AkshAn SS: Yeh kya ho gaya(Last Part Pg 4) - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update

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Part 5


Guddan was in room unconscious & all other family members were present at hall with doctor.

Doc:Mrs. Jindal ko shock ki wajah se behos huyi hai par unki halat mein sudhar hai toh darne ki baat nehi hai

AJ:Thank you doctor

Doctor leaves & Dadi went near him.

Da:Lalla tune Guddan ko aisa kya kehdiya ki bechari ko jhatka lag gaya

Akshat looked at him with a blank face.

AJ:Kuch nehi maa bash itna kahan ki hum dono ek dusre se pyar karte hai

Da:Kya matlab

Akshat then started to narrate what just happened in bedroom.

FLASHBACK

Guddan came & handed the reports to Akshat. Akshat opens the report & was shocked reading it & looks at Guddan nervously.

G:Kya hua

AJ:Guddan woh..

G:Arey batayi

AJ:Tum pregnant ho

Guddan was shocked hearing this. She snatched the reports from him & checked it & looked at him.

G:Yeh kaise hosakta hai

AJ:Kyu nehi hosakta Guddan hum dono pati patni hai

G:Lekin Jindal Saab hum dono pati patni jaisa rishta thodi

Guddan stops in middle & remembers about morning incident. Akshat looks at her nervously.

G:Iska matlab hum dono mein pati patni jaisa rishta hai?

Akshat just nodded his head.

G:Par kaise aur kab se

AJ:Jabse hum dono ek dusre se pyar kartein hai

Guddan was again shocked.

G:Kya kahan apne

AJ:Maine kahan ki hum dono ek dusre se pyar kartein hai

Guddan holds her head & faints, Akshat holds her in time & makes her lie down on bed.

AJ:Maine itni sari serious baat kahan use Guddan ko shock nehi laga aur jaisei maine kahan hum ek dusre se pyar kartein hai use jhatka lag gaya? Itni shocking news hai kya?

FLASHBACK ENDS

All were shocked hearing this, all stared at Akshat for few seconds & started laughing. Akshat was amused at their reaction.

AJ:Isme hasne ki kya baat hai

V:Toh papa hasi toh ayigi na Guddan ji ke saath galat hua itna woh shock nehi hai balki aap unse pyar karte ho woh shock hai

K:Iska matlab Saaf hai ki Guddan ji kabhi imagine hi nehi kiya hoga ki Akshat Jindal Guddan ji se pyar kar sakte hai

And all continue to laugh. Akshat glared at them & all control themselves.

Da:Arey lalla Isme ek baat toh achi hai ki Guddan maa bane wali hai abb uska khaas dhayan rakhna padega jaa tu uske pass jaa

Akshat nodded & went to room & laid down beside Guddan thinking Guddan's reaction to his confession.

AJ(in mind):Yeh itna shocking hai Guddan ke liye jaisa Kishore aur Vardaan keh rahe the

Next Day

Akshat woke up first & saw Guddan still asleep. He near her stomach & caressed her belly & smiles.

AJ(whispers):Bohat zald aap issh duniya mein anewale hai

He gets up & got ready & went to downstairs. All were already present at dinning table, Akshat took his seat.

Da:Lalla Guddan abhi bhi sorahi hai kya?

AJ:Haan maa jaan bujhkar nehi uthaya

D:Haan abhi sasuma ko rest ki bohat zaroorat hai

G:Kyun Durga bahu

Just then Guddan enters, all look at her nervously.

G:Batayi aur please koi gussa mat kijiyega ki hum siriyon se gir gaye dekhiyena chot bhi nehi ayi

All were again shocked at her statement, Akshat got up & went near her.

AJ:Guddan

G:Haan hume pata hai kal apki file late waqt hum siriyon se gir gayein par dekhiyena chot bhi nehi lagi sirf behos huye the

Akshat looked at her amused.

AJ:Phirse tumhari yaadash chali gayi

G(shocked):Phirse matlab

Akshat told her how she forgot about seven months & now she is 2 months pregnant. Guddan was amused & bangs her head.

G:Arey bapre ek mahine kuch miss kiya kya matlab koi important baat

L:Nehi sasuma chinta maat kijiye bash apna dhyan rakhiye aap.. abb toh humara devar ya nanad bhi anne wala hai

V:Haan Guddan ji Laxmi bilkul thik kehrahi hai

Guddan nodded & went to her room with Laxmi. Akshat looked her leaving.

Da:Kya Hua lalla

AJ:Maa agar mujhe pehle pata hota ki Guddan ki yadash ajaeygi ki yeh pata chalnepar ki hum dono ek dusre se pyar kartein hai toh mein use kab ka bata chuka hota


Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Itni jaldi yadrasht aa gyi 😆thoda aur pareshan krna tha na jindal family ko🤣

Awsome

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Awesome update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Read all 5 parts in one go. Very interesting and superb story👏🥳

Loving it😊

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Part 6


Night

Guddan was sitting in her room when Akshat entered & sat beside her & holds her hand.

AJ: Acha hua tumhe sab yaad agaya

G:Humne kahan tha na aap itne khadus hai ki hume yaad ajayega dekha wahi hua

AJ:Maine one month mein koi khadus wala kam nehi kiya hai samjhi

G:Acha acha thik hai maan liya

AJ:Tumhe sachi mein last month ki koi baat yaad nehi hai

G:Hum jhoot kyun bolenge aap hi batayi

AJ:Woh bhi hai

Just then Angad & Revati came. Akshat stands up & move a little & Revati hugs Guddan.

R:Di mein kitni khush hun mein masi bane wali hun

G:Sirf massi thodi chachi bhi toh banegi

A:Sahi kahan bhabhi

AJ:Thank God tumhari yaadash wapas agayi warna jhoot bolte bolte mein toh thak hi gaya tha

Guddan smiles.

R:Arey haan Di but apki yaadash wapas kaisi ayi

AJ:Revati woh jhatka ki wajah se

R:Kaisa jhatka

G(absent mindly):Jindal Saab ne hume bataya ki hum ekdusre pyar kartein hai

All of them realized what just Guddan said & was shocked. Guddan bites her tongue for mistake.

AJ:Ek min tumhe kaise pata tumhari toh last ek mahine ki yaadash jaa chuki thi na

Guddan gulps down & gives them a nervous smile.

G:Wohhh

AJ,A,R: Guddan, Bhabhi, Dii

G:Nehi hume sab kuch yaad agaya hai aur last one month ki baate bhi bohat ache se yaad hai

All were amused.

A:Toh Bhabhi niche jhoot kyun kahan ki apko one month ki memory nehi hai

G:Woh dar ke mare

AJ:Kya matlab

G:Woh hume jab aaj subha hosh aya hume sab yaad agaya aur yeh yaad aya ki inn ek mahine mein mene sabko kitna pareshan kiya hai specially Jindal Saab ko toh unke gusse se bachne ke liye

Akshat bangs his head & went towards her seats beside her.

AJ:Main kyun gussa karunga tumhe thodi jaan bujhkar pareshan kiya hai.. tum bhi na Guddan

Guddan holds her ears.

G:Sorry

R:Ek minute Jiju apne matlab Di ko sab kuch bataya tha matlab sab kuch?

AJ:Haan batana para

R:Toh Di apko kisibhi baat se jhatka nehi laga par jaisei Jiju ne kahan ki aap ek dusre se pyar kartein ho uss baat se jhatka laga? Matlab yeh itni shocking news hai kya

G:Haan toh yeh toh sabse zyada shocking tha matlab dekh Chutki jis time ki humari yaadash gayi thi tab Jindal Saab bohat khadus the matlab abhi bhi hai (Akshat glared at her.) Par kam hai abhi toh jab woh itne khadus the tab mein kaise expect kar sakti hun ki yeh mujhse pyar kartein hai

R&A:Point

Akshat glared at three of them.

AJ(in mind):Revati Guddan ki behen hai par Angad toh mera bhai hai usse bhi yehi lagta hai kya din agaye hai Guddan ke chakar mein meri koi izzat hi nehi bachi

AJ:Bash bohat hogaya abb Guddan ko aram karne do

Revati & Angad nodded & left the room. Akshat glared at Guddan who was giving an innocent smile.

AJ:Tumhara kuch nehi hosakta Guddan

Guddan nodded in negative & came close to his ear.

G(whisper):Chahe toh bohat kuch hosakta hai

Akshat was shocked at her statement & looked at her who was smiling like an idiot.

AJ:Waise Guddan yeh itni shocking baat hai kya?

Guddan side hugs him.

G:Shocking toh hai na.. Mr. Akshat Jindal jise sab darta hai aur chup chup rehte hai woh apni galatiyon ki dukan wali patni se pyar karta hai toh shocking hai na..

Akshat kiss top of her head & smiles.

AJ:Woh toh hai

G:Lekin ek baat sachi mein yaad nehi hai

AJ:Kya

Guddan faces him.

G:Humara Pregnancy test kab hua?

AJ:Arey woh toh

Akshat tries to remember & Guddan looks at him confused.

AJ:Yaad nehi

Guddan bangs her head.


The End

Sorry for grammatical mistakes. Hope you guys like it.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

Awesome ending

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Amaxzing

Itni jaldi end v ho gya😒

Keep writing

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Amaxzing

Itni jaldi end v ho gya😒

Haan yaar khtm kardiya😭

epilogue toh hBada maza aaraha tha yaar🤣🤣

Epilogue hona chahiye haina 😆

Guddan ka pregnancy period funny wala🤣

Keep writing


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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

I loved whole if it

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