FF// Untold Stories; Chapter 26 updated; (Dec 29) - Page 17

Its a beautiful story moving between past and present.. Glad u r not putting it on hold and continuing it.. Loved the update.. Stubborn Khushi wants to cycle.. Everyone had noticed during breakfast.. Want to know more abt shyam n Khushi's parents

Update next soon

Love

Vandie

The connection between Arnav and Khushi has started long before and now I guess this vacation will make it strong. Arnav managed to escape the probing of Anjali but will he escape his own pull? Khushi is as stubborn as Arnav and these two are destined to be together, who else would have opted for a cycle ride all of a sudden that too in the hill station?

I love the way you portray the incidents and the little flashbacks in between, that way it balances the humour and serious aspects. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. I already mentioned this, this story is different from your usual style, still, it is as good or even better than your usual style. Love the characterization of each and every character.

Originally posted by: bakwas_serial

What a wonderful chapter. It has your signature humor peppered with more than a few life lessons.

The situation you create 😍 Bicycle ride was so totally unexpected. Plus somehow I never imagined Mr. Proper on a bike...Not complaining 😊 the two women in their lives talked to them what had transpired at brekfast point and both are affected by each other.

It is true right that folks draw a wrong conclusion that if one is an introvert one also cannot perceive or observe ; An angry friend once rightfully said that "just because if one is quiet in a social gathering do these folks think you are stupid and they will get away with any BS " 😋 Anyway glad Arnav has a treasure trove of useful/useless information about Khushi.

Plus what can one say the absurd reasons to get married. Glad Khushi is out of the situation and is master ( well mistress) of her universe.

Thank you! I can understand where your friend comes from. Introverts are a highly misunderstood breed, yet often have the best insights to give.

Originally posted by: Kamala05

The connection between Arnav and Khushi has started long before and now I guess this vacation will make it strong. Arnav managed to escape the probing of Anjali but will he escape his own pull? Khushi is as stubborn as Arnav and these two are destined to be together, who else would have opted for a cycle ride all of a sudden that too in the hill station?

I love the way you portray the incidents and the little flashbacks in between, that way it balances the humour and serious aspects. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. I already mentioned this, this story is different from your usual style, still, it is as good or even better than your usual style. Love the characterization of each and every character.

Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot! :)

Originally posted by: Vandie

Its a beautiful story moving between past and present.. Glad u r not putting it on hold and continuing it.. Loved the update.. Stubborn Khushi wants to cycle.. Everyone had noticed during breakfast.. Want to know more abt shyam n Khushi's parents

Update next soon

Love

Vandie

Thank you Vandie!

Originally posted by: shereenjain

Wow. I am liking the pace of this story. So unlike of what you usually write.

Arnav is way too observant that we give him credit for. I loved reading his introspection.

So many small things in this chapter,I loved. And the last part, Khushi's past. I don't know what to write about it. This story has a slow impact.

Thank you, Shereen. I'm very happy to know this :)

Forget about keepng it on hold... ull hv to updt regularly...

Damn ths thng is so damn intresting so intriguing ...

Keeps me hooked in until s nxt updt n soo on....so eager for thm to unite n him to know whole shyam truth n stangle tht vile man to death....

Eagerly waiting fr d nxt updt

Originally posted by: kizh72

I love how under the humor, you address stuff like the emotional blackmailing that women undergo in the name of doing what is right, what is good, and unfortunately from one's own family many a time.

One could laugh at her ideas or stupidities, but its sad to think from where they come from. You should write this at your own pace.

Thank you so much! :)

Originally posted by: frustrated12233

Forget about keepng it on hold... ull hv to updt regularly...

Damn ths thng is so damn intresting so intriguing ...

Keeps me hooked in until s nxt updt n soo on....so eager for thm to unite n him to know whole shyam truth n stangle tht vile man to death....

Eagerly waiting fr d nxt updt

Haha! Not putting it on hold, and I'll try my best :) Thank you!

Wow! Great update! I felt sorry for Khushi when she was having an incident played back in her mind about her mother’s words and how ironical the actual situation was! Beautiful update! I love Arshi! Period!!