Forbidden Attractions - -Sukor -Shorty cutie A Mini Bonus. - Page 3

Awesome Hello friend please update soon as eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Shar456

Awesome Hello friend please update soon as eagerly waiting for next update

Hey thanks so much 😊

Will update after diwali bit busy now please

Part III

The Attractions – though forbidden ….frontiers breaching???

Suraj showed him the map and asked him why do you think so….. Kolkatta and Chennai have ports within the city and there are no caves or hideouts unlike Mumbai, Kochi the topography paves it easy for it has the slushy backwaters and Vizag with its caves and the sea is rough and the most important the Vice Admiral is in Vizag which is very important. But he is paralysed shouted Sunil… that’s your bad luck not mine said Suraj with attitude and walked away with his maps alongwith his whisky….

Hell with him banged his fist on the table…Sunil

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It was dark

He was walking towards the flag staff which was on the upper deck. So its going to be within two weeks. He was telling to himself looking at the port and the sea…

It was calm.. the deep sea never has waves but has loads of undercurrents.. the deep sea is the one which has so much within but remain calm on the outside.

His gaze went down the lower deck. He saw a guy holding his cheeks which was red and walking fast when Tanuj held him… Why do you guys don’t understand… I don’t know what but don’t go to her. She is hysteric and its two years. She is with Helena, takes care of the dance girls stuff, and comes forward to dance only when Helena is sick. And remember you were three together but you are now left alone....Be careful he said.

He had been there for six months but had seen her from far away only few times as she never came in front but was to herself. She helps with the dance troupe back end work, captain’s office and helps in the kitchen.

He saw her only recently but found her like a puzzle and that attitude uff.

It was very late night… she was there in the deck below all alone seated resting on the railing of the cruise with her knees held to her chest.. looking at the sea…. Eyes dry and wide awake… he was looking down at her… she is very weird, he felt….

It was the same for the next two days………. Seated alone throughout the night.

She never smiles, wears a simple tank top with short skirt and full length stockings. Her hair was mid length curly. She was small framed but he was surprised of himself that he even looked at her which was unlikely of him but she was something he could not ignore.

It was third day… there was chaos….the guy died. He had high fever for two days, the resident doctor could not be successful as he developed an allergy but succumbed. Tanuj was startled just like the other two… As it was the luxury cruise they did not want the mishap to invite unnecessary agony among the rich travelers so they just threw the body in the middle of the sea where there were more of sharks.

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At the Port hospital

Anil Tripati was walking towards the ICU where Pant was being treated. His vitals were good and stable but he was still dazy and not fully conscious. Anil had a meeting with the Dr and said it is important that Mr. Pant gets better faster. The Dr briefed and shared his confusion that he was unable to understand the motto of the shooter as he has been made paralysed but not shot fatal even though he was at point blank range. Anil looked at the shots and told to himself, it must be him and I will get to him soon. He gave specific instructions to the security and also spoke to the IT Security Head of the Port.

He got a call from Mumbai and Kochi who shared the details of the mishap which happened and about the datas which had been hacked. When is it happening he asked… within a week but depends how fast Pant respond.

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Frontiers breaching????

Suraj was looking at the maps and was on his macbook in the lower deck when Sunil and Prathap walked to him.

Prathap asked him, when can you get the details…

Suraj: We need to wait until Pant revives .

Sunil was fisting, you failed you should have killed him, then Suraj drew his gun at him. You should have done it by yourself, if you want me, I do it my way. You can still go on and kill the Admiral if you have the guts and walked out towards his motor boat, which had his Apache. He would normally spend the night in his boat. None could ask about his whereabouts as he had his own way.

Chakor was witnessing the three though she could not hear anything. She saw Sunil and Suraj having argument when Prathap tried to calm the angry boys. Prathap left followed by Suraj. Suraj was walking past her room going down the stairs while two guys were going up.

The lights went off for few seconds.

He heard a loud noise of Sunil, Hey…….he heard gun shots randomly.

He ran up to see in the dark Sunil’s face was covered and he realised there was knife at his neck being drawn.

The lights were on …..there was chaos. The guys ran and removed the cloth from Sunils face and he gasped while his neck was indeed had the imprint of knife mark. Catch catch who is it he shouted….

Before anyone could realise the motor boat steered fast towards the caves with Chakor in it. Leave me she shouted when he just pressed her collar muscle soon she fainted.

He slowed the boat towards the caves…. Carried her into the cave and laid her down. You will soon wake up he said...

He walked towards the edge of the caves and was watching the Port which was buzzling and was simultaneously was working on his macbook. He was looking at the cruise where the lights were on and the lower deck was quite chaos with guys running around.

He suddenly felt a throttle of his neck with a knife pointed. I will kill you too and the others she said.

Just one hit and a twirl she was on the ground and he was on her holding the same knife around her neck.

Her eyes were red and emitting fire but no fear...

His arms was pressing her throat......................

Me? He said…. But you don’t kill anyone with your knife do you?. Lifting his brows he said.…

Whaat??? How does he know???? She was perplexed.

I saved you again and you are killing me he asked… he was completely puzzled at her… What girl is she?? He got off her giving the knife to her. She went back towards the dark walls of the cave, hugging her knees close to her chest.

Save??? You again helped him… he got saved….. she said. He got saved….. she was just going monotonously …. I will kill, each and everyone… her eyes were dangerously red. I will kill…. They must be butchered.

He walked into the cave which had a small stove and few needful food stuff. He heated the water and gave her tea in the tin pot adding the milk powder sachet. Drink he said. She looked into his eyes. Its not poison and I am not a coward like you to attack from behind he said.

I am not a coward she shouted and dare you say that… her eyes were shining in anger.

Ok Ok he said….She didn’t drink so he drank and gave her to prove it was safe for her to drink.

Don’t fear you will not die he said.

I don’t fear death for I eagerly wait to embrace it happily she said hugging her knees and slowly sipping the tea.

Why did you bring me here she asked.

If I had not those guys would have rained you with bullets he said.

I will not die still she said….

Attitude he said to himself…

She looked up… urrr …. what did you mean not killing by knife…

I know you don’t kill by knife but with your ring… She was startled… how how do you know?… she covered her scorpio ring…I know…. I saw the sting marks in the guys palms and on his neck he had severe rashes too which was typical to some kind of reptile infection.

She was surprised.. so you knew… are you a Dr she asked.

He smiled No. but I felt there was something more to you.

Nothing , there is nothing…. She just hugged her knees closer.

Why do you want to kill ?………. And whom do you want to kill ? so the other two guys also you killed?? Why so much anger…. He asked her questions after questions.

I need not tell you she said.

Ok your wish…not that I bother too.... he went and just laid on the floor…

He turned to see her and saw her eyes wide open…. Looking dry….

You don’t close your eyes and sleep he asked….

I lost sleep two years back she said……………… I will not die or sleep until I kill them… two more to down but they need to be butchered…

He closed his eyes…. Did not interrupt and stayed calm.

Few minutes passed…

She felt different, he is not looking at me unlike others…. she was looking at her ring….

Chakor she said to herself the most unlucky creation in this world she said….. pressing the knife so hard that she was bleeding…

Without opening his eyes with his hands below his head he said….

Do you know what your name means? Your name sounds Indian. Are you Indian?.

I don’t know what my name mean. I am from Thailand.

He opened his eyes saw the bleeding but kept quiet…. Closed his eyes…

Chakor…….. she held her bleeding spot tight pressing the wound…with a cloth she had..

She spoke…………… spoke…………… without a drop of tear or emotions…………….. He listened …………… closing his eyes……….just put out his left hand straight…. His right was under his head facing the ceiling of the cave where the bats were indeed flying around. It was well into midnight…

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Chakor………………….

Yes name is Indian but she comes from Thailand………. Phuket………………

She was just three years old when she came along with her parents from India to the beautiful holiday island only to be washed away by the Tsunami which swirled the Asian countries around. Her parents died when she was clung to a tree top to be found by the family in Phuket who had a son but was praying for a daughter . The couple had complications so could not go ahead with another.

All the rescued child could say was her name Chakor…and calling out mumma mumaa… nothing more…

The family was a living in the national park. They treated her like her own child showered her with love. The son Lee was attached to the little sister. The head of the family died an unnatural death. The mother was a snake charmer but made both her children to study. Thailand the land of computer geniuses Lee specialized in computers and was a freelancer. He was a licensed hacker too. Chakor loved her mother a lot and used to help her in her chores and learnt the art of snake charming as she grew among them and the parakeet was her best friend…

She was in her boarding and was finishing her under graduation and was returning to celebrate her 18th birthday with her Thai family. Never in her life she thought that would be the last day she would see her adopted mother and her brother. Never in her life she thought that will be the last day of her sleep and cry…..

The Dark day…………The Moon bled red…..

She continued without any emotions…. No tears……. No variations…………..

Sunil met Lee oneline through a hacking website and became friends. Sunil started to visit Thailand as one of the cruise destination. Soon Sunil knew about Lee’s proficiency and Prathap used his skill to hack into many sites for his dirty benefits and paid Lee very well. Lee started to learn about the true intentions of Prathap and began to resist. Prathap wanted him to hack one site finally and promised Lee that he will not trouble him again. Lee hacked it and very lately realised that he was indeed hacking the website which was connecting to the Indian Defense website when the Firewalls triggered alarm at the Indian Servers and the Cyber Crime Cell came into action and traced the IP to Thailand. Lee had intelligently used the shared IP of Sunil.

Problems started when Prathap and Sunil along with three of their guys came to the Park in the night. Chakor also came there when she found the parakeet was restless and also the other birds. Suspecting danger she hid in one of the huge boxes which was near the crocodile pit.

She opened the box a little and she froze and closed her mouth as the cruelty was unfolding in front of her.

There were guys with guns guarding the area while Sunil and Prathap were there holding a gun at Lee’s head.

The other three guys were holding her mother who had already been beaten blue… she was bleeding but was telling Lee not to heed to Prathap’s threaten.

Let them kill but don’t do anything to harm the India, she shouted. You are no Indian why are you bothered hit Prathap… I am not Indian but I know about India and…… she held her tongue…..

Lee was also beaten asking him to break through and transfer the defense details. He could not see his mother being brutally beaten… he heeded and hacked but the Indian Firewalls were so strong that it was not allowing to proceed further after a point the datas were reversing…. Sunil raged… Lee tried hard but he could not complete the data transfer. By that time Prathap got the information from one of his insider in the Thai Securitas that a cycber crime troop was tracking him and would be reaching him soon if he does not get out of the Thai waters. The Indian and Thai Govt were working in sync.

In a fit of rage and irritation Sunil shelled bullets at Lee holding forcefully his mother to watch him die and killed her too. Not to leave any trace of the bodies they threw their bodies into the crocodile pit. They did not leave the parakeet also as it was non stop talking bad boys…. bad boys.

Chakor froze and fainted inside the box. They cleared the space and left from there in a jiffy….Prathap was in fury saying all his efforts turned water as he could not complete the deal…. He now cannot enter the Thai waters too…

They left from there when the cyber crime came and looked around. They left without realising that Chakor was inside the box fainted.

She woke up did not realise how many days passed by…. She was completely shocked, traumatized… she only knew Helena in the park. None of the park people were aware of the gruesome murders and they searched for Lee and his mother and thought they had left the place as Lee was established well in his computers and his mother had been telling the Park authorities that she would leave them soon. But without telling anyone?? They were surprised but did not bother much.

Chakor took a long time to understand what has happened. She went dry … All she wanted was to kill all of them… kill the three who held her mother and butcher Sunil and Prathap… She did not know how to get to them as they were already out of the Thai waters into the international waters.

She knew only Helena who was the dancer with her troupe in the Thai park. As it was not giving her good remuneration she was trying out and was called by the some of the cruise liners to be as their in-house dancers and to also make the international customers happy in all sense.

Helena liked Chakor though she was an introvert but asked if she would like to join to help with the errands and hearing the name of Prathap and Sunil, she sailed her journey through along with her poisonous snake baskets which she hid in her baggage. The cruise went all over the globe and she got the special Scorpio Ring from France. She would go shopping alone very rarely… else she would confine herself to her room and her baggage. She trained the snakes well that they were fed with eggs from the pantry.

She drew her walls as many a times the guys tried to act nasty with her, due to which she would sit through the night awake. She forgot what was sleep…

She trained the snakes and extracted their poisonous venom and did a concoction and filled the Scorpio ring which had the fangs and the sting.

The two boys tried their ways and she purposely tried to be friendly holding their hands and squeezed their palms injecting the venom and injected in their neck too. She would hit them hard on their cheeks. So that they jitter. The slow poison would take its time to infect the blood leading to high fever and also rashes and finally the lethal poison would play its fatal role.

But that Sunil I tried to kill him with the knife soaked in venom as they have to be butchered…. Butchered… she was on and on… I will kill him no butcher him….

His eyes were closed still…..his left arm stretched.

She spoke all …. She poured out her hidden agony….. She herself was surprised…. This was the first time she saw a man not taking advantage of her…. Not wanting to be physical to her….and infact not even bothered about her presence……he did not force her to tell but just asked her and she told on her own.

She looked at him……I don’t know if you are listening… and I don’t know why I told you all this….But first time in two years I feel better….I don’t know who you are…but….

He was tall, long legs, handsome…. But with loads of attitude too.

It was well into the wee hours

He opened his eyes turned his head towards the cave opening… Saw the sea silent and the cruise also calm… he tried to move his left hand when he couldnot. He turned his head….

Her back was facing him…. her cheeks was on his palm and she was curled beside him but at a distance.

He very slowly tried to move his palm when she jittered and just got up without turning back she quickly moved to the walls. He closed his eyes and was straight….

He opened his eyes slowly.. not to embarrass her…. He spoke…… the cruise is silent so lets go before it dawns… you can get back to your room…

She nodded ok…. Very very softly said thanks… plain without any emotions…

He smiled. They got down the ropes into their boat…. He oared it instead of starting the motor…. His arms were strong to oar the boat with the apache…

For the first time she held his hand and got into the cruise very very quietly and went to her room. She turned towards him for a sec met his eyes and turned back to her room. So I did sleep forgetting everything atleast for some time… after two years…..she said to herself….I was on his palm, thank god he did not realise it….

I did listen to all…. Chakor…. Is a free spirited bird….. but…………. he told to himself…..looking at his palm. Did she sleep??? I guess she did...

He went towards the flag staff looking at the port…..

He was seeing the frontiers of the beach breached by the land….

Are the forbidden personalities being attracted…

A pair of eyes were watching them from far away…….

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Indian Coast Guards are like sniffer dogs!!! He fumed…

They are here….

Anil was with the Admiral….. Go ahead…Sir…

How is that even possible……

He drew her to him…… made her hold his trigger………………… rain him……………..

I am sorry I cannot………………he turned his back climbing on to the ladder dropped from the chopper above.

Oh ok………….. if you cannot then…………………she jumped into the deep sea…………………

Nooooooooooooooooooo…..his eyes froze…

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I know this part is long but I am hard pressed for time as I will be getting into my quarterly CXO team meets and will be running like a headless chicken. Shall try to complete it before the first week of November.

If delayed please pardon me.

love you all.......

It is getting more and more interesting yaar👏👏👏👏...loved it... was reading it with my breath held I think... realised it later😍😍

And you know we don't mind the length.... infact I am ready to read everything at a stretch😜 reading sukor never tires us❤❤

And now toh they have interacted and are probably unknowingly attracted to each other too.... so no chance of getting bored😜😜.... plus I want to know whether suraj has some underlying motive in assisting pratap, how will chakor react when she comes to know that suraj is hacking the defence stuff which her brother was resisting etc. Etc.....

So BETTER KEEP DOING IT AT REGULAR INTERVALS... OTHER WISE ANYWAYS THE FLOW GETS LOST 😜

P.S. as usual precap is thrilling👏👏

Originally posted by: 77nikita

It is getting more and more interesting yaar👏👏👏👏...loved it... was reading it with my breath held I think... realised it later😍😍

And you know we don't mind the length.... infact I am ready to read everything at a stretch😜 reading sukor never tires us❤❤

And now toh they have interacted and are probably unknowingly attracted to each other too.... so no chance of getting bored😜😜.... plus I want to know whether suraj has some underlying motive in assisting pratap, how will chakor react when she comes to know that suraj is hacking the defence stuff which her brother was resisting etc. Etc.....

So BETTER KEEP DOING IT AT REGULAR INTERVALS... OTHER WISE ANYWAYS THE FLOW GETS LOST 😜

P.S. as usual precap is thrilling👏👏

Thanks Niki for the quick feedback... helps a lot..🤗

held your breath awwwhhh so sweet of you.

@ bold need you say Chitti the Robot😉

how will she react.... haan right how will she well lets wait and see.....

Thanks so much Smita for your lovely words. Means a lot

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Part 3:

Wow such a terrific, breathtaking update Sumi 👌👌, so much excitement, like a thriller movie, it didn't give me a chance to even move . The way Suraj saved Chakor, like a filmy hero, just amazing 👏👏. The entire cave scene was fantastic. For an unknown reason Chakor revealed the truth of her dreadful past to Suraj, was so heart wrenching 😔 😢. Really sometimes the adverse circumstances can turn an innocent person into a terrible murderer. It's totally beyond our control. Then her feeling better, after two years although for a while her forgetting about everything of her terrible past & fallen asleep. Very well written that portion 👍👍. I'm sure that there is a bitter past in Suraj's life too, that we still have to know, which is why he engaged in such misdeed. Don't know why but I think he too has endured a lot of pain in his past. A lot of questions are flowing in my mind . Looking forward to the replies. Regarding the length of this part I can say that you always pay close attention to the subtle details of everything that it is inevitable to being lengthy but that doesn't matter because we delve into your story 😊😊. Thank you Sumi for updating in due course even being so busy. It's such an amazing & thrilling update 👍, increase my inquietude. Eagerly waiting for the next as precap is quite intriguing, looking forward to know what happened to Suraj in the past & how their relationship develops in the next phase. Thanks.

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Part IV

(this part mainly deals with defence and the unsung heros who play the vital role but in silence. I myself was amazed when I researched about the Naval and the Vizag Ports history)

Dare ………..Devils, Check…. Mates…………….

He went towards the flag staff looking at the port…..

He was seeing the frontiers of the beach breached by the land….

A pair of eyes were watching them from far away…….

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She went to her room quiet…. She soon realised Helena was watching them…

Heyyy …. Looks like the Hottie took you to his boat??? …. luck seemed your way…

Nothing just to get few of stuff from the boat for Prathap and Sunil. Oh just that ….well I thought something more. But why you? Tanuj was busy so asked me to get it….

Chakor did not react and went about her way to the kitchen to clean.

A week passed , Suraj confined to himself and was busy on his mac… but he did not fail to notice she was at the rails with her knees hugged to her chest looking dry during the nights.

They exchanged glances but she was dry always with no reciprocation of his smile….just looking into his eyes. He could understand the pain she was going through of unable to emote….

She but did not deter from making efforts to kill Sunil but could not succeed making all the more frustrated upon herself.

During the week there was sudden increase of Coast Guard Patrolling.

Prathap and Sunil were frustrated to see those white boats swirling around the waters.

This had to be done a week ago but for the Admiral…

Being The Luxury Cruise after getting the clearance it was allowed to anchor at the passenger port and not at the cargo or the defence side…

The travelers were taken around the city in the special buses which was connected to the luxury hotel within the city.

The next two days was the sight seeing program..

We have to make use of this and those guys also will be here soon Prathap said. He was within the cruise but along with the staff in disguise as being a wanted his pictures were indeed displayed at the Port offices. He generally never goes with the tourists One of the buses brought over few visitors who had returned stating they prefer to stay in the cruise and not stay in the Hotel.

The cruise was quite empty as all the tourists were offshore going around the city. As there was special dignitaries visiting the city, as part of security measures the cruise was asked to anchor away from the Port.

Sniffer dogs are these Indian Coast Guards shouted Prathap … this will jeopardise our plans.

Suraj was calm….adjusting his Apache, water washing it….

He wiped it clean and went and sat near the rails with his macbook….

He was very busy working…..

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The Port Trust, Vizag.

The Devils…………….Daring ………..

The landmark in Indian Navy

The Security was beefed up, the Coast Guard Chopper was flying above keeping vigil.

Anil was with the Vice Admiral Pant who was fine and was ready for the D Day. The big day in the Indian Naval Base, a history to be created in confidence without any pomp.

The Senior Naval officers and the dignitaries along with the Vice Admiral was there… they were at the jetty which was with all the latest technologies installed servers and laptops.

Anil was with the Admiral….who had recouped fine… . Go ahead…Sir…He said. All under control.

Anil had his mac on with him and was looking at the node points of various vessels docked in the Port and looked at the small red dots indicating the international vessels anchored along with the various IPs flashing on his giant screens.

He was being updated of various data points and realised many things and he realised major things had been happening including the Mumbai and Kochi ones but luckily the datas were reversing too. He, an cyber expert himself, checked on the IP and narrowed it and informed the Patrol to keep a watch on the frontiers.

He connected his Mac to the servers and signed the Admiral to go ahead.

The dignitaries were standing with the Admiral looking through the glass windows of the jetty…

She was long beautiful, with utmost sophisticated base… Sturdy to go through any perils, storms or Tsunamis… with world class technology of high class design and engineering…. She can thwart any invasion being it nuclear or surface with ease. She was all set with the Tricolour Flag flying high.

The Admiral was ready to go through his retina scan along with the Director of the Vizag Ship Building Dock in coalition with international Shipping agency which has engineered this marvel for the Indian Defence and had to be scheduled to be delivered two weeks ago but due to various reasons and for Admiral’s presence was delayed. It was now being introduced into the Indian waters today to mark a landmark history in Indian Defense area in strengthening the naval fleet.

The worlds most sophisticated submarine INS Sindhuraksha 2 was being driven into the sea from the VIzag Port………… The whole country will be viewing this but only a few will be waiting for its technical datas as it would mean taking control of the Indian waters.

The Admiral and the Director walked up to the screens to go through the retina screening to initiate the booting of the Vessel.

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Check ……………….Mates

Suraj connected his mac to the Port servers all set to hack the data while the so called visitors in the cover of tourists were seated in Prathap’s office waiting for this. It was matter of few minutes. Transfer of datas, transfer of money to accounts and fly away from the helipad of the luxury cruise. They can fly out only if they are in the international waters to land on their ship which will be waiting to take them back to their respective countries.

This was the Deal Prathap and Sunil had been trying to crack using Lee and other hackers too and waiting to happen since two years. Hack the Indian Defence Portal to get to gather the Naval submarine details to be sold to the preying countries for an unimaginable value of US Dollars. The deal was worth multi trillian Dollars. They were the intermediaries representing from the so called neighboring countries of India in true sense working behind waiting to hack and grab the defence data of the Indian Navy so as to take control over the Indian Waters, destabilize and hamper trade and block the gateway and bring economic unrest within the nation. They got the information through some greedy bureaucrats of India about the new submarine being introduced hence waited for the same. To distract they had planned to set off bombs remotely in Mumbai, one in Kochi and in Vizag.

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The macbooks of Suraj and Anil were connected along with the cyber team of Indian Cyber Cell from New Delhi.

The evil Prathap had another team kept in dark from Suraj from Seoul to play plan B of hacking the same. He had set two snipers aiming him to shoot him down once the deal is completed. He did not want any trace of his activities left behind.

Chakor was watching out the happening and was shocked to notice Suraj hacking but she looked at the snipers above and realised he was being aimed. She slowly moved back towards them.

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Go ahead Sir said Anil….All set

Mr Pant and the Director both went together for the retina scan which initiated the booting of the datas which came up and the scan passed through.

Anil looked at the screen and realised apart from his there were two other IPs trying to intervene the Defense Portal and the submarine data. His alarm bell drew the signals and alerted the Coastal Guards quickly.

A white speed boat was heading towards the Cruise……

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Suraj quickly noticed that there was a third IP intervening the Defence Servers. He told Prathap looks like somebody else is also into this….

Prathap acted innocent and asked if they can get it…. Suraj looked at Prathap and his expression and said am not sure but he clicked a button which changed the history………..

In few minutes it will be done he said……….. Prathap smiled.

Sunil in the meantime got an alert stating the Mumbai and Kochi datas have got corrupted suddenly from those who were there with them and were not able to be coded…. The datas are lost Sunil shouted… How can that be…. It was in the cloud… Infact Suraj had uploaded on to the cloud.

Suraj was calm and said I uploaded through your IP Sunil, if your firewall was not safe anyone from Seoul can hack it….and you have the password not me………… (seldom Sunil realised the hacker Suraj, had hacked and changed Sunil’s password long ago and had changed the coding of the uploaded data while the original data was foolproof)

No No how is it even possible Sunil was furious…..

He is cheating us he shouted…..Prathap and the others were getting bit agitated. Prathap got the alert from the Seoul team stating they are unable to hack as there is a sudden strong firewall on the Defence Portal not allowing to break through.

Whats happening Prathap shouted… Suraj looked at him and asked calmly what’s happening… the Seoul team says they are………….. Suraj sharp eyes looked at him, when Prathap realised his folly.

So you had another team to hack the Indian Defence Portal….. Brillilant… he said so why should I do… .. He stopped and got up…

You can’t do this shouted Prathap, signaling the snipers but he could not find them as they were taken care of by Chakor with her Scorpio Ring.

They both were dazed….Sunil saw Chakor running away from their behind… Tanuj what is she doing there he shouted.

In the meantime the coastal guards were on the cruise and surrounded all….

How is it even possible both shouted. Suraj hid himself…..

The duo alongwith the other three were arrested and were taken to the shore.

Suraj quickly got down closed his Mac and ran to his boat when Chakor caught his hand….

She was furious ….so you hacked into the Indian Defence Portal… he said what you see or hear is not true, just leave me I have no time to explain he said…. Stay away…. She was more shocked… made her freeze more, her head and heart was pounding. Please Chakor don’t think about anything… he said….

I will come with you I need to kill them she shouted.

No you stay away he pushed her and got on to the boat. Trust me you will and only YOU WILL KILL THEM. He raced his boat alongwith the Apache to the shore. A card fell down from his jacket…. She took it and saw and read….. her eyes grew wide…. Her head was pounding more……He IS ……………

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The Coast guards surrounded them and they were on the shore . The whole Port was beefed with sirens and security.

Suraj came up when Anil caught him….

I knew it would be you…Welcome Suraj Dhoper, Worlds Best Hacker… He pointed his gun towards him…

He was taken along with Sunil and Prathap…. The other three were taken to their embassy to go through the process of jurisdiction along with their computers and other gadgets. They were shocked never expected such a thing to happen. Anil handed them over to the Coast Guards while the Admiral appreciated him for his prudency. Anil looked at Suraj and went along with the others.

The jeep was going through the port trust road which was near the waters... Suraj suddenly hit the driver and the jeep lost control..

Wow Suraj said the duo… He quickly released them and asked them to jump into the sea which was closer to the caves where his boat was parked.

The driver was dazed and realised what has happened and quickly alerted the Coast Guard and Anil.

Anil smiled……………they have been taken to the Court of RAW….where judgements are never reserved but only written in the most RAW way…. His Way…

The Admiral was shocked hearing their escape. ……………….His eyes grew wide in surprise. Who is he????

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Who is Suraj Dhoper Rajvanshi…..

Suraj you are amazing… You saved yes…. I will pay you all my fortune … on and on was Prathap.

Shut UP just SHUT UP he roared like a Lion.

They just shuddered…. The calm guy is flaring like a Lion.

He brought them to the Cruise…..

To the lower deck….. made them kneel down….. tied

Suraj what are you doing?

I am doing what I have to do…. I have been waiting for this moment since six months I joined you…..Who do you think I am…. Well I need not even explain to you but you must know with whom you tried to play dirty… MY COUNTRY…. MY INDIA….

You know me…. I cannot tolerate anybody laying their hands on my property but here you have laid your evil eyes on MY COUNTRY ………. MY PRIDE….

The bureaucrats may fall for your petty money but not the Defence for we wear our country on our sleeves. Will thwart anyone who will try to do harm…and we are above all the police, the federations we are RAW… I am the Special officer from the Research Analysis Wing (RAW) specialized in Cyber Crimes.. and I report to the Prime Minister of India in confidence.

They were just shocked….

Whaat….. they shouted in Unison…

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She saw the card and read out…..

Suraj Dhopar Rajvanshi, Special Officer – Research Analysis Wing.

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YES sir said Anil Tripathi…..

Suraj Dhopar Rajvanshi, Special Officer – Research Analysis Wing.

(he always hid his surname for many reasons) multi degree holder by virtue and passion…..a qualified automobile engineer by academics, a passionate design engineer from NID, Vizag who designs his gun or his vehicle….An avid sports freak and surfer. Did a specialization in cyberspace dealing in cybercrime and cleared the civil services exams. By special training and by sheer hardwork rose to be one of the three best-trusted officers in RAW (Research Analysis Wing). He had his own way not coming in front but always had Anil Tripathi the next best one to play the role to camaflogue him. Anil and Suraj were like twin barrels… One works in silence while the other leads the foray. No one to lay a hand on his property and when he realised evil was trying to jeopardize his Country rose the RAW officer to handle them RAW. Seldom he realised he would fall raw into somebody’s heart.

The Admiral was dumbfound, now I realise why he shot me with the vial instead of a bullet. To paralyse me…

Yes sir, I apologise but in total confidence I would like to tell you… We got through intelligence that the Defence secrets especially of the submarines of the various ports are targeted. It was initially Chennai and if you had not been paralysed you would have gone through the scanning while the Cyber Cell were not prepared with a high end Firewall to safe guard the datas. He needed time to work with the Cyber team to install the same and he worked as an undercover with the perpetuators to know the information first hand.

He always puts himself at the back for the safety of our country is his prime motto…

He does all while I receive the trophy and recognition while His Excellency the Prime Minister of India knows his efforts and rewards him in confidence. He needs nothing as he is quite self sufficient.

I need to see him said the Admiral as that day he was masked. Sorry Sir, he never comes in the forefront.

The Vice Admiral did salute him remotely.

Bravo…. The nation is proud of you Officer he said…

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Yes….. Suraj Dhopar Rajvanshi…. RAW…He said…to her….

He brought her to the lower deck…………….. before them………………..

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His eyes was wondering he asked Suraj….is she your property… he went near his ears and spoke those words…. Tanuj was shocked….She was shocked too but what did he say to him.

She was bland looking at them…..

He drew the gun, fixed the silencer and locked it drew her close to him…. hold my hands….

I am sorry I cannot………………he turned his back climbing on to the ladder dropped from the chopper above.

Surajjjjj ..... fine go ...... leave me and go..........

………….. if you cannot then…………………she jumped into the deep sea…………………

Nooooooooooooooooooo…..his eyes froze…

Thanks Sonia for taking the time to read and share your views. 😍😍

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Thrilling & full action packed update Loved the way Suraj saved Chakor from Sunil Finally SuKor first interaction This story has become more interesting & also full of suspense

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Fab thrilling entertaining update sumi👏👏👏

God you seem to have a good background of this navy thing...... the nitty gritties of it....👍👍👍👍I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Thank you.

Ufff suraj as the RAW officer😍😍😍 I am anyways drooling since yesterday looking at his pics on insta and to add to all that this RAW officer waala look I am imagining 🔥🔥🔥🔥

The entire planning is tooooooo good......filmy style.... reminded me of their fight against KN❤❤

I can almost hear VJ iin his trademark style saying...My country, my pride🥰🥰

And precap is nail biting....waitingggggg for it

Thanks so much Smita for the lovely words 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Part 4:

What a fantabulous part Sumi, you made me speechless. You kept the excitement & thrill throughout the whole part 👍👍. Hat's off to your efforts & dedication. You have done a lot of research on the Indian Navy's & Defense Force's activities, their security system, their method of operation 👍👍🙏. Really your proficiency in writing is extraordinary 👏👏. The way Chakor cleared Suraj's way by freed the shooters from their life, just brilliant 👌. He will surely be grateful to her while he will come to know that although unknowingly but she contributed to such a great mission accomplished. And what an unexpected & startling disclosure of his real identity, just mind-blowing 👌👌👏👏, it surprised me a lot..😳😳...So SDR is actually a RAW officer & purposely Suraj was taken along with Sunil & Prathap apart from the other three. It's good to know that Anil knew about Suraj's identity & his working process very well & in the joint effort of the two of them, such a big conspiracy to cripple the security systems of the country eventually failed 👏👏. His roaring & the words My India, My Pride, like a ferocious Lion was enough to instill fear in the perpetrators minds 😀😀. I was getting awe while reading Suraj's multiple qualifications in various fields & his patriotism, duty & devotion towards the country & his warning laying a hand on his property means sure death. I was just imagining Vj while I read the entire part 😍😍. His true identity shocked Prathap & Sunil so much, now let's see what happens to their lives as his working style is Raw 😀😀😉😉, but will he punish the misdemeanors himself or keep the promise given to Chakor that the wicked will die in her hands? Waiting to know what will happen in next as the precap is as usual very interesting, excitable & dramatic. Thank you.

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