OS - Rishabh Bajaj: A Father and a Husband - Page 3

This is Prabhudeva ka isn't it. 😈

Originally posted by: SehLengeThoda

OK I wrote this.

First time I attempted something.

Very Good writing....

But kind of summarized version tha....hopefully next one will have dialogues too😆

Continue soonish..

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

This was TOOOOOOOOO SMALL 😭💔

Your feedback is also way too small.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good writing....

But kind of summarized version tha....hopefully next one will have dialogues too😆

Continue soonish..

I attempted for the first time. So you have to take that into consideration.

Originally posted by: SehLengeThoda

Your feedback is also way too small.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good writing....

But kind of summarized version tha....hopefully next one will have dialogues too😆

Continue soonish..

Originally posted by: SehLengeThoda

I attempted for the first time. So you have to take that into consideration.

Originally posted by: SehLengeThoda

I attempted for the first time. So you have to take that into consideration.

I am so sorryyy....maine dekha bhi nahi ki story aapne likhi hai😳....just flow aur achi writing dekhke padhne lagg gaya...😆

and i am not Criticizing it but ek genuine observation tha..

It was a good part jaise maine bola hai....😊

Pls update soon yaar. Missing this a lot