Absolutely beautiful! I have no other words really.
I know I've told you this before, and if I haven't then here it is, you have a way with using words and stringing them together to depict such intense emotions. Abir is a gem, and the way you've described his emotions has been no short than perfect.
Mishti is so precious, and for Kuhu to continuously berate her is exceeding my tolerance. Like your other OS on MishBir, I truly hope this is something we get to witness on the show.
It shows the purity of Mishti and the love of Abir.
Aaah I wish I had the words to really compliment you, but this shall have to do at the moment. You're really talented! Please do keep writing!
And if it's not too big of a hassle, do let me know whenever you write on MishBir and/or RoNakshi. Perhaps even other couples cause I know whatever you write is going to be amazing! ❤️