Hanita OS: Worthy - Page 3

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Ahhhhh that so so so beautiful.......

You put your heart and soul in it.....

Love love love it to the core.....

I was actually feeling there every turmoil..anger ....frustration....hurt...care....love...desire....and wanting.....

You actually left me amezed at the end.....

K pata Hume Hanita ka iloveyou milega k nahi but I'm saying today that I love you and your Writting so much....

Do continue to write something like that more often and yes you are truly blessed writter ✨❤️

Thank you so much!! 🤗

You're absolutely right about me putting my heart and soul in it. In some ways I have put my own fears and insecurities into Babita and I was a bit surprised when I learned how it didn't seem forced or unrealistic. Though our experiences differ greatly, we have a lot of fears in common.

I really hope we get a direct confession from them one day. <3 But if not, hum sab ki writing se hi khush hona parega. 😆

You are truly too kind with your compliments. Thank you so much! 🤗

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Thank you so much!! 🤗

You're absolutely right about me putting my heart and soul in it. In some ways I have put my own fears and insecurities into Babita and I was a bit surprised when I learned how it didn't seem forced or unrealistic. Though our experiences differ greatly, we have a lot of fears in common.

I really hope we get a direct confession from them one day. <3 But if not, hum sab ki writing se hi khush hona parega. 😆

You are truly too kind with your compliments. Thank you so much! 🤗

Bold- chal kudiye q thank you bol k paraya Kar rahi he.....

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

So, first things first.

1. Beginning with the pottery scene, I liked how you correlated the stability of mind with the shape of the pot. The time when Babita felt angry towards HS, the pot didn't shape up, cause the emotion is destructive. But the moment she stabilised and adoringly thought of him, the pot started shaping, just like his own physique.

2. Before that, Imarti - I didn't well expect Babita to think of Imarti like that. I thought she'd be jealous of not having someone like Imarti in her own life. Or the fact that HS had Imarti but she had no one. But she was miffed about Imarti's tragic death and the separation HS had to face. Wow, marvelous. Really loved that bit. The jealousy did come in, of Ashok not being like HS but that's such a healthy thing to be jealous about. AWWWWWW.

3. The deformity, maybe implying that no one's perfect, not even the Savior HS. Good enough, one needn't be perfect but one needs to be compassionate and forgiving.

4. Denial then frustration then anger, all falling in place one after the other. Haha, that pot throw was so amazingly drafted. That light moment was a breather before we move on to the next phase. Somehow I could vividly imagine everything from here on like it indeed is playing in front of my eyes.

5. I'd quickly jump to the hug now, cause all the emotions in between led to this moment itself, like a perfect build up, the desire was perfectly addressed, absolutely on point.

Now that moment- I swear I've never concretely and convincingly imagined that sort of a scene ever. It's always been abstract until now. Every movement, action and the final picture was so detailed and brilliant that I could visualize every bit of it. Wow Gur. Just wow.

6. And Hanuman's intent and that solid mindset that he has. Aaye haaye. Even Babes appreciates that! He could've left but he didn't. Kudiye aur kya chahiye!

7. Kya aap mujhe gale laga sakte hain was straight out of KRPKAB I felt. Devakshi's confession and Sonakshi ka reaction. Again, wow. Brilliant.

8. And then after much wait, he asked Aap karti toh hai naa. Ufffff marr daala!!!! Haaaye. *blush*. Bohot came the answer. Can it get any better? No.

As you might've already understood, I loved it. HAHAHAA.

Read it twice already. Sheer gorgeousness.

Much love.

Maaaaahiiiiiii!!!!!!

I don't have the words to explain how much your feedback means to me. For you to go through each major moment, dissect it, point out your favorite parts and your immediate thoughts on it...

At times, mujhe doubt hogaya ki sach much meine hi likha hai? 😆 You were bang on about the purpose for some of the scenes, like the pottery one. For the other points you made like the Imarti wala, meine toh yeh socha hi nayi. Bas likh diya tha. 😆

I'm happy that Babes' anger and frustration came out well. I was worried that it might come out a bit repetitive. And I was honestly stuck in a vicious cycle where I kept circling back to the same issues over and over again.

The hug scene was another one that made me worried since in the show Hanita haven't gone past hand holding, aur uss mein bhi inka sharmana next level ka tha. 😆 I just hope it came out nice. 😳

Haha, I can't remember if it happened in Kuch Rang now but I wouldn't be surprised if it did. That show was so special to me.

Loll, it felt weird to have them directly ask if they liked each other so this was the second best I guess. 😆 But Babita ke "bohot" ne hi bohot kuch keh diya tha.

Haha, thank you SO much!!! 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Maaaaahiiiiiii!!!!!!

I don't have the words to explain how much your feedback means to me. For you to go through each major moment, dissect it, point out your favorite parts and your immediate thoughts on it...

Arey pagli, yeh toh karna hi tha! Itna phantastick jo likha hai :D

At times, mujhe doubt hogaya ki sach much meine hi likha hai? 😆 You were bang on about the purpose for some of the scenes, like the pottery one. For the other points you made like the Imarti wala, meine toh yeh socha hi nayi. Bas likh diya tha. 😆

Kaafi noble thoughts I must say. After getting all the jolts of reality now, this innocent childlike Babita is so soothing to think about.

I'm happy that Babes' anger and frustration came out well. I was worried that it might come out a bit repetitive. And I was honestly stuck in a vicious cycle where I kept circling back to the same issues over and over again.

I wouldn't say repetitive but it like reinforced the feelings and solidified them furthermore. And in real life too, we do keep considering the same options and emotions multiple times. Naturally done.

The hug scene was another one that made me worried since in the show Hanita haven't gone past hand holding, aur uss mein bhi inka sharmana next level ka tha. 😆 I just hope it came out nice. 😳

It came out TOO GOOD. SO ORGANIC AND BELIEVABLE AND GORGEOUS.

Haha, I can't remember if it happened in Kuch Rang now but I wouldn't be surprised if it did. That show was so special to me.

It did happen in their very first confession rey. Sonakshi responded to Dev's confession by these same words - Kya aap mujhe hug kar sakte hain Mr. Dixit?

Loll, it felt weird to have them directly ask if they liked each other so this was the second best I guess. 😆 But Babita ke "bohot" ne hi bohot kuch keh diya tha.

Haha, thank you SO much!!! 🤗🤗🤗

Love you!!!

this is such a beautiful piece of writing.

i have no words. i dont know how to express what i felt when i was reading this.

as if everything was happening in real. i could see it, feel it.

Very beautiful OS ❤️❤️❤️ Read it twice..thank you for writing on this track.. This was one of my wishlist how could he apologize for the comment..I can feel each and every emotion of Babita..through Ur words I literally saw visualisation of this one shot as an episode. Wonderfully written..👏

Originally posted by: Shona1991

chal kudiye q thank you bol k paraya Kar rahi he.....

LOLL, ab thank you ni bolungi toh phir aur kya bolu? 😆

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

Kaafi noble thoughts I must say. After getting all the jolts of reality now, this innocent childlike Babita is so soothing to think about.

LOLL, sometimes I wonder if my Babita is too different from the show wali. 🤔 Like, am I understanding her character at all or am I just making up someone completely different than who we have?

I wouldn't say repetitive but it like reinforced the feelings and solidified them furthermore. And in real life too, we do keep considering the same options and emotions multiple times. Naturally done.

Thanks! I was thinking the same thing but in that repetition, I was afraid of getting stuck and losing the point of the story.

It came out TOO GOOD. SO ORGANIC AND BELIEVABLE AND GORGEOUS.

Thank you!! 🤗

It did happen in their very first confession rey. Sonakshi responded to Dev's confession by these same words - Kya aap mujhe hug kar sakte hain Mr. Dixit?

Aahh, I kinda wanna watch the show again but honestly, after watching PB, everything pales in comparison. 😆

Love you!!!

Love you more!!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: shruti_luvs_msk

this is such a beautiful piece of writing.

i have no words. i dont know how to express what i felt when i was reading this.

as if everything was happening in real. i could see it, feel it.

Thank you so much! 🤗

You being speechless is also a compliment of its own. 😳

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Very beautiful OS ❤️❤️❤️ Read it twice..thank you for writing on this track.. This was one of my wishlist how could he apologize for the comment..I can feel each and every emotion of Babita..through Ur words I literally saw visualisation of this one shot as an episode. Wonderfully written..👏

Thank you so much! 🤗

I have a lot of scenes on my wish list as well, but I end up taking too long whilst writing it out. In a way it's good cuz I'm putting a lot of details to it but also bad because of the time it's taking me to write it.😆

Thank you so much once again! 🤗