Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 42

Lovely chapter. It sounds like Prena is sad that’s Mr Bajaj seems indifferent

Bloody idiot instead of telling him the truth she kept the truth from him love that he is going to teach her self defense every woman should know it .Loved her planning his birthday so cute awesome update loved it.

Anu will never change. He thinks he could destroy Bajaj. He is delusional

I don’t know how I feel about Bajaj night life 🤔

Is he going to be her self-defense training instructor? 😉

Thank you 🤗

hi hun this really is a very good story and you've got an excellent ability to narrate a story. Sorry i haven't commented before but I've just recentley returned to IF and didn't really know how to lol. Please can you add me to your list i really really wanna read the rest of the story.

Awesome as always.after reading I'm in mixed emotions. Too many to identify what actually I'm feeling?in the last part it's very heart wrenching that prerna couldn't take rishab's indifference .....yeh man it hurts when you too many feelings for someone and he don't reciprocate 😭.the question is does he really indifferent towards her?lz give us rishab pov.and at this stage I'm dieing to know about rishab's night life.plz plz update soon. Thanks 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Wow. Such am awesome update. Loved it.

Prerna meeting Anurag secretly is something in was expecting. She shouldn't feel guilty about it, as they have the clause in their marriage. But I understand why she feels this, maybe because she always wanted to follow the typical rules that come with marriage even when they discussed about the clause.

Anurag apologized. How I wish the conversation stopped at this point. But he had to ask her to come back in his life. I like that she rejected his proposal. Now that she found peace in living this life, why to disrupted it. But he had to ruin it by his warning. Well atleast she is clear what her husband can do to her ex. She is correct to get afraid for him.

Birthday surprise. Let me just🤣🤣 for the photo booth signs. They celebrated, a happy family. I loved their presents too. He never had a birthday party in his life😭. What is his past, I so want to know about it, I hope we should get you know in near future.

Rishabh with puppy dog eyes, well we all are screwed. And his kiss saying Thank You❤️, and she didn't move away from him even when he gave her time to move, time to take decision.

Anurag stalking her and manhandling her😡. Doesn't Bajaj hide about his flings, how come Anurag know about it. But forgiveness was hard to bestow on someone who manhandled you into giving it. These words, how I wish show's Prerna understood these words, that manhandling is not love.

Finally their conversation. He knows and she knows about it. He is so gentle towards her. But she had to defend her ex. He assured that he doesn't have time to do that but he did have responsibility towards her safety. Time to be your own knight-in-shining-armor, absolutely correct. And wow his indifference is bothering her.

I am waiting for the romance to start. Please do update soon.

Amazing story! I came back to IF after a while and ended up reading it all in one go!! please do add me to your PM list :)

Great story! You’re a very good author and I love your descriptive writing which makes the moment come alive for the reader.

Please do add me to your pm list for future updates. Thank you!

Hey Mate.. I'm a newbie to this forum and I'll be really honest i just binged read this fanfiction. Before I go into the details why this story of yours has got me as obsessed with your writing as Cersie was with the Iron Throne... Let me promise you that I admire and applaud your sincere efforts and hard work you put in this story and I won't leave any Chance... not a single chance to let you be aware how much appreciation I have for this work.

So lets begin with the title - Intriguing... Totally Focuses on the aura that Rishab Bajaj is. I really admire how you have succeeded in writing Rishab Bajaj the way CVs wanted to portray... indifferent, powerful, Tactful. In your story THE RISHAB BAJAJ wears an armour in his mind. He's a player. I loved it. The writers aren't able to show him like that on the TV.

Coming to Prerna... her character screams practicality in this ff. I loved her. Any middle class modern educated girl can relate to your Prerna. She has got a golden heart. She married for the sake for her loved ones BUT WITHOUT COMPROMISING her self respect and dignity. She's not blind to her weaknesses. Anurag is... well... he's the same as the show. Disturbing and a typical jilted lover.

Take a bow miss. Your work is commendable . 👏👍🏼

Ps- I sincerely request you to please add me to your PM list. I would be really grateful to you. 😳

-Lots of love and wishes❤