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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: TC_FA

Read all parts, it's amazing😳

Continue soon

Yup very soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

great update dear 😊

rishabh needs to understand prerna's feelings

please update soon waiting

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#23

Story is easy to read and understand so far.

I love your title 😃🤣

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Originally posted by: SHELLY0003

Story is easy to read and understand so far.

I love your title 😃🤣

Thank u tooktook

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such a great take on RB & P. Do update soon would like to read more.

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It was awesome. Loved the revealation of their life' s different layer😊

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SHOT 4

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Prerna's POV


I stirred in sleep as my slumber thinned. Mr.Bajaj was sleeping beside me and had his arm around my waist." habits!" I twitched my nose. I was not very sure of the fact that he got me here.

His reputation is something he can never risk. I slowly moved out of the bed and got ready he was still sleeping so I quickly checked my presentation one last time and walked out of the room. Well I know now why he kissed me later that night. May be he is still under that illusion that he kiss me and I won't budge. But I am no longer his wife.

" Mrs. Bajaj" a gentleman beamed from the corner.

" Morning Mr. Maalwani!" We shook hands as i recognised him. " Heard a lot about you and ur husband lady!!" he smiled.

" ohh!! Even I heard a lot about you." I smiled. We kept on chatting over some coffee, when the host alarmed us to take our seats. I adjusted the drape of my extremely fancy saree and was about to take my seat when I noticed Mr. Bajaj by my side. I looked away took my seat. The presentation went well. It was a two days long conference but I flew back to Kolkata by the evening flight the same day.


Days rolled by , and soon metamorphosed into a month even I avoided business encounters with him. Then one night my cell buzzed and creased my forehead with frown lines.

" wohh rishu baba ko tezz bukhar ho gaya haii.. aur kanp bhi rahe haiiii!!!" sharda masi our sorry! his oldest house help shaked over the phone and my breath got stuck in my throat.

" toh aapp unhe jaldii woh medicine jo bedside table ke 2nd drawer mein h! ek laal color ke strip me....jaldi de dijiye unhe!!" I nearly screamed over the phone.

" wohh wohh..Baba le nhi rahe..." she was scared.

" kya matlab!!??? Pcccchhh this man... aap ruko...main aa rahi hun!!" I felt tears welling up my eyes. I nearly ran out of my house in my nightwear and drove to his mansion like a fanatic.I nearly ran inside our room.

Mr. Bajaj was shaking in fever. His earbuds were red means high fever alert. Rashmi masi and other house helps were busy nursing him. I crawled on the bed next to him and caressed his forehead. He was burning, " ek glass paani dena please masi.." I gulped and got a tablet out from the strip.

" Mr. Bajaj " i hushed in a heavy voice." mujhe nhi khana!!" he gulped with closed eyes. I slowly ran my fingers through hi shairs.." aap log jao.." i looked at them.They went out of the room one by one. I slowly made him sit." open ur mouth!" I hushed.

He had his eyes closed." Prerna!!" he mumbled." muh kholiye please!" I hushed. He slowly opened his mouth and i popped the pill inside it and made him drink some water .He caught my hand tightly in his. I made him lie down again.

" baarish mein bheege the aap.." i chipped as i soaked a piece of cloth in cold water and stuck it on his forehead." ha!!" he gulped. " okay now please try to sleep." I continued to apply those soaked fabric. After an hour or so his temperature civilised. I began to slowly massage his forehead again because I knew this fevers of his generally hammers his forehead. I was massaging his forehead with utmost care. I dunno why?Heck i hate myself? but he was is pain and sigh !So ! I was massaging his forehead.

Than masi walked inside our room, " Prerna bitiya!" she chimed.

" woh baba ne subah se kuch bhi nhi khaya hai..." she informed me and i sprang up." aur yeh aap mujhe ab bol rahe ho....issi liye aur fever barah hai unka..." i frowned.

"woh nhi kha rahe the!!" she shook her head. " toh aap unhe khilati naa.." i was hell worried.

" woh aapke aane ke baad jithni bhi baar bimar padhe hai...woh aap hi ke haat se khate the" i saw a hint of tear in her eyes." aap baba ke pass baithiye... Main aayii.." i smiled a little and stumbled off the bed and I dashed downstairs. Soon i walked inside the kitchen.

After a light year, I guess my eyes welled up,yet again. It took some minutes to prepare a quick khichdi for him. I quickly got it upstairs and spotted him awake. He was sitting on his bed when I walked upto him and handed him the bowl. " have it!" i chipped.

He tried to spoon some, but his fingers were shaking so I quickly took the spoon and bowl from him. He kept looking at me , while i was feeding him.

" Fever kab se hai ?"i chipped. " kal se!" He gulped the khichdi." medicines kyun nhi Li." i wiped his lips with my thumb, Again habit." I forgot." he shook his head.

" chaliye eat quickly en sleep now!!" i smiled when Sharda maasi entered with a glass of water. "masi thora garam doodh Lana please" i smiled. " aur haan badam pish Dena kuch usme" i instructed her. She smiled which reached her eyes. I turned to feed Mr. Bajaj , when he quipped "You used to wear nighties na... right! Tee and PJs kabse ?" . My eyes widened with his question.

I shook my head to ignore it and continued to feed him. Soon he finished the whole thing and I made him drink some water." Feeling better!" I smiled with a relief.

" hmm!" His eyes twinkled. Soon maasi came inside with a glass of milk." chaliye jaldi se finish it too". I handed the glass to him. "main baccha nhi hun!" He made a face while looking at the glass. I glared at him and he drank it down in one go. Good boy!

" maasi app kal baba ko dawaii aur khana de dena. Oats lunch mein and dinner mein halki khichdi chalegii par khicdi me peas mat add karna" I instructed her.

"prerna beta! aap ruk rahe ho na raat ko!?" she asked. " nhi! mujhe jana hoga." and I picked my phone from the bed. " maasi aap bahar jao thora! " Mr.Bajaj quipped feebly. Maasi smiled and went away.

" Prerna please come here!!" he looked at me.." its already late Mr. Bajaj" I looked away. He tried to get up when I crawled on the bed " don't " I chipped and the next moment i was in his arms. He was hugging me tightly.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Tammanaarora9

SHOT 4

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Prerna's POV


I stirred in sleep as my slumber thinned. Mr.Bajaj was sleeping beside me and had his arm around my waist." habits!" I twitched my nose. I was not very sure of the fact that he got me here.

His reputation is something he can never risk. I slowly moved out of the bed and got ready he was still sleeping so I quickly checked my presentation one last time and walked out of the room. Well I know now why he kissed me later that night. May be he is still under that illusion that he kiss me and I won't budge. But I am no longer his wife.

" Mrs. Bajaj" a gentleman beamed from the corner.

" Morning Mr. Maalwani!" We shook hands as i recognised him. " Heard a lot about you and ur husband lady!!" he smiled.

" ohh!! Even I heard a lot about you." I smiled. We kept on chatting over some coffee, when the host alarmed us to take our seats. I adjusted the drape of my extremely fancy saree and was about to take my seat when I noticed Mr. Bajaj by my side. I looked away took my seat. The presentation went well. It was a two days long conference but I flew back to Kolkata by the evening flight the same day.


Days rolled by , and soon metamorphosed into a month even I avoided business encounters with him. Then one night my cell buzzed and creased my forehead with frown lines.

" wohh rishu baba ko tezz bukhar ho gaya haii.. aur kanp bhi rahe haiiii!!!" sharda masi our sorry! his oldest house help shaked over the phone and my breath got stuck in my throat.

" toh aapp unhe jaldii woh medicine jo bedside table ke 2nd drawer mein h! ek laal color ke strip me....jaldi de dijiye unhe!!" I nearly screamed over the phone.

" wohh wohh..Baba le nhi rahe..." she was scared.

" kya matlab!!??? Pcccchhh this man... aap ruko...main aa rahi hun!!" I felt tears welling up my eyes. I nearly ran out of my house in my nightwear and drove to his mansion like a fanatic.I nearly ran inside our room.

Mr. Bajaj was shaking in fever. His earbuds were red means high fever alert. Rashmi masi and other house helps were busy nursing him. I crawled on the bed next to him and caressed his forehead. He was burning, " ek glass paani dena please masi.." I gulped and got a tablet out from the strip.

" Mr. Bajaj " i hushed in a heavy voice." mujhe nhi khana!!" he gulped with closed eyes. I slowly ran my fingers through hi shairs.." aap log jao.." i looked at them.They went out of the room one by one. I slowly made him sit." open ur mouth!" I hushed.

He had his eyes closed." Prerna!!" he mumbled." muh kholiye please!" I hushed. He slowly opened his mouth and i popped the pill inside it and made him drink some water .He caught my hand tightly in his. I made him lie down again.

" baarish mein bheege the aap.." i chipped as i soaked a piece of cloth in cold water and stuck it on his forehead." ha!!" he gulped. " okay now please try to sleep." I continued to apply those soaked fabric. After an hour or so his temperature civilised. I began to slowly massage his forehead again because I knew this fevers of his generally hammers his forehead. I was massaging his forehead with utmost care. I dunno why?Heck i hate myself? but he was is pain and sigh !So ! I was massaging his forehead.

Than masi walked inside our room, " Prerna bitiya!" she chimed.

" woh baba ne subah se kuch bhi nhi khaya hai..." she informed me and i sprang up." aur yeh aap mujhe ab bol rahe ho....issi liye aur fever barah hai unka..." i frowned.

"woh nhi kha rahe the!!" she shook her head. " toh aap unhe khilati naa.." i was hell worried.

" woh aapke aane ke baad jithni bhi baar bimar padhe hai...woh aap hi ke haat se khate the" i saw a hint of tear in her eyes." aap baba ke pass baithiye... Main aayii.." i smiled a little and stumbled off the bed and I dashed downstairs. Soon i walked inside the kitchen.

After a light year, I guess my eyes welled up,yet again. It took some minutes to prepare a quick khichdi for him. I quickly got it upstairs and spotted him awake. He was sitting on his bed when I walked upto him and handed him the bowl. " have it!" i chipped.

He tried to spoon some, but his fingers were shaking so I quickly took the spoon and bowl from him. He kept looking at me , while i was feeding him.

" Fever kab se hai ?"i chipped. " kal se!" He gulped the khichdi." medicines kyun nhi Li." i wiped his lips with my thumb, Again habit." I forgot." he shook his head.

" chaliye eat quickly en sleep now!!" i smiled when Sharda maasi entered with a glass of water. "masi thora garam doodh Lana please" i smiled. " aur haan badam pish Dena kuch usme" i instructed her. She smiled which reached her eyes. I turned to feed Mr. Bajaj , when he quipped "You used to wear nighties na... right! Tee and PJs kabse ?" . My eyes widened with his question.

I shook my head to ignore it and continued to feed him. Soon he finished the whole thing and I made him drink some water." Feeling better!" I smiled with a relief.

" hmm!" His eyes twinkled. Soon maasi came inside with a glass of milk." chaliye jaldi se finish it too". I handed the glass to him. "main baccha nhi hun!" He made a face while looking at the glass. I glared at him and he drank it down in one go. Good boy!

" maasi app kal baba ko dawaii aur khana de dena. Oats lunch mein and dinner mein halki khichdi chalegii par khicdi me peas mat add karna" I instructed her.

"prerna beta! aap ruk rahe ho na raat ko!?" she asked. " nhi! mujhe jana hoga." and I picked my phone from the bed. " maasi aap bahar jao thora! " Mr.Bajaj quipped feebly. Maasi smiled and went away.

" Prerna please come here!!" he looked at me.." its already late Mr. Bajaj" I looked away. He tried to get up when I crawled on the bed " don't " I chipped and the next moment i was in his arms. He was hugging me tightly.


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prerish habbits!!! *sigh*

I want to call him Rishu baba too ;-)

rishu is prerna's spoilest baccha.

i LOVE him as this bajaj.

update soon naa tooktook baba

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: SHELLY0003

prerish habbits!!! *sigh*

I want to call him Rishu baba too ;-)

rishu is prerna's spoilest baccha.

i LOVE him as this bajaj.

update soon naa tooktook baba

I want prerna to call him rishu once in the serial.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: SHELLY0003

prerish habbits!!! *sigh*

I want to call him Rishu baba too ;-)

rishu is prerna's spoilest baccha.

i LOVE him as this bajaj.

update soon naa tooktook baba

pubu dm kar jaldi

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