||Dil Beparwah re|| MEHRYA SS -Spoiler -pg 75 - Page 54

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hey Shinu dearie thank you for updating this ff. I am super happy to see your update after ages. Well I read it earlier but I was busy and couldnt type my feedback immediately. The update was super long and how many pages was the update dear? thank you and enjoyed reading the mehrya nokjhoks and thank you once again for taking all the pain to translate the hindi scripts in between in English. I enjoyed it overall. stay blessed always

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Posted: 6 years ago

Dt. was a long one dear, I really enjoyed it. Thanks so very much. Don't make us wait so long. Continue soon โค

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Anuteja10

Hayee aaj chand kahase nikla ๐Ÿฅณ

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Thank you so much muaaaaahshinubaby๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ

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Awesome awesome awesome shinu baby mazaa aagaya full romantic chapter loved it

Kya tease kartha hi use then I thought he may call her but no n she assumed that he really went to meet his butterflies ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜œ

Yeh sonal ko bhi abhi aana tha ek puppy dedeta but na koi bath nahi next chapter me one strong kiss hojaye ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿค“n finally madam pass bhi hogayi ๐Ÿ˜

Beautifully written dear

I really loved this love story I like these types of stories ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ’ž

Next time jaldi Dena update pls pls voh bhi hot hot romance n don't end this holi scenes here pls continue n give us beautiful moments just like the show ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ

Lots of love and hugs take care n update soon n thanks for the pm ๐Ÿค—

Pata nahi kahan se nikla chand๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿคฃ

Thankyou so much Anu di, for reading and leaving such a sweet feedback..dil garden garden ho gaya๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ

Mujhe itna hi hot romance likhna aata hai di..๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜ฑ

I thought of winding up the holi sequence here itself..let me see whether there is any scope of continuing the same๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค”

Will try my best to not delay it much๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Love you too di, you just take care of yourselves and be back here soon๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

Thankyou so much for reading and leaving your valuable fb Ekta..it means a lot๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Will try to continue soon๐Ÿ˜

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

Res...

Yay update

Unres...

Thank you so much for the update..

Wow shaurya akhir mehek ke mu se wo bulwahi liya...jo wo sunna chahta hai๐Ÿ˜Š... godi me uthake blackmailing ๐Ÿคฃ... and when teaching her to ride the bike...kya chance pe dance mara majnu Khanna ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰ they already have their first small fight and mehek bechari ran to airport to stop shaurya... and end me their lovey dovey moments at holiโ˜บ๏ธ

As usual well written chapter...totally loved it...

Thanks for the pm... next chapter jaldi chahiye...๐Ÿ˜

Thankyou so much Lima behen for reading and leaving your valuable fb๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

Glad to know that you liked it..it means a lot๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ

Will try my best to not delay it for a long time๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™ˆ

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: AD04

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Wow wow wow wow.... Look u has given us update... .thanks alot Shinu.... U updated after so long.... Despite of ur hectic schedule n health.... U still managed to give us update.... Thanks alot for such a long update.... I am sure it must hv releived most of readers hunger๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰. Update is amazingly beautiful ....cute Mehrya nok jhoks.... Shaurya leaving no chance to tease her.... And Mehek also able to confess her love .. ...and she should also make a bold move..... She can also give back to him๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰. I am eagerly waiting for next update.... Hope it will come soon.... But see ur comfort ....i will wait for it patiently๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰. Thanks for the PM๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Aarti di...๐Ÿค—.. it's only because all of your encouragement and love, this SS is still continuing๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Thankyou so much for reading and leaving your valuable fb๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

Last time you had a wish to see Mehek's desperateness, so that's with the Airport scene. Hope you liked it too๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Will try my best to update without much delay..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™ˆ

Edited by dwriter - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kamali870

Such a beautiful updated loved itโค๏ธ

Thanks for the update Shinu๐Ÿ˜šโค๏ธ

Reading your story like reading a magical tale, you described each and every emotion beautifully ๐Ÿ‘

After these months are passed, still your update shows continuity ๐Ÿ‘

You're my one of favourite writer โค๏ธ

Mehak confessed her love and all thanks to Shaurya because of his antics finally he heard those magical words from Mehak's mouth๐Ÿ˜

I imagining them by reading your story๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ญ

One request we want frequent updates๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜œ

Please consider our wish ๐Ÿ˜

Awww. ..Kamali...In happy tears after reading your fb..thanks a ton dear,..means a lot๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Am overwhelmed by the reception of this update, even after the delay of 6 months๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

It's only because all of your constant love and support... gratitude๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

Will try my best to not delay it for a long time๐Ÿ™ˆ

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Haseena2020

Hey Shinu dearie thank you for updating this ff. I am super happy to see your update after ages. Well I read it earlier but I was busy and couldnt type my feedback immediately. The update was super long and how many pages was the update dear? thank you and enjoyed reading the mehrya nokjhoks and thank you once again for taking all the pain to translate the hindi scripts in between in English. I enjoyed it overall. stay blessed always

And it feels really good to appreciate after ages di๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks a lot for reading and leaving your valuable fb di..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’•

I feel somehow the hindi scripts are mandatory to bring out the typical MehRya vibes..Hope the translations were helpful๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Hiddy

Dt. was a long one dear, I really enjoyed it. Thanks so very much. Don't make us wait so long. Continue soon โค

Yippee..much happy to read the fb from a new family member๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks a lot for reading and leaving your valuable fb dear๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Wil try my best to not delay it for a long time๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 6 years ago

Prologue is Interesting


Both Mahek and Shaurya are 23 years which is awesome

and both have been invited to same reunion

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