FF// Untold Stories; Note Pg. 18 + Link to Ch. 6 (Pg. 20) - Page 9

Omg. What did just happened? OCD? Hope they all are ok though. Can’t wait for more. Hopefully Khushi will explain why she was so anxious

Sacarsm,dry humor with more than tad bit of sadness at Khushi state ( her marriage was more important to her parents than her happiness 😏). Look forward to how you take this forward.

Your writing style reminds me of another writer😊

Chapter 2 . Arnav is attuned to Khushi desire and thoughts. Hit him with hardbound files 😁

His lack of reaction to her resignation was classic 😋 So spirited Anjali and Lavanya are all going to be in Nanital with Khushi

Originally posted by: Savera84

Wonderful update.

Did you say this is a Rom-Com? Then we will grab a bag of popcorn, sit back and enjoy the ride.

Throughout the chapter, Arnav was driving and Khushi first stared at him and promptly fell asleep, yet it tickled my funny bone quiet a few times. On top of that I was imagining Khushi's hair as cruise control.

How did Arnav think he can he handle the steering with one hand and reach the other end of the car to wind the window up with the other hand? Now Khushi has to be 200% attentive. Not complaining.

Arnav noticed Khushi is restless in her sleep. I know he said, he does not care, but we know he cares.

So, Khushi is a passenger seat driver and Arnav has OCD! Hmmm interesting traits. Khushi wants to see 7 wonders of the world. Er, what are they again? They keep changing.

Finally, who said What the! and why?

They are Arnav's favourite two words. But, I don't think it is him who said them. I have a feeling it is not Khushi either. I will leave the rest to the resident Sherlock Holmesssss.

Cheers........

I am not quite sure I want to define a rigid genre for this just yet. The story does have a serious aspect of Khushi's toxic previous relationship and its residual after effect on her personality that I wouldn't want to trivialize. That said, I am a huge sucker for happy endings and pagalpanti (:P), and truly believe that no victim should have to feel like the scope for humor, laughter, and madness in their life is over because of one unfortunate thing that life threw their way. So, that's the broad theme, I'd say.

Thank you love!

Originally posted by: AnExIPKwriter

I am not quite sure I want to define a rigid genre for this just yet. The story does have a serious aspect of Khushi's toxic previous relationship and its residual after effect on her personality that I wouldn't want to trivialize. That said, I am a huge sucker for happy endings and pagalpanti (:P), and truly believe that no victim should have to feel like the scope for humor, laughter, and madness in their life is over because of one unfortunate thing that life threw their way. So, that's the broad theme, I'd say.

Thank you love!

Absolutely! The victim has every right to live a happy life.

Mental abuse is worse than a physical abuse. We need education in that aspect. I am just guessing Khushi was mentally abused.

Thank you for writing such a simple looking story with complicated issues. Loving it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Cheers.........

Originally posted by: cheers2all

"Can my day get any better?" And this, my friend, is not just a rhetorical question but also a compliment! Wonderful writing ex-IPK writer 😊 BTW I think I know who you are 😁 Purely based on the writing style, that is.

I don't know what was more amusing. Khushi's distrust in Arnav's driving, or Arnav's obsession for Khushi's hair. An easier fix for him would have been pushing her hair behind her hair. I was almost expecting him to do that. But sirji had better plans 😆 His OCD is going to cost him a lot. It will fun to see him explaining himself to Khushi & others. The last para had me in splits. Comedy in chaos!

Short, but super update! ❤️

I think you are the resident Sherlock Holmes referred to in the comment above 😆 So sweet, thank you! Glad you enjoyed :)

Originally posted by: shils28

Hahaha.... Too good!

But I think Arnav should have stopped the car.

A lot of should haves there are in the guy's life.

Originally posted by: Chardonnay

You are simply brilliant!! I was imagining the whole Arnav-Khushi-and the Coffee scenario in my head while sipping my own coffee and nearly choked on it visualising Khushi's Ninja attack on Arnav, his soldier-rigid gelled hair and the volcanic eruption of 'what-the-f'!!!😅😂🤣

Mission accomplished then 😆 Thank you!

Originally posted by: coderlady

Love the last line in the chapter. Can not stop laughing.

Glad to know!

Originally posted by: Uzii

Oh so arnav has OCD n couldn’t control himself to roll up the window as Khushi’s hair were distracting him from his driving n she made look like he was going to kiss her n blew it off now let’s see how they tackle the situation.

Let's see ;)