FF -Marriage of Inconv P15p12 & epilogue

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The story revolves around Jai and Bani. all characters from KS but in different roles.

Pia eldest married to Pushkar 33

Bani not yet married 28

Rano- seeing Ranveer 23

Jai Walia not yet married 34– best friend of Bani

Pushkar – younger brother of JW 33

Ranveer – same is 25

Jigyasa, Adi, Massi and all else same.

Tarun Sablok – Jai's friend and confidant

Daksh- Bani's boyfriend-

Other Characters to follow:

Chapter one.

"I am so stupid! Stupid, stupid stupid " Bani Dixit cried. Throwing the used tissue amongst the pile that was gathering at her feet. Jai Walia handed another. He sat across from her, anger rising in him.

I trusted him completely. I am the biggest fool ever, she sniffed. I am a real fool.

He is the fool Bani not you.

Then why am I here sobbing my heart out like this. Bani didn't expect him to answer. Contacting Jai at an ungodly hour, sobbing out her tale of woe, hadn't been her most brilliant move, but she needed to talk to someone and he was the first person who' popped into her mind.

Jai was the type of friend that she had felt comfortable with. They had been close ever since they'd worked together on his Yearbook in high school. He was the editor and 4 years her senior but she had the skill and art of drawing. Bani had always considered their relationship special. This was further cemented when Pia married Pushkar and Ranveer and Rano started dating.

"at least crying is better that getting drunk, which is what I did when I found out that Roshini was two-timing me", Jai admitted with a twist to his mouth.

" I take it you haven't seen her since"

"sure I did. I wouldn't want her to think I was jealous."

Despite everything Bani laughed. You're still dating her? even after you learned she was seeing someone behind your back?"

Jai gave her a nonchalant shrug, as though it did not matter. But Bani knew better. He was devastated when he found out. He might have fooled everyone else but Bani knew him too well to fall for his charade.

" I may have taken her out a few times Bani, but it was over the moment she betrayed me".

"its over between me and Daksh too", Bani murmured. Just saying the words produced a painful tightening in her chest. She was truly in love with Daksh. They even talked about getting married and raising a family together. Bani wanted children so badly. She had Pia's twins to spoil and adore but she felt this maternal instinct to have her own consume her .

You're sure this baby is his?" Jai asked, reaching for her hand and squeezing gently. "the woman could be stirring up trouble."

"he didn't bother to deny it". In the beginning, Bani had hoped for that herself. She'd searched Daksh's face, waiting, praying it was all some sick joke. His hard eyes brightened defensively, then gradually the regret, the doubt had showed. It had been a mistake he told her. a one- night fling that meant nothing.

This isn't the first time," she admitted. "I am so stupid Jai I should have known better".

"don't be hard on yourself, Jai said, bending forward to brush a wisp of dark brown hair from her temple.

"there were plenty of signs that Roshini was playing me for a fool, too, but I was so taken with her….

"bust line. You always were a breast man".

"that's probably the reason I never dated you", he countered, grinning.

Bani smiled. The joke was an old one between them. When they were first assigned to work together, Jai had been a popular football player and a genius to boot, while she had been a non-descript bookworm. They clashed many times. One day after a particularly big fight, she shouted that if she had bigger breasts he might listen to her.

Jai was speechless, then he'd started to laugh. The laughter had broken the ice between them and they had been friends ever since.

"I hear that there is help in the form of surgery he teased, levelling his gaze at her breast.

"oh honestly'. Her breasts were not that small, but the banter between them helped her to focus on something else, rather than the pain she was going through.

Jai looked broodily. " I wonder if there is any one faithful anymore."

"I'm the last person you should be asking that too", she replied.

"you know Bani, I never liked Daksh. From the first I sensed there was something about him. I wished I said something sooner, but I saw how happy you were and held back. I am so sorry, knowing the truth now.

'don't be silly Jai". I am beginning to think that commitment meant nothing today."

Sighing he looked at her again. "are you going to be able to sleep now?"

Bani nodded. Although both knew differently.

'liar", he whispered.

Bani smiled and got up. He slipped his arms around her as if to absorb her pain. It felt good to be held. Jai's comfort was like slipping into a hot bath after being stranded in the Indian monsoons.

"you are going to get through this".

"I know, she whispered. But she hadn't been before she had confided in Jai. How fortunate she was to have him as her friend. "we both will she added.

She closed the door behind him. On reflection she could have called Pia or Rano, but she did not want to burden them. Jai was a safe choice and she was not disappointed.

She would pick up the pieces of her life, and start again, a little less trusting and a whole lot more weary.

For no particular reason, the image of Bani Dixit's tear streaked face drifted into Jai's mind two months later. He'd been sitting at his desk looking over some figures when he remembered her lonely plight. It was as if their conversation had taken place a few days ago. He had called her during the holidays and she sounded good. Downright cheerful in fact. In a hell of a lot better spirits than he had been lately.

She hadn't made any attempt to fool him. Daksh had hurt her badly. It was plain to Jai that Daksh had tried, to get back to her. but Daksh did not really know the true Bani Dixit. The woman was stubborn enough to impress a mule. Once she made up her mind on something, that was it.

It irritated Jai that Bani was not married. He had fully expected her to have a dozen kids by this time in her life. She always loved children. Most men, Jai realised had passed Bani over with little more than a glance. That irritated him even more.

The problem, if he could even call it that, was that she was plain and studious. She was not un appealing but she just didn't find it necessary to be hip and modern. She did not stop traffic and she was no beauty queen. To be honest he too did not find her that attractive, but he did not look at her in that light. She was a friend, just that.

What few realised, what few took time to see, was Bani's warm heart and generous spirit. He had never known a more giving woman. What she said about being shy was true, even though he laughed it off. Yet she had spunk and spirit. Enough to stand up to him, which was no easy thing.

Jai rolled back his chair and headed down the hallway with rare determination.

"Rohan", he said, striding purposefully into the doorway of the office. "have you got a minute?".

"sure. What's up?"

Jai had never played the role of matchmaker, and he wasn't exactly sure where to start. "there's someone I want you to meet".

'Oh" Rohan did not look very excited.

"a friend of mine" Jai explained.

"widowed, or divorced?"

"single"

Rohan's brows arched towards the ceiling.

"you mean a left-over girl".

Jai wasn't comfortable thinking of Bani as a left-over girl, but this wasn't the time to argue the point. "we went to high school together"

"High school? exactly how old is she"?

"twenty eight. I was her senior – by 4 years.

"she is not married?', what is wrong with her", Rohan asked his voice suspicious. "what's the matter with her?"

"Nothing, she is one of the nicest people your are ever likely to meet".

"no. thanks Jai"

"you haven't heard anything about her", Jai protested.

"I have heard enough.

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divan thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Khatija, glad you started a new ff. Love the intro, sounds very promising...hmm JB friends...and now Jai wants to find a guy for his friend, cause she should be married with lots of kids...what about you filling that spot. good for rohan to say no. I like this Rohan guy.😆

Looking forward to next update.
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That was an interesting start. JW trying to play the matchmaker and what an end to it ?! Would be looking forward to read more...

Swathi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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A very interesting start. Bani being ditched by Daksh and left pregnant with his child 😡 and jW trying to play a matchmaker kya hoga in dod ka 😕
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great starting. 👏 👏 👏
aww bani 😭
hmm lets see how it goes
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome start.
JB are friends.
and Daksh cheated her....and she broke up with him..great.
Jai is playing a matchmaker 😆
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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when did jai become a matchmaker... thank lord with the first ended up with disaster... 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u started a new story-great! bani the plain jane and jai her saviour!
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Originally posted by: pooks

A very interesting start. Bani being ditched by Daksh and left pregnant with his child 😡 and jW trying to play a matchmaker kya hoga in dod ka 😕

Hi Pooks, Bani is not pregnant with Daksh's child it is the girl he had a one night stand with....sorry about the confusion...enjoy the story.😃

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Chapter 2
"I've heard enough"
"what's the matter with you?" it was difficult keeping the irritation out of his voice. Rahul was thirty-five and twenty pounds overweight, not to mention the receding hairline. Frankly, Jai didn't think that his employee had the right to be so damned choosy..
"nothing is wrong with me".
"I thought you wanted to re-marry"
"I do. Someday, when I find the right woman".
"well Bani might just be that person", Jai argued. " Bani is beautiful, not your sexy damsel in distress type but God you have to see her"!
"why don't you take her out then?"
the question took Jai by surprise. "well because……..because it will be like going out with my sister."
Rahul released an impatient sigh. "why haven't you mentioned her before?"
"she was involved with someone else"
Rahul shook his head. "forget it". You are my boss and all that, but I've been set up too many times before. If you say she is beautiful then why is she single. I am sorry Jai but really I am not interested.

Jai found Rahul's attitude downright insulting. Before he could stop himself, long before he could analyse what he was doing, he reached for his wallet.
'what are you doing?" Rahul wanted to know, when Jai pulled out two tickets.
'these are tickets for the India/Pakistan finals. If you agree to call Bani for a date, they are yours". His brother in law would kill him for this, but Jai would deal with Adi later.
Rahul's eyes rounded in surprise. "You mean you're willing to give me two tickets (special seating) to go on a date with your friend?'
"yes"
"one date". But once Rahul saw Bani and got to know her, he'd realise what a precious person she was. Within a few weeks Rahul would be looking for ways to repay him for this good deed.
"someplace nice too" no cheap food for Bani, only the best" did you hear?" Jai demanded.
As far as Jai was concerned, any man who would turn down a date with Bani must be really an idiot.
Jai felt good when he went back to his own office, Bani was one hell of a woman and it was about time someone realised as much.

After dinner at WM Jai decided to visit Bani. Rano was out with Ranveer so she would be alone.
He rang the doorbell and waited.
"who is it?"
"the big bad wolf"
the sound of her soft laugh was followed by the opening of the door.
Apparently he had gotten her out of the bath. She put on her thick bathrobe that clung to her hips hurriedly.
"Jai", she said, surprised. What are you doing here"? as she spoke she tied the belt tightly around her waist.
Jai was having trouble taking his eyes off her creamy smooth skin. His gaze followed her length and he was shocked to see what long shapely legs she had. Funny he had never noticed them before!
" you busy"?
"no why"
"care for a movie"

after the movie, he offered her coffee.
Jai had to bring the matter up now. "Bani there is someone at work I want you to meet".
"who?"
"Rahul Khanna" "you will like him"
"is he tall, dark and handsome?"
"yes, no and no"
"sounds like my kind of man". Bani joked, setting aside her mug.

Tuesday morning Rahul strolled into his office. He looked at Jai, frowning. "it didn't work". Jai tried to figure out what project Rahul was talking about.
"what do you mean?, he asked Rahul.
"she turned me down flat".
Jai suddenly clicked.
'she turned you down?" you didn't try hard enough"
"jai if I tried harder I would have been arrested!"
'what the hell did you say to her?"
'nothing" I called her on Saturday . I mentioned your name right off and told her we were buddies. I wanted to make her feel comfortable".
"then what happened?" Jai could feel himself losing his patience.
Noting happened Jai. We talked. She sounds really nice. The more we talked the more I realised I really wanted to meet her. she is bright, funny and has the most amazing voice..
'then why did she turn you down, dammit"
"just that she had given up dating and although she was sure I was a perfectly decent man, she wasn't interested.
"you did not take that sitting down did you?"
"no of course not, I am genuinely interested. I even sent her roses. The most expensive ones. But she called and apologised again.
Jai was frustrated, the stubborn woman was driving him insane.
'you are not going to let me return the tickets are you?"
Jai growled.

Bani was sitting at her dining table, reading over the application for the adoption agency, when the doorbell rang. By the time she reached the door whoever was knocking was getting impatient.
Without a word he marched into her flat. He was furious. Damn he was handsome, she noticed for the first time.
"your turned down Rahul, and I want to know why?" he demanded.
Bani sighed.
"well?" jai demanded.
"he sounds very nice', Bani said.
'the guy's perfect for you', Jai argued, gesturing toward her. "I went to all the trouble for you to meet him and you turned him down"?
"I'm sorry, but I am not interested".
"are you going to let Daksh do this to you?' he challenged.
"Daksh has nothing to do with this Jai".
"don't lie, it has everything to do with him. Otherwise you wouldn't have turned Rahul down. And what is this nonsense of not dating anyone. Which, by the way is the most ridiculous thing I ever heard. Why?' "what made you give up dating Bani?'.

"oh", it is not something I decided overnight Jai, I have been thinking about it and it was a gradual decision".
Jai wasn't fooled.
"I'm nearly 29 years old Jai."
"so'
'so, she said with a laugh, "there aren't many eligible men left for me anymore"
"that's ridiculous, and not fair Bani".
"Jai the biggest and most important thing that I have realised is that I like the way my life is. I don't need a man to be complete."

For some reason, Jai felt hurt and annoyed. He gazed at her for a long long time, until she looked away. It was too late he saw the determination and finality in her eyes.


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Edited by lenmed - 18 years ago

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