Kaira OS Sinking(another part) part 3 updated - Page 2

Originally posted by: Raxya

This is top on my priority list.. naira has never been shown as typical hindi serial bahu.. she has been the warrior princess so now when they are showing her crying continiously it irks me alot.. i want her back with a bang..

Secondly i would love if they bring Naitik back.. may be with a serious depression track where Naira can realise she has don bad to her father and brother too and may be she can move on for her fathers sake from a dukhiyari mom to determined confident strong lady who can take the world in her flairs

They should show Naira forward in her career and may be she should take over Singhania daimond.. how time and again GV state that singhanias have less than G family.. i hate it.. Naira has full power and capability to turn the economy upside down.. they should focus on that rather than these kitchen fights😪😪😪

Love it! Your writing is beautiful. This is what we have been wanting- strong Naira back at Singhania’s and focusing on her career. You have worded the sequences beautifully. Please carry on.. waiting to hear more.

Originally posted by: Raxya

This is top on my priority list.. naira has never been shown as typical hindi serial bahu.. she has been the warrior princess so now when they are showing her crying continiously it irks me alot.. i want her back with a bang..

Secondly i would love if they bring Naitik back.. may be with a serious depression track where Naira can realise she has don bad to her father and brother too and may be she can move on for her fathers sake from a dukhiyari mom to determined confident strong lady who can take the world in her flairs

They should show Naira forward in her career and may be she should take over Singhania daimond.. how time and again GV state that singhanias have less than G family.. i hate it.. Naira has full power and capability to turn the economy upside down.. they should focus on that rather than these kitchen fights😪😪😪

For me, personally, I would like both Kartik and Naira to change for the better. They are not the characters we fell in love with, nor do they possess the qualities which made them different. They are all words but no action.

Calling yourself a sherni doesn’t make you one if the only person you can stand up against is your husband, that too barely so. Why not confront the woman who’s acting out as if it’s your fault that her husband doesn’t look her way?

Same with Kartik. He can only raise his voice against Naira. In front of the rest, he acts as a mere spectator.

Kartik and Naira used to feel each other’s pain, they used to be empathetic towards each other. Right now, both can’t even fathom what they have put the other through. Kartik doesn’t care that Naira has to witness him playing hubby to another woman and Naira still doesn’t fully realise how much she took away from Kartik.

The writing is mediocre with no one’s emotions being fully explored. What’s the point of the track if by the end of it, Kartik and Naira are back to what they used be instead of actually improving and working on their flaws and their relationship.

Originally posted by: Fari_15

For me, personally, I would like both Kartik and Naira to change for the better. They are not the characters we fell in love with, nor do they possess the qualities which made them different. They are all words but no action.

Calling yourself a sherni doesn’t make you one if the only person you can stand up against is your husband, that too barely so. Why not confront the woman who’s acting out as if it’s your fault that her husband doesn’t look her way?

Same with Kartik. He can only raise his voice against Naira. In front of the rest, he acts as a mere spectator.

Kartik and Naira used to feel each other’s pain, they used to be empathetic towards each other. Right now, both can’t even fathom what they have put the other through. Kartik doesn’t care that Naira has to witness him playing hubby to another woman and Naira still doesn’t fully realise how much she took away from Kartik.

The writing is mediocre with no one’s emotions being fully explored. What’s the point of the track if by the end of it, Kartik and Naira are back to what they used be instead of actually improving and working on their flaws and their relationship.

I feel that too.. moreover not just Kaira but the concept of the show used to be so realistic but now its more like EKs show.. no offense though😪

Part -2

Kartik was numb.. he felt as if there was a big hole in his heart and storm was passing through it.. his eyes were wide.. red.. he wasnot sure how to react.. Naira and kairav were standing out of the door and were ready to leave.. what to do?? What can he do..?? Nothing was coming to his mind..

He ran towards her shocking everone...

K- nahi.. tum nahi jaogi.. kahi nahi jaogi... he said grabing her like a psyco...a mad man.. he was pulling her violently not even caring their son was in her arms.. the family ran towards kartik to hold him back.. V was taken aback by the whole situation now its was her nightmare that was taking action..

Manish- kartik... kya kar rahe ho..?? Chodo.. kairav ko lag jayegi..

Kartik was choking in his pain...and continiously repeating Naira nahi jayegi.. woh mujhse dur nahi jayegi..

Manish safely pulled kairav out of Naira’s arms before his mad father would hurt him.. 😂😂😂

Kartik then was squeezing Naira in his arms.. kahi nahi jaogi tum.. suna tumne.. main nahi jane dunga..

Har waqt man mani nahi chalegi tumhari..

Naira was mashed in his arms...he was not even letting her breathe properly...

Naira- chodo.. kartik u are hurting me...

Kartik- aur joh mein hurt horaha hu.. uska kyaa..

Naira- kartik.. kairav ro raha hai..

Kartik- aur jo mein ro raha hu.. woh nahi dikhta tumhe..

Naira-tum nahi samajh rahe ho.. kartik..plz.. jaane do mujhe.. kyun kar rahe ho yesa.. aur complex mat banao iss situation ko...

Kartik - main complex bana raha hu situation ko.. tumne ye situation pyeda kiya hai.. tumhari wajeh se mein iss halat mein huu.. tum mujhe chod k chaligayi.. i deserved it.. main manta hun.. lekin tumne meri shaadi kaise hone di Naira.. ye jante huye ki main kabhi tumse aage nahi badh paunga.. tumne ye kese hone diya... MERI LIFE BARBAAD KARDI.....

V stood there shocked

From Naira stood outside the door not even once has kartik mentioned kairavs name.. he was clinging to Naira not even caring about his family not her moreover not his child of which he has been singing the names and the taunts that he was throwing at Naira.. that hatred in his eyes.. for Naira.. that anger.. was it for Naira taking that step of leaving him or was it that he had to marry someone else...

She was trying to figure out the situation..

but all she could seewas Naira avoiding eye contact with kartik and stoping him to hold her and Kartik was the one who was jumping like a crazy animal around her..

she was snapped out of her thought by a sound of a big slap that Naira hit Kartik with

Naira in true sherni form- basss.. main chup huun that doesnot mean mein tumhara ye pagalpan bardast karungii.. reality mein jiyo kartik.. u are married now.. vedika tumhari biwi hai.. how can u forget that.?

Kartik- aur woh kyun hai??

Vedika just fell from her own sanity

Kyun hain.. what did he mean.. kyun hain.. unhone khudd.. jab mein mana bhi kar rahi thi.. fir bhi.. unhone khud..

She was not able to formulate a proper sentence even in her mind..

Naira- wajeh jo ho.. but aaj ka sach yahi hai.. ki main tumhara past hoon.. aur woh tumhari present aur future.. aur tumhe toh move on bhi karna tha.. tum ready the kartik

Kartik-(wait a sec, ye toh mere lines hai🤪) he gave a questioning look to Naira as if trying to figure out whether it was her thought or WAS SHE THERE WHEN HE SAID THAT TO MAA

But Naira just tried to look aside hiding her pain after remembering that whole confrontation kartik made to swarna when she came to GV to stop his marriage..

Kartik- tum aayi thi? Bolo ma Naira tum aayi thi..( he said with happiness coz that was a ray of hope for him that Naira came to stop his marriage.. how could she ever let her kartik be someone elses... he remembered how she came running to stop his and aashi’s marriage)

Kartik- tum aayi thi na.. haan.. he said cupping her face.. tum aayi thi meri shaadi rokne.. main janta hoon.. tum nahi dekh sakti mujhe kisi aur k saath..tum pyaar karti ho mujhse.. humare bich kuch bhi hojaye.. ye pyaar nahi badle ga..

Naira was deeply hurt and was crying her eyes out.. kartik was so close to her holding her.. cupping her face but she couldnot hold him back( why ???coz ye aab dusre ka maal hai re)

Naira gathered all her courage and pushed kartik away.. enough kartik just enough..

Tum jaisa selfish insaan maine aaj tak nahi dekha.. tumhe sirf khudse matlab hai naa.. tumhe pyaar chaiye mera.. huh.. toh fir shaaq kyun kiya.. jab itna pyaar karte the.. aur jante bhi the ki main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon.. toh fir kese socha ki main kisi aur k.. saath..( he was trying so hard but still couldnot finish her words)

Kyun kartik.. kyun..

Kartik kneeled down to hold her legs.. galti .. hogayi.. maaf.. kardo...main sab theek kardunga.. sab..

Naira could clearly see vedika in the door giving painful expression

Naira-AAB KUCH THEEK NAHI HOSAKTA KARTIK..

Her voice was determined.. powerful which made kartik look up just to follow her gaze which were fixed on Vedika....

What do you is up next..??? I want more comments guys.. plz let me know how you feel abt my concept???🤓🤓🤓

Originally posted by: aasmanviewer

Love it! Your writing is beautiful. This is what we have been wanting- strong Naira back at Singhania’s and focusing on her career. You have worded the sequences beautifully. Please carry on.. waiting to hear more.

Tysm☺️ Have updated it🤓

S I said in another OS ur concept is just beautiful. Keep writing more stories and OS. The episodes should be like this. Hope cv's read the stories here.

Originally posted by: tikit

S I said in another OS ur concept is just beautiful. Keep writing more stories and OS. The episodes should be like this. Hope cv's read the stories here.

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That was so beautifully written. I am in love with this os. Wow 👏

I hope this happens ...or somewhat like this.

Please continue.

You r so sweet...I demand it and get the update..plz update soon..

Originally posted by: Fireiswithinus

That was so beautifully written. I am in love with this os. Wow 👏

I hope this happens ...or somewhat like this.

Please continue.

This shot is complete now however i will keep on adding along the storyline😂

Do check the new os based on current track