Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon
Done with the third part! It’s so beautiful kya kahu!!!! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 I honestly donno what to say but curse myself for not having found this when I was active in the forum. U should be proud of this one yaar! I mean it’s something else altogether! I could literally visualise AdiYa here. And I could imagine them saying all these things. And that’s only possible if a writer can grab the essence of the characters and here it’s not even urs! It’s easy to create ur own trust me but to write on something that has been somebody else’s vision? That’s a feat in itself! Third part was everything I wanted to see in the show but I never got! In the show they never addressed Zoya’s insecurity regarding her past. Yes she had moved on but did that mean she had healed? No bcoz the girl went through a life changing event when her own emotions were unstable. That whole heart to heart talk was so beautiful. Trust me someone should have shared this with Ani sir. Ur thanking me for reading it? I am thanking u for sharing it with me 🤗🤗🤗 last part is pending but I need to go out for a walk warna the park will get closed. So will read once I am back. Itni khoobsurat hai, what do I say? Now I feel like a moron that I am badgering u guys to read my story. I find it mediocre now. How r u guys even liking it? How r u liking it? Khud itni achchi likhti ho. Now I am seriously thinking I am wasting all ur time by making u guys read my story 😄
No Mandy...every story is special in its own way...and I have thoroughly enjoyed first part of Ur story!! And I can understand ur badgering to read Ur story, it's just Ur excitement...I had this excitement to when I was asking y'all to read this OS😂
Yes, Zoya's unaddressed insecurities was one of the biggest disappointment from the show. I wanted this heart to heart convo between them at any given moment rather than that typical realisation at the altar!!! Even on their first night when adi came closer, I was expecting ab toh isko Yash yaad aaega aur yeh Kuch react karegi...but that stupid Nani track messed up the whole thing😡
This was the part when I had cried the whole time I was writing it... Zoya's realisation and confusion...and adi's lecture to her...that was really very emotional. I wanted to show how adi has always been there for her when she was confused n didn't know what to do in life and he'll only lead her in the matters of heart as well. I wanted Zoya to understand through his talks that he too has fallen for her. I didn't want some sudden realisation or a realisation triggered by some event.
And though u r thankful to me for sharing this with u, I m also thankful that u gave such amazing reviews. I m so flattered!!☺️