she just simply said


"I love Ranbir and he already proposed me"


Saying so she turned to but her steps halted when she heard him


"But you rejected his proposal and i heard all"


"It was just a mere joke nothing more and i was going to tell him that i love him just when you pulled me in"


Saying so she again turned but stopped by his voice


"Dont do this i love you please marry me"


He pleaded just to get a simple answer


"Yash you have to understand you are my cousin cum best friend i love him and just him no one can take his place"


She said and expected that he will understand but the outcome was different 


"I will kill him if you will not marry me"


He said now giving an evil smile


"What? Yash?"


She stood there with a shock


"Yes!"


Coming closer to her as she bumped into the door he said with blood in his eyes which she can clearly see


"You rejected me because of that local goon"


She looked at him with wide eyes and he smirked


"Dont look at me with your kitten eyes i know everything about him and it will take a second i will tell your dad he will throw him out and then he will go to God and no one will enquire as goons die because of their work"


Seems like he sketched a plan from a long time and it was right as he knew she love Ranbir anyone can guess seeing their closeness and he knew he is a goon so he was just waiting for the right time to play his card


"I hate you"


Were the words came out of her throat she pushed him and ran from there and coming to conclusion she sacrificed her love just for the sake of his life


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Precap:confrontations


Well you all will get lots of romantic scene in this track😉

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I will update soon❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful update hayusmiley9

But upset for kritikasmiley19 n hate for yashsmiley7

Wo word for late.. Update soon..... 

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Posted: 4 years ago

wow!  another  beautiful update....

der se sahi par haya apne firse iss story ko update kiya dekh ke bohot accha laga...❤️

tnx a lot for this 😳

nxt part update soon...I m eagerly waiting..... 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Beautiful update hayusmiley9

But upset for kritikasmiley19 n hate for yashsmiley7

Wo word for late.. Update soon..... 

thank you sweetheart😘😘😘

Its ok...updating right now😘😘 thanks for your support❤😘

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wow!  another  beautiful update....

der se sahi par haya apne firse iss story ko update kiya dekh ke bohot accha laga...❤️

tnx a lot for this 😳

nxt part update soon...I m eagerly waiting..... 

Thank You love❤😘

Really sorry for late😛 mn studies mn busy hogyi thi thora sa...bas ab isko complete krongi pakka❤❤😘😘😘 i m updating right now❤🥰

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[Chapter 17]

[UNBEARABLE PAIN AND CONFRONTATIONS]


Destroying every possible thing in room he went to balcony

Looking at the moon with teary and pain filled eyes he questioned God


"Why me?"


Saying so he hit the fence of balcony with his hand

Crying bitterly he opened alcohol bottle which he brought with him in order to lessen his pain

Driking half in one go he slanted on fence slowly loosing his balance and fell on his knees crying like a baby boy


Kritika on other hand wasnt able to sleep so she also came to balcony 

Her heart broke into many pieces seeing the broken soul which she love the most

Nearing him with pain and tears in her eyes she cupped his face 


"I am sorry"


Was a whisper left by her after which she bent her head with shame knowing well she is the reason of his state


"Why you did this to me?"


He first whispered but then shouted 


"Why!!!!!!!!!"


Due to which she got scared


"I..i am...i am sorry"


She said lowering her gaze on which he gave a taunting smile then moved back a little and again started to drink

She pulled bottle from his hands


"Dont do this to yourself"


"Who the hell are you to rule me?"


"Nothing...Just dont do this"


Snatching the bottle from her hands he started to drink again


"I said dont do this"


She yelled on him and he threw the bottle on ground shouting on her


"So what else should i do? Dance? Or celebrate? Ranbir Kapoor your love loves someone else you should dance on this auspicious occasion"


While saying so he clapped on her


"I know you hate me"


She said as a tear drop slipped from her eye


"How can i hate you? I love you beyond my life😥 i promise i will leave everything ..every bad work.. just be mine"


He begged infront of her but of no use


"Sorry i cant"


Was a reply he got

Standing up he walked forward just to get back on ground as he stepped on piece of broken bottle


She immidiately went to him and removed the piece from his foot


"What you did?"


She said crying harshly


"Its not paining more than my heart...here"


Pointing on his heart he added


"It hurst more here can you heal it?"


He said with low tone and teary eyes

She just lowered her gaze

Pushing her a little he stepped knowingly on pieces of bottle 

She was coming to him but got stopped by the action of his hand✋


"Enough of your false care"


He said walking further on pieces


"Ranbir"


She said and was about to come but stopped by his voice


"Dont...just dont.."


He said as he walked into his room and landed on bed with aching heart mind body and feet

In the effect of alcohol he slept there


After few minutes Kritika entered his room and saw him sleeping gilbly on bed and some blood on floor which was oozing from his feet


Finding the first aid kit she sat on floor near his feet and started to remove glass one by one slowly

As she removed few he winced in pain and turned to other side

She blew some air and then dressed his wounds

Standing up she was about to leave when he held her hand


"Dont leave otherwise i will die"


He said in sleep holding her hand tightly 

Seeing his pain she sat on the corner of bed placing her head on his legs she also went to deep slumber unknowingly


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Sunrays woke Ranbir up from sleep

Adjusting himself he felt some weight on his legs looking at them he found his sleeping beauty holding his hand tightly and sleeping on his legs

A small smile escaped his lips which just came to vanish again as the events of night came into his mind

He stood up abruptly making her to wake up also


"What the hell are you doing? What do you want to show?"


He said giving death glares to her


"Nothing i..."


But she stopped inbetween thinking that if she will be soft or clingy to him he will again come to her and she cant risk his life


"You pulled me with you...your grip was tighter so i wasnt able to pull my hand back..you drunkard"


She yelled at him


"My grip was always tighter but you managed to escape then this was just a hand it was easier to pull"


He taunted her and a drop of tear rolled down his cheek which he removed immediately


"I dont want to listen your crap"


She said leaving his room

He held his head in his palms 

After gaining some strength he stepped on floor just to again fall on bed as his feet still hurts


"Who dressed these wounds? Kritika? But why will she! She hates me"


He said with a mocking smile

He wasnt mocking anyone else he was mocking himself

He somehow managed to walk and came downstairs limping


"What happened to you Ranbir?"


Balraaj asked


"Nothing Dad i just stepped on broken glass"


"Is it serious? Should we go to doc?"


"Not at all Dad i m fine"


He said sitting on chair opposite to Kritika

Eating his breakfast he left for work without Kritika


"Why didnt you go beta?"


Asked Balraaj


"He said he has some work so i will go on my own"


She said faking a smile


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On the otherhand Ranbir who was hell angry reached his den

Controlling his anger he sat on chair but then a goon came with bad news


"Boss the person which we trusted the most turned out to be a betrayer he was with opposite party"


"Bring him here"


He got the order and rushed to bring that guy who was tied with ropes

Throwing him infront of Ranbir his goons left as per order


"You know na what betrayel means...DEATH!"


he said last word more loudly

Pointing the gun on that man he was about to shoot when someone held his hand

He turned to see Kritika standing there this time with attitude


"Dont you dare to kill anyone from now on..i will not let you do this"


She said with stern face


"I m not your puppy..i m Ranbir Kapoor i live my life in my own way...dont come again ever in my way"


He said pulling his hand from her grip which she held again 


"I wont let you do this"


"Lets see who will stop me"


He said with anger filled eyes

He pushed her a little and she fell on table getting a small wound on her head

But she yelled more knowing very well he will come to her


"Ahhhh!"


And as per Kratika's plan he let the gun fall and rushed to her


"I..i am sorry"


He said holding her with arms with care and concern


"Rohan bring first aid kit"


He yelled and Rohan (his goon) brought a first aid kit he made her sit on chair and sat on next one 

He moved his hand upward to dress her wound but she pushed it away


"Dont you dare"


She said sternly


"Dont be adamant let me dress it otherwise it will hurt"


"First let him go"


She said folding her hands on her chest


"I wont"


Ranbir said with stern look


"Then i also wont"


Said Kritika


"Dont be a kid"


"I am a kid..let him go"


"Throw him out"


He shouted and his men came in to throw him out


"And you dont you dare to betray me next time otherwise i will.."


And he was stopped inbetween as Kritika placed her hand on his mouth on which he gave a questioning look


"Take him away"


Kritika said to goons and they did as ordered


"And you mister you will not even use such words"


Removing her hands he said sternly


"Dont order me i m not your servant...and i will not fulfill your wish"


He said abruptly applying ointment on wound on which she winced


"Ouch!"


"Sorry"


He said making a pout


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Precap:truth


Hope you all liked it🥰❤

Edited by HayaZehra313 - 4 years ago
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[Chapter 18]

[END OF SORROWS]


His jaw dropped down to the ground


"I m leaving"


She said standing up and left from there

He sat there with a shock until a goon came and shook him


"Boss!"


"Yes what!"


He said coming back to senses


"Boss we have to leave now did you forget we have a meeting?"


Goon said he nodded his head and went with him


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At night he kept thinking about Kritika's reaction


"If she dont love me why she cares? If she loves Yash why she dont care about him? She kissed me today if it was a short one but it was a kiss. What is happening why i cant understand anything. Why my visions are blur? GOD!"


He said holding his head with both hands

Thinking about this all situation he slept but woke up by a sound


THUD!


Feeling something fishy he went out and those sounds were coming from Kritika's room

He neared her room and heard some voices


"Yash i am warning you dont come closer"


"Kritika now you have left that jerk Ranbir dont be affraid i will give you every pleasure not like that useless"


Yash said


"Yash dont i am warning you. I left him just because of your game i dont want to risk his life. That doesnt means i love you"


Kritika said and Ranbir was hell shocked after listening


"How i couldnt understand her"


He said palming his mouth as tears slipped from his eyes

He thought to enter but heard Yash's sound


"Ok i am leaving but soon you will come to me by your own"


He said and opened the door

Ranbir hid behind wall

Yash left and Kritika fell on her knees crying her heart out😭


"Why!!!!!! Why me God?"


She shouted Ranbir who was unable to control himself went inside crying bitterly


"Kritika"


He said with a low voice

She just looked at him with tearful and painful eyes

He rushed towards her and hugged her tightly


"I love you"


He said crying badly


"I..."


But she realized what she was going to say


"Stay away. I dont love you"


She said pushing him away

He again came to her with aching heart


"I heard everything"


He said holding her hand as more tears slipped from his eyes


"Ranbir"


She said and hugged him tightly

They shared a bone crushing hug


"I will not leave him"


"Ranbir no! If he will kill you what will I do? Its better for us to stay away. Some love stories never completes"


"But i will complete ours"


He said getting up holding her hand

He sat on bed while she laid on bed placing her head on his lap


"Dont leave me ever"


"I wont"


He said caressing her hairs and then placed his head on hers

Their tears mixed as both were crying

They slept like that


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In morning Kritika woke up but didnt stood uo as his head was on her head

She just admired her crazy lover

His breath was fanning on her head

Ranbir too woke up after sometime and saw her starring at him


"Dont stare like this I may get sick"


He said standing up and got a punch

Cupping her face he said


"Dont worry my wild cat everything will be fine"


She nuzzled her nose on his


"But you have to promise me something"


"What?"


He asked placing his both on her waist


"You will leave this meaning less work"


"Ummm for that I am sorry"


"Ranbir!"


She said angrily


"How can a police officer leave his work?"


He said raising his brows and smiling widely


"What? Who is police officer? You?"


She said , he nodded his head and her eyes widened


"Why didnt you tell me earlier?"


"You never gave a chance and i enjoyed our silly fights that is why i was not in a mood to tell you"


He said showing his tongue😝


"Ranhir i will kill you"


"Kill me! I m ready to get killed by your soft hands"


He said kissing her hands


"Mr. Flirt"


She said and hugged him


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Ranbir called everyone down

He told everyone how Yash threatened Kritika

No one was believing then he showed a video which he made last night

Kritika's father called the police and they arrested Yash

Its a crime to threat someone


"He is also a goon if i am rightful ti get arrested he is too"


"What?"


Everyone together asked and looked at Ranbir while police cleared


"Not like that he is a police officer and was pretending to be a goon as we wanted to catch a criminal of underworld"


They took Yash with them

Turning towards Kritika Ranbir sat on knees 


"Will you marry me my wild cat?"


He asked and she was shocked


"Jija ji we are also present here"


Jiyu said raising her brows


"See you called me jija ji so there is no need to shy"


He said winking at her


"Di reply na"


Jiyu said


"Yes!"


Kritika said shying and everyone was happy by the decision


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After few months they got married

Ranbir said holding her hand


"We walked together we will walk together forever. I know you will always be on my side"


"And what about you"


She asked mischieviously teasing him


"About me?"


He joined his head with her and added


"TERE SATH SATH CHAL DIYA MAIN"


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The End


Hope you guys liked it❤

Finally it ended now i will take a sigh of relief as it was always on my mind that i left a story incomplete😝😛

and if there are any mistakes please forgive me as i wasnt in a mood to read it again😛

Love you all❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Both part r mindblowing hayu 😳

Heartbroken ranbir n kritika😭

Kritika confess her love beautiful part😳

N a shocking revelation that ranbir is a police officer😉

Happy ending I want more😊

N ha wo for late

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Both part r mindblowing hayu 😳

Heartbroken ranbir n kritika😭

Kritika confess her love beautiful part😳

N a shocking revelation that ranbir is a police officer😉

Happy ending I want more😊

N ha wo for late

aww! Thank You sweetheart❤❤😍😍

I am glad that you like it😘😘

I have started new one hope you like it too😘😘