Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 43

Originally posted by: Phoenix_75

Hey Mate.. I'm a newbie to this forum and I'll be really honest i just binged read this fanfiction. Before I go into the details why this story of yours has got me as obsessed with your writing as Cersie was with the Iron Throne... Let me promise you that I admire and applaud your sincere efforts and hard work you put in this story and I won't leave any Chance... not a single chance to let you be aware how much appreciation I have for this work.

So lets begin with the title - Intriguing... Totally Focuses on the aura that Rishab Bajaj is. I really admire how you have succeeded in writing Rishab Bajaj the way CVs wanted to portray... indifferent, powerful, Tactful. In your story THE RISHAB BAJAJ wears an armour in his mind. He's a player. I loved it. The writers aren't able to show him like that on the TV.

Coming to Prerna... her character screams practicality in this ff. I loved her. Any middle class modern educated girl can relate to your Prerna. She has got a golden heart. She married for the sake for her loved ones BUT WITHOUT COMPROMISING her self respect and dignity. She's not blind to her weaknesses. Anurag is... well... he's the same as the show. Disturbing and a typical jilted lover.

Take a bow miss. Your work is commendable . 👏👍🏼

Ps- I sincerely request you to please add me to your PM list. I would be really grateful to you. 😳

-Lots of love and wishes❤

Thank you for such kind words. I'm so glad you liked the story. I definitely do think about Cersei and the Godfather while moulding Rishabh's character. Like how they play their opponents.

I've added you in. <3

“You seem to be under the impression that I have the time or the inclination to care about the boy or your little parlour games with him. Let me clarify. I don’t. However, given how excitable Mr. Basu can get, you should learn how to defend yourself.” He buttoned his jacket, glancing at watch, as if already bored by their conversation. “I’ll arrange for some basic self-defense classes. Time to be your own knight-in-shining-armor, Prerna."

This dialogue is the best part of the update. He's staying true to his self and character. He's concerned for his wife but doesn't want to jump at the first chance to be her Prince/ saviour. He wants her to be capable of defending and protecting herself. He wants to empower her like a real modern 'Man'. Loved your characterisation.

Lots of love ❤

ps- Thank you for adding me 😘

The last bit... damn, how can someone show care and indifference all at once? But I can so imagine KDG portraying that.

Puppy dog eyes, awwww😍😍😍

Man, it was hard imagining Anurag in that Kurt’s, beard avatar. And what’s with this manhandling? Please go find yourself someone else Anurag?

I loved the birthday party scene and I loved the simple yet meaningful gift. Adorable part

Mmmmammm, Bajaj spending nights with other women and Prerna being jelly?? Lovely. However, I felt bad for your version of the Prerna here.

Darling, so looking forward to the next chapter now. 😚

Awesome update...

Please do add me in your pm list

Fab update again & it's good that Rishabh asked Prerna to be her own knight. Finally story will enter a new zone.

Can't wait for the next one.

Interesting & mind blowing update 👏

Anurag wants Prerna back in his life, he must figure out his life first😡

Loved Prerna's stand on marriage😊

Loved the cute family birthday party, the photo booths & the gift monopoly was cute😊

PrerRish's first kiss❤️

Rishabh had not celebrated his birthday from childhood what is his past😭

Anurag manhandled Prerna, loved prerna's stance on man handling

Rishabh's words regarding Anurag was perfect just like his character👏

Prerna is affected by the indifference

Prerna will enrol in self defence class

Want some insight about Rishabh's night life

Waiting for next

Thankyou for adding me in your pm list! 🤗 coming back to the update, my poor rishabh never got to celebrate his birthday😭 glad prerna decided to do celebrate it and i want them to play the monopoly together with rishabh winning the game despite being a monopoly-virgin. 🤣i loved that cheek kiss.❤️. And this anuraag i tell you! 🤬 and i really liked the fact that she explained everything to him. Rishabh has always been gentle with prerna while anurag manhandled her, you see the difference! I hope prerna realizes this soon! I love how rishabh is making prerna realize her self worth which she forgot being in love with anurag.

Excited for their romance to start in the upcoming chapters! update soon.

This was such a good update! ❤️

Anurag wants her back and tries to justify his actions. No bruh, go away.

The birthday party with the hilarious photo booth signs. 🤣 I am all for it, it's amazing and he never celebrated his birthday kinda made me sad. 😭 But I want to see them playing monopoly, period. The little kiss on the cheek. ☺️

I love how protective RB is of Prerna but told her to be her own knight is so goooooood.

Waiting for the next update. ❤️

Riya.

Such an amazing update.

. Now am curious about rishabh night life..

PreRish kiss cute.. So sweet bday celebration she gives monopoly and that photo booth signage lol hilarious bajaj sabki bajyega lol 😂..

Loved how's rishabh asked prerna to enroll in defence classes he's so in his character..

Humara Bajaj”, “Bajaj bajayega sabka baaja”, "Angry-Not-So-Young -Man

Hilllllaarious!!! 😂😂😂😂

And anurag is being very annoying now... Doesn't he has anything else to do ?? Rather than obsessing over prerna??

Well written ❤️🔥

Isha.