Tender Encounters (A PreRish FF) [Author's note on Pg 1] - Page 31

Ayyyyyyy

The first part😭. Maasi is a cruel Biaaatch!! Man, Shiv’s childhood wasn’t easy and it hurts my soul when I read the first part. Just wanna give him a bear hug and let him know he’s not his father. He’s an amazing man!

Dayummmm, I’m really disliking this childishness I’d Anurag. 🙄

Prerna, what do I tell her? Realization is hitting her, and when Rishabh comes, it will settle. The storm inside both of their heart will calm, hopefully.

I loved the last part. For a man like Bajaj, it must be hard to confess those feelings. But that conversation was much needed. He needed to say it out loud to someone to go running back to India. Let’s go Bajaj! I’ll have my drums out when you go get what’s truly yours 😍

Thank you for the update

This is so good. I loved it.

Maasi is so bad🤬. Shiv past is very sad😭. Anurag is🤢. I don't know why he is so impulsive. I hate the manhandling part which he does. Shiv came to her rescue and gave advice too. I really wish that she uses this advice in her life from now on when it comes to Anurag.

The contrast in the dining table scenes. Anurag is being pampered by her family, and she is busy thinking about Bajaj and how he never got it. She is in his thoughts even being with her family.

And the picture. But will she accept this, whatever they share between them anytime soon?

Bajaj. What should I say? This part is the best. His emotions, feelings, helplessness all came out very well. His conversation with Gupta is so good. And he finally understood what he needs in his life. He is coming back to get back what is his.

Originally posted by: najma123

I loved, loved the update. I liked the portion where Shiv comes, his character has more depth now. But what moved me the most was the part with Prerna and then of course the one with Bajaj. I loved how she remembers that no one ever pampered Bajaj, and that entire scene and how you depicted it, how the laughter around her reminds her of the solemnity that Bajaj lived through, it's amazing.

And I love how Rishabh expresses his feelings, though a little poetic but I loved it. Update soon!

Thank you so much. I'm so happy that you like it.

For the Rishabh expressing his feelings part, I fell back on old KZK and thought that his language packs quite a bit of Urdu. Hence the poetic expressions. I'm glad you liked that part. It gave me the most trouble.

Will try to update soonish.

Originally posted by: eishe10

Very nice update!

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: AraBearxo

I love you. And I bloody love your story.

😅🤭

Thank you so much ❣️

Originally posted by: mitras

This update was a bliss specially last line. Shiv as usual my sweetheart, boyfriend can go to hell and prerish they required this distance to clear out things😊

Haha.. Shiv❣️

Thank you so much..

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Awesome 👏

Please update soon

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: Pori

Ayyyyyyy

The first part😭. Maasi is a cruel Biaaatch!! Man, Shiv’s childhood wasn’t easy and it hurts my soul when I read the first part. Just wanna give him a bear hug and let him know he’s not his father. He’s an amazing man!

Dayummmm, I’m really disliking this childishness I’d Anurag. 🙄

Prerna, what do I tell her? Realization is hitting her, and when Rishabh comes, it will settle. The storm inside both of their heart will calm, hopefully.

I loved the last part. For a man like Bajaj, it must be hard to confess those feelings. But that conversation was much needed. He needed to say it out loud to someone to go running back to India. Let’s go Bajaj! I’ll have my drums out when you go get what’s truly yours 😍

Thank you for the update

Thank you so much.

I really tried to make Anurag grounded but whenever I watch the show.. and then sit to write, I think how Anurag would behave and he turns childish.

I am so happy you liked Prerna and Rishabh's part.

Thanks for reading the update!

Marvelous update!

The portion about Shiv's past life added a certain level of depth to his character. I liked how he handled MCP A without resorting to physical violence. The dialogues were so well written.

Prerna's thoughts gliding back to Rishabh despite being in the company of her family and her fiance spoke volumes of her emotions. She couldn't stop thinking about the man despite trying so hard.

The last part has to be my favourite. What flawless expression of his mental turmoil!

At my weakest is perfect for RB's present state of mind.

When your by my side, everything's alright

Crazy, I'm crazy for you

Originally posted by: MR21

This is so good. I loved it.

Maasi is so bad🤬. Shiv past is very sad😭. Anurag is🤢. I don't know why he is so impulsive. I hate the manhandling part which he does. Shiv came to her rescue and gave advice too. I really wish that she uses this advice in her life from now on when it comes to Anurag.

The contrast in the dining table scenes. Anurag is being pampered by her family, and she is busy thinking about Bajaj and how he never got it. She is in his thoughts even being with her family.

And the picture. But will she accept this, whatever they share between them anytime soon?

Bajaj. What should I say? This part is the best. His emotions, feelings, helplessness all came out very well. His conversation with Gupta is so good. And he finally understood what he needs in his life. He is coming back to get back what is his.

Thank you so much!

I wish someone in the show tells her that manhandling is not cool. Also, that he slapped her was the worst thing that he could've done. Next time he gets angry, he might lose control again and do something worse. But regressive plotlines get trp so..

Thank you. I'm so glad you liked Pre and Rish's parts!