Tender Encounters (A PreRish FF) [Author's note on Pg 1] - Page 32

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Marvelous update!

The portion about Shiv's past life added a certain level of depth to his character. I liked how he handled MCP A without resorting to physical violence. The dialogues were so well written.

Prerna's thoughts gliding back to Rishabh despite being in the company of her family and her fiance spoke volumes of her emotions. She couldn't stop thinking about the man despite trying so hard.

The last part has to be my favourite. What flawless expression of his mental turmoil!

At my weakest is perfect for RB's present state of mind.

When your by my side, everything's alright

Crazy, I'm crazy for you

Thank you so much!

You checked out the song! I'm so obsessed with it. It's the only thing I listen to these days. Thank you for reading this. 😘

Fantabulous......LOVED IT.....

Shiv's past was heart touching.....Poor boy😭

Anurag pisses me offf with his rants and manhandling Prerna.....🤢😡

Loved the way Shiv came to Bhabhi's rescue from the mad man.....Prerna thinking about RB and trying to call him...❤️

Last part was just...brilliant...RB's feelings,frustration,his inner turmoil all came out....... Finally,Bajaj is clear about his wants and needs and going to fix his life....."GO AND GET UR GIRL MAN...SHE IS WAITING FOR U"......🥳

And the song was Perfect for RB❤️Pls update next part soon dear...🤗

what an amazing update. Bajaj is finally on the right path.. prerna better watch out and stop being such a ninny and make up her mind. Love you writing .amazing

A glimpse into Shiv’s past was haunting and really telling of no matter how flamboyant or pretentious someone might seem to be, there’s so much more going on.

I absolutely loved how he dealt with that confrontation with Anurag.

Now the part which made me gasp with its intensity because you just can’t visualize Bajaj being that vulnerable but it almost made me cheer towards the end.

Goooo ~baby~ Oops Bajaj. I’m here rooting for you!!! ♥️

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Thank you so much, Arushi.. this means so much to me.. I am so happy you liked the first chapter. Ah, I had really forgotten how awkward PreRish were with eachother in the first chapter.

About Anu's Dil, I'm quite sorry but PreRish are made for eachother. I genuinely believe that Prerna only loves Anu because she met him first. If she'd have met RB.. we'd have a different story altogether.

I am struggling with this love for Shiv. I try to make him as intriguing as RB because no brother of RB can be a straightforward character.

I would love to hear your opinion on the whole story.

Love,

Aparna.

Pleasure is all mine! After all you are one hell of a writer!

Not much awkward though just bitsy.

Well, with heartbroken Anu I don't intend to Prerna-less but being alone and left out as if he didn't deserved what he was so passionate about. He is a man too, flawed and daring who cared for Prerna. All I mean is he deserves happiness and a closure before he leap out for future unfolding better opportunities. Don't make him villainy or way to sad; that's it.

Hahaha, that's so damn true. I realised, may be that's why I liked him a little more. Mr.Bajaj's character was knowingly intriguing but to come terms with a new character with intriguing personality drew more attention.

Well, I am hoping for the same. I miss school life now! In fact too excited to complete reading in a go but time is the limit for now.

Buckets of love,

Arushi❤️

Update, where art thou update????😭😭😭

For Chapter 1

I love it ! I am in love with your writing! This is one of the best FF I have read. This shouldn't be a FF, this should be canon. EK should be showing this.

The premise is awesome. Post divorce PreRish finding their way to each other. I sigh. I die!

I love all the new characters, especially Shiv. And I like the bond between Shiv and Rishabh. That info dropping! It was difficult to work that bit into the conversation but I'm happy with the results. Shiv, you clever, clever fox! And Rishabh is surely the diabolical one, but I can't wait for Shiv's scheming!

Also, Prerna scolding Rishabh for smoking.. haha. And her reaction when she finds out about them being brothers is brilliant.

Kudos,

Piku

Waiting for the next update eagerly..

For Chapter 2,

Shiv is so sly. He knows how to play mind games with its best player. Rishabh you have a worthy opponent now.

Anupre conversation was so balanced. Just a touch of awkwardness and hesitation. It's as if they don't know eachother that well anymore. And Prerna's sass! Hold your hand and murmur consolation. Pat Nivi Di's back... Come to confess about any other hidden relatives. Ah, this is the Prerna we want to see.

PreRish is the sweetest couple out there. Their conversation. His teasing her. That story he narrated and Prerna's reaction! And then the mood shifted from humour to sensual.

I loved how you conveyed so many emotions in this chapter. This is beautiful!

For Chapter 3.

I want to scream. What are you doing to me? A walk to a secret tree house. Rishabh being a storyteller. That intimate moment when he pulled her up. That moment when he traced their names. And him cursing himself. I don't ever want to stop reading his POV.

I really thought you were going to show Rishabh's musical talents. But we got Shiv. I don't know if I'm happy that you didn't go for the cliché. But Prerna and Shiv needed to talk. And Rishabh left so abruptly! I think someone was close to losing his control.

Teaser

Shiv POV was . I love their bond. And the way you write their dialogues. It's like a war of words. Who can deliver the best insults, upstage one another. I loved the analogy of boxing. So apt!

Shiv is the best brother!

Chapter 4

I am addicted to your writing.

Anupre conversation was again so well done. Shiv's lines. He's acquired the art of delivering one-liners from his brother along with mannerisms.

Kuki-Prerna moment was so heart touching.

But Rishabh's POV was the best part. His reaction to Prerna. You write that so well. Absolutely brilliant. I love your writing. I love you!

Chapter 5

Paris! You made me feel like I was in Paris with them. I WANT THEM TO NEVER PART. Prerna's mispronunciation of the French word and Rishabh's reaction was so adorable. I am dying. You're ruining boys for me. How can I ever date anyone now, if he doesn't behave like your Rishabh?

And Shiv! I love his POVs. His exasperation.. his constantly distracting Ayesha to let PreRish be together. He IS the best brother!

I'm scared to read more. I don't want this to finish.

Love,

Piku.

Please update 😭