MG~FF~SAWARIYA|| Part 15 || Pg/31 || 23-10-2019 || - Page 22

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi how are you? thanks... will wait!


Thanks I am fine .... How about you??

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So sweet storyNice n new concept

Read in one go

Arrange marriage maan n geet they respect their family

Geet n her father bounding is so nice

Geet n maan understanding is so good

Sana is just childish crush on maan

Maan n geet going to work together

Can't wait to read next update


Thank you so much for liking the story

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Posted: 6 years ago

PART 15


Maan dropped Geet’s family and they left for the venue. It was just the two of them in the car and DevTara were in another car. Geet was still lost in her thoughts …. She was confused …. She always wanted to try new things in life. Would it be fine if she agrees? Would it be fine if she doesn’t? She wore a baby pink saree complimenting her skin complexion. She looked outside randomly lost in her thoughts. Maan who was waiting for her to talk understood that she was lost in her world.


He held her hand with one hand managing to drive with the other …. Kuch baat hai jo tumhe pareshaan kar rahahai? …. He asked observing that her fingers were fidgeting with her saree pallo thinking what might be running in her mind. She smiled meekly … ji kuch nahi …. Hum kab tak pahunchenge? She asked diverting the topic not willing to let him know her bothered state.


Two more hours …. And I think it would be better if we talk … it would be easier to pass the time then, he pulled his hand back concentrating on the road.


Aap kuch poochna chahte hain? Kuch janna tha? She asked looking at him. He wondered how she knew his state of mind. He smiled …. Kal hamari baat hui thi Geet …. It should be about you and your feelings too …. Mujhe kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki main aisa kya karon jisse tum apni dil ki baat bina jhijke(hesitation) bataogi … Geet worriedly replied … Aisa kuch nahi hai …. Aap kyun aisa sochte hain?


Kyunki tumhe jaanne laga hoon … You are like an open book to me …. Your face explains everything …. And if I am not wrong you are thinking about bhai’s proposal … He said not wanting to know Geet’s feelings as he was sure her heart was only stuck on the same issue.


Geet was about to open her mouth when Maan continued ….. Socho Geet lekin itna bhi nahi … You know something …Bhai ne bhabi ko bhi kuch aisa hi kaha tha unke shaadi ke time …. Aur main tumhe force nahi karonga …. Tum time lo lekin uske liye pareshaan mat hona …. I would accept your decision no matter what …. Aur jo bhi decide karogi sabse pehle mujhe batao taaki hum dono milkar soche ki bhai se kaise kehna hai


After he was done saying his part, Geet smiled feeling lighter at heart. But she did sense that he does want her to work with him …. Aapki dil ki baat mujhe samajh mein agaya …. She did not dare to look at Maan.


Yes Geet ….. I believe that it is really necessary for women to work …. You will feel empowered ….. Maine soch liya Rajji ko hum aage padhayenge ….. Uski shaadi bhi hum karvayenge


Her eyes welled up listening to him…. How can someone be so perfect? She thought …. Aap kyun itne ache hain?


It is my responsibility Geet ….. kya tumhari family meri nahi hai? Please don’t cry ….. I cant stop the car …. Bhai aage gadi rok denge ….. They have a watchful eye on us ….. He tried to cheer Geet up.


Aap videsh mein the … Phir kyun aapne mujhse shaadi ke liye haan kahi? Shayad meri duniya mein utne rang bhi nahi hai …. Geet asked thinking about how he could agree. His thoughts and world seemed to be so different and bigger than hers.


Sawal ka jawab bhi dediya … I guess it should be you who should answer then ….. She looked puzzled thinking what she just said.


Rang nahi hain?? Iss liye?? Yeh kaisibaat hui? She wondered making Maan laugh.


Mujhe rang chahiye bhi nahi Geet ……I only want a simple life with you ……. She was blown with his confession. This is something that needed to sink with her senses.


For her this relationship was not something she prepared herself for. Before she could react, Maan parked the car. He did expect her to say something ……. Maybe at least I would want that simple life with you? She might need some more time maybe. He was always surrounded by girls who used to throw themselves on him with intentions known. Here Geet is someone who doesn’t even open up her feelings even after getting engaged. He brushed his thoughts and opened the door for her to step out. While Geet was contemplating about her reaction. What would she tell him? She so much wished to talk to Madhu, she missed her.


Though Madhuri wanted to accompany her to the function, she had to leave to her boyfriend’s place.


Tara came to Geet’s side and held her hand …… Aap dono apna room mein chale jao, main Geet ko uska room dikhadongi ……. Dev aap hamara saamaan kamre mein rakh dijiye, saying she tookGeet away.


Dev did look at Maan’s disturbed face …... Tum pareshaan lag rahe ho? Koi baat hui tum dono ke beech mein? He asked.


Aisa kuch nahi hai bhai …… chliye dulhe se milte hai, saying Maan went inside the house.


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Geet ab jab humne tumhara room set kardiya ek hafte ke liye toh main tumhe kisise milana chahti thi …… Actually,dadima wanted you to meet her, Tara smiled leading Geet towards a room.


Geet saw an elderly woman maybe 75 or 80 year old sitting on a rocking chair reading a book as she entered the room.


Daadi lo aagayi Maan ki hone wali patni…… saying Tara looked at Geet ….. She is dadima’s friend aur abhi shaadi mein jo dulha hai uski daadi ……. Aap dono baat karlo, main thodi der mein wapas aaongi ….. dulhe raja se milke aati hoon, saying she left.


Aao bete …. Baithiye ……. Koi bhichair lelo …… Daadi smiled looking keenly at Geet ….. ab mere aakhein bhikamjor{weak} ho gaye hai …… lekin aapki khubsoorti dikhayi de rahi hai ……. Mere Maan ki Dulhan to waise hi hai jaise maine chaha ……… shaayad usse kayi jyada khubsoorat… Pari ke jaise


Geet blushed and sat near her feet ….Held her legs …… ab dekhiye mere chehre ko daadi, saying she smiled.


Upar baitho bete ......... hum thik hain, Daadi’s heart warmed with Geet’s gesture.


Main yaha thik hoon …… Aapse aise hi baat karne ka mann kar raha hai …… Geet ran her hand over Daadi’s payal in the process.


Aapke paayal kitne sundar hain, Geet said mesmerized with them.


Aapko chahiye? Mere paas aise waleek aur hain …….. She replied completely impressed with Geet.


Phir kabhi daadi …… Abhi baat karte hain


Precap: Same + A realization in Geet

Aakhon ki gustakhiyaan maaf ho


I am so sorry about the delay ..... would update in the weekend again! Thanks to all of those who still like and comment

Edited by dreamyharika - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update.

Geet feeling confuse on maan brother offer.maan make her understood and tell her not to think to much.they came to attend marriage and dulha dadi impress with geet beauty and nature.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb update...

I like most maan's understanding.

Now both r in marriage house.

There definitely they will celebrate rituals.

Very excited for next update.

Take care.

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Posted: 6 years ago

thanks so much for updating!!!

wishing you and your family a Happy Diwali!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 15

beautiful update! superbly written!

Geet's dilemma is understandable! great that Maan knows what is bothering her! when will Geet be able to talk to him without hesitating?

Loved Maan's views! he will always be there for Geet! glad that he has no issues for Geet working and wants Rajji to study further!

Geet is awed!

liked that he wants a simple life with Geet!

of cos he expected a response from Geet....

wonderful that Geet has met dadi!

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Posted: 6 years ago

fabulous precap! already waiting for Part 16

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi....just started reading your ff....loved it....beautifully written...waiting for more updates.

Edited by neetr91 - 6 years ago

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