AkshAn FF: Judaai (Last Part, Pg 20) - Page 10

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Part - 17

Guddan couldn't believe her eyes what she saw. Her mother's picture was in the middle of the wall & around her picture chits were stuck. Not normal chits but mistake chits, mistakes of Akshat. She can't believe that Akshat has made a mistake wall.

G(in mind):Yeh toh galtiyan wali chits hai jaise hum likhte the

Guddan reads the chits.

G:1. I am sorry maa maine Guddan par bharosa nehi kiya

2. I am Sorry maa mein aaj bhi Guddan ko dhund nehi paya

3. I am Sorry maa mein aaj bhi Guddan ka bharosa jeet nehi paya

4. I am Sorry maa maine Guddan ko hurt kiya

Similar chits were stuck on full wall. Guddan was shocked reading the chits, lone tear escaped her eyes. She falls on her knees.

G(in mind):Yeh Jindal Saab apne aap ko kya saaza de diyi

Next Day

Akshat woke up & saw Guddan was not there. He looked at the time.

AJ:Abhi toh sirf saat baje hai Guddan kahan gayi

He got up & freshen up & goes downstairs. He goes to dining table & sat there. Everyone comes except Guddan.

AJ:Guddan kahan hai?

S:AJ woh toh subha subha cafe chali gayi

AJ:Par achanak

S:Pata nehi bataya nehi unhone

AJ(in mind):Ajib baat hai itni jaldi toh Guddan kabhi nehi jati cafe

Da:Lalla woh NGO mein function hai tu jayega na

AJ:Nehi maa bohat kaam hai app log chale jayiye

Da:Yeh kya baat huyi tu bhi nehi jayega Guddan bhi nehi jayegi

K:Koi baat nehi Dadi humlog chale jayenge

AJ:Kya kahan Guddan nehi jayegi?

V:Nehi papa Guddan ji ne bola unhe bohat zaroori koi kam hai isliye nehi jaa payegi

Akshat was shocked at Vardaan's statement.

AJ(in mind):Par Guddan ne specially issh function ke liye aajke sare kam cancel kiye the phir achanak zaroor koi badi baat hai.. usse baat karni paregi

Akshat reached restaurant & called Guddan but she was not picking up her phone. She called her whole day but not once she picked up the phone. He called at cafe but the workers told that they were instructed not to give any calls to her not even Akshat's call. Finally irritated at Guddan's behavior he decided to pick her up before going home.

Evening

He reached Guddan's cafe & went to her cabin straight but she was not there. He asked the workers who told them that she went home in afternoon only. He was shocked, he quickly went to his car & started towards home.

AJ:,Zaroor koi badi baat huyi hai warna Guddan ne kabhi aisa behave nehi kiya wapas ane ke baad.. mujhe Guddan se baat karni hogi kahin aisa kuch toh nehi hua ki woh phirse mujhse naraz hogayi

He reached home & called for family members but then he realized that they went to NGO function. He rushed to his room to search Guddan but she was not there.

AJ:Guddan ki car toh bahar hai phir kahan hai

As he was leaving he saw his cupboard door was opened little bit & a colorful fabric was sticking out of it.

AJ(in mind):Yahan hai phir

Akshat went towards the cupboard & opened it. Guddan was sitting inside the cupboard & was crying silently. She looked at him & turned her face away from him. He also sat inside the cupboard & looked at her worriedly. He offered his handkerchief to her but she turned her face to other side.

AJ:Kya hua hai Guddan roh kyu rahi ho

Guddan doesn't reply.

AJ:Pls aise maat royo batao na kya baat hai.. mujhse koi galati huyi hai?

Hearing this she got up from there & left the room. He followed her to hall & holds her wrist to stop her & makes her turn towards him.

AJ:Pls Guddan batao na kya hua hai

Guddan get out of his hold & pushed him a little bit.

G:Apne phir humara bharosa toda hai Mr. Akshat Jindal

Akshat was shocked hearing this.

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Part - 18

Akshat looked at Guddan with disbelief. She looked at him with tears.

AJ:Yeh kya keh rahi ho Guddan.. kya kiya maine

G:Sahi keh rahe hum apne phirse humara bharosa toda hai.. jo haq humara tha woh haq apne phirse humse chin liya hai

AJ:Kis haq ki tum baat kar rahi ho mera yakeen karo Guddan maine aisa kuch nehi kiya hai

G:Jhoot phir jhoot.. apne china hai humse humara haq

AJ:Kis haq ki tum baat kar rahi ho

G:Apne aap ko saja dene ka haq.. apne jo kiya uska saja dene ka haq sirf humara tha toh apne kyu Di apne aap ko saja

Akshat looked at her confused.

AJ:Kis saja ki baat kar rahi ho

G:Batate hai

Guddan wipes her tears & holds his hand & pulls him towards the study room. Akshat then realizes the study room was open & he understands about what she is talking about. He looked at her with pain. Guddan takes him in front of the mistake wall. He was shocked as the shutter was open, she points her finger towards the wall.

G:Issh saja ki hum baat kar rahe hai.. kisne apko haq diya ki apni galatiyan aap deewar pe chipkaye

Akshat bows his head down as he cannot meet his eyes. Guddan pulls him holding his collar.

G:Jawab dijiye humara.. hum jante hai ki apse galati huyi hai lekin kisne kahan tha aap apni galatiyan aise deewar pe chipkake humari maa se maafi mange ke liye.. kisne kahan tha har roz apne aap ko saza dene key liya

AJ:Jo maine kiya hai uske samne yeh saaza bhi bohat choti hai Guddan.. yeh galatiyan mujhe zindagi bhar yaad dilayagi ki kitna galat kiya hai maine tumhare saath.. aur yeh baat mein mein apne apko harroz yaad dilata hun roz apni galatiyan likhke.. yehi meri saza hai

Guddan left her collar & stepped away from him.

G:Yehi apki ki saza hai na toh thik hai.. hum abhi isi waqt yeh ghar aur aapko humesha chod ke chale jate hai

Akshat was shocked hearing this, she was about to leave but he blocks her way.

AJ:Guddan pls aisa maat karo pls

G:Thik hai phir apko humari saza mani hogi

AJ:Tumjo saza dogi mujhe manzoor hai

G:Toh phir thik hai

Guddan forwards her hand.

G:Thamiye mera haat aur inn sari galatiyon yahan se hata dijiye

Akshat looked at her surprised.

G:Aur waada kijiye aajke baat aap apne aap ko aise saaza kabhi nehi denge

Lone tear dropped from Akshat's eyes. Guddan came near him holds his face between her both hands.

G:Aphine hume sikhaya hai na ki hume apni galatiyan yaad nehi karni chahiye balki apni galatiyan se sikhna chahiye toh aap khud apni galatiyan kyun yaad kar kar ke dil dukharahe hai

AJ:Par Guddan

G:Par war kuch nehi thamiye humara haat aur hata dijiye yeh galatiyo ko

Guddan forwards her hand & indicates him to hold it. Akshat looks at her & holds her hand. Both of them went near the wall & Akshat started to remove the chits. One by one he removed all the chits & this whole time she was holding his hand. After removing Akshat looked at her & she smiled at him.

G:Waada kijiye aajke baat aap aisa kabhi nehi karenge

AJ:Waada karta hun

And as promised from next day onwards Akshat stopped going to studyroom. Guddan was happy with this & whereas Akshat felt like a burden was removed from his heart. After a long time Akshat felt that finally he was winning Guddan's trust back as she was behaving with him in normal just like she used to be before. Akshat birthday was coming, Guddan decided to surprise him.

G(in mind):Jindal Saab ka janamdin araha hai ussdin Jindal Saab ko hum apne dil ki baat kehdenge.. kehdenge ki hum unse kitna pyar kartein hai

Outside Jindal House

Someone was standing outside & looking at the house angrily.

Person: Akshat Jindal ke birthday ke din usse bohat bara surprise milega

Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.

Kon h woh.....uski toh🤬jarur aunty hongi baar baar akshan to tang krti rhti h🤬...but loved the akshan scene....parallel was awesome...badly wanted this parallel in th show