Hanita OS- Second Chance - Page 2

Originally posted by: inlieu

Very well written, and perfectly captures the pulse of the current track.

Communication is the key - it's not for nothing that they say so.

Thank you😊

Indeed heart to heart is best thing to strengthen any bond

OMG... I'll be honest, I wasn't planning on reading the OS... I don't read many stories here in the PB forum... but THIS I couldn't stop... it was awesome! I wish we get to see something similar!

Originally posted by: annx

OMG... I'll be honest, I wasn't planning on reading the OS... I don't read many stories here in the PB forum... but THIS I couldn't stop... it was awesome! I wish we get to see something similar!

Aww thank you dear for loving it🤗, I hope too we see them talking it out..😊

Such a beautiful story. Loved it 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: LoveInAutumn26

Such a beautiful story. Loved it 🤗❤️

Thank you dear🤗

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Wow... Beautiful...

Thank you😊

Are wah.....

Perfect os for the current situation.....

I also feel that our babes is andarse chotisi bacchi....

And this pyar thing is first time she is experiencing....jab k apne HS ji to PhD Kar chuke he usme....to hsji ko badde aramse dhire dhire apni yo love estory ko age badhana hoga....

How I like her complaining to HS and he is smiling.....I wish yeh scane show me b aye....

Waise love the dailouge imArti imarti thi aur aap Babita ho....

You are so so pure and lovely writter who write such an amezing stories....keep writing and entertaining us with your talent....

Kash ek hug mil jata yaar.....( So desperately I want there hug after watching imaan love I so want hanita love story usse b intense ho)

Do write more dear...

And for this OS dher Sara pyar aur tight Wala bear hug......

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Are wah.....

Perfect os for the current situation.....

I also feel that our babes is andarse chotisi bacchi....

And this pyar thing is first time she is experiencing....jab k apne HS ji to PhD Kar chuke he usme....to hsji ko badde aramse dhire dhire apni yo love estory ko age badhana hoga....

How I like her complaining to HS and he is smiling.....I wish yeh scane show me b aye....

Waise love the dailouge imArti imarti thi aur aap Babita ho....

You are so so pure and lovely writter who write such an amezing stories....keep writing and entertaining us with your talent....

Kash ek hug mil jata yaar.....( So desperately I want there hug after watching imaan love I so want hanita love story usse b intense ho)

Do write more dear...

And for this OS dher Sara pyar aur tight Wala bear hug......

Aww thank you for such lovely words, lo aapko hug 🤗indeed would love to see some passionate moments between Hanita

Thanks for encouraging dear, will surely write more😊

Originally posted by: j&b84

Very well written, I liked that you kept their emotion true to their character.. Enjoyed reading your ff

Thank you dear for liking😊