~AbhiGya AT #278 ~ - Page 25

Originally posted by: columbia

we need to troll these writers ...total useless waste guys they are..don’t know potential and diamond ki parakh nahi hai,..

Sachi mein. 😡

Originally posted by: Ralulo

Precap looks better than in written version.

That shy boy doesn't look that shy when he punches Chucky. 😆

😆

Originally posted by: Abhigya.fan

Sachi mein. 😡

Please write an OS yaar..or SS or FF please

Originally posted by: columbia

Please write an OS yaar..or SS or FF please

I had written 2 fics earlier this year. don't know if they are any good but do please read.

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/198987188-kumkum-bhagya

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/200975586/write/786011786

Originally posted by: Abhigya.fan

I had written 2 fics earlier this year. don't know if they are any good but do please read.

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/198987188-kumkum-bhagya

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/200975586/write/786011786

🤗 Will start reading tonight..thanks...have been dying to read some good Hindi ones. Your Hindi is so refreshing to read.

Just remembered this scene (being in 2019 still,according to their first birth dates,one would have 35,the other 37...with big 20 years daughters 🤣)

@FKP

Read the first one. It’s very well written, you are truly a very good writer. Your command over the language is perfect. I loved your concept and idea of how she stayed back but punished him with cold treatment. I wish you had written more chapters on that angst..her coldness and his pushiness. Little bit of nok jhok in between that would have been fun to read, like maybe interplay between taking care of the babies and intimate moments - breast feeding, changing nappies, supporting his wife in front of strangers, would have been nice.

The second very very strong point you have about your writing is the way you write love making. It’s truly an art to be able to write the way you write..you have talent. My only request is have them speak in Hindi during the most intimate moments... especially since your command over Hindi is so good.

uou are a superb writer, you should write longer stories. You are too good

Originally posted by: Ralulo

Just remembered this scene (being in 2019 still,according to their first birth dates,one would have 35,the other 37...with big 20 years daughters 🤣)

Someone should post it on SM and laugh at the creatives and channel

@ FKP read your second OS. You are an emotional writer. You should write more. Really. You are too good. Pls write more and if you ahem written others pls send me links. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing, thank you so much for sharing your talent

Originally posted by: columbia

Someone should post it on SM and laugh at the creatives and channel

Well i think they already did,at least after the 7 years leap.

They showed them being in 2018,at Abhi bday party,then Kiara appeared,in the same year she was conceived and turned 7 years too. 😆 Asking for too much logic. When they can celebrate 2 Valentines,2 Holi's with Tanu being pregnant...not a problem to show a baby being "prepared",born&grown-up in the same year.