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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: lovefk

I TOH SWEAR I STOPPED BREATHING TOWARDS THE END! and the confidence with which he says your new shaadi will last only a year! looooved it! also man your frikking imagery drives me nuts its so natural and in flow, lyrical ! beginning part toh serious Jay Gatsby and his parties ki feel ayee, RB our desi Gatsby eheh if you've seen the movie or read the novel! so basically the point is let your imagination sprint as wild as it can and bindaas hokar post cuz seriously I've read some crazy steamy stuff there's lot here I don't think it gets censored apart from a few words! there's so much on asya from qubool hai too! uuugggghhhhhh I loved how brazen this encounter was, RB ke influence mein Prerna has also understood morality kitnee fragile hai! also now you gotta continue with this yeh aise aadha adhoora nahi chalega!

Ps- do you keep track of your drabbles by any chance I didn't know you wrote them on threads also must find and read!!!

yeh raha friend all appreciation of you is less only waise toh!

Did I tell you I'm a glutton for your reviews? BECAUSE....they've become an addiction.😆 My biggest nightmare would be to disappoint you someday. Inevitable but still. THAAANK YOU <3 I actually am not much of a fan of this one because it fell short of the way I wanted it to come but the appreciation makes me feel utna bhi bura nahi hai haha. AND YESSS I get the reference. I wanted it to feel as grand as those old style american feasts. The inspiration came from a feature I read on Manson House in architectural digest.

MAN I'm still on the edge about writing steamy stuff because kab, kya khatre mein aajaye you never know. And I've read some intense steamy books. Toh kya comfortable hai kya nahi to put becomes a little hard to judge.😆

I think they'll be a update on the AT all courtesy to humpty and wist. Whenever it appears.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Rexana19

First of all, you are an amazing writer.

Second, the whole os gave me Klaus and Caroline feels from 'The Vampire Diaries'. Especially the part where he said he can wait. It was the same as Klaus telling Caroline 'He was your first love, I intend to be your last'

You have captured the characters perfectly. And seeing the way the show is going , for us Prerna-Bajaj fans this will have suffice....

OMG KLAUS CAROLINE YES! I've gotten this comment for so much of my Bajaj x Prerna work. Probably because I've been the biggest Klaroline shipper. They're my literal OTP and I LOVE THEM SO MUCH they've rubbed off on me. 😆 Another inspiration for my Bajaj was Harry Rutledge from Tempt me at twilight. Although they're extremely different now, that's where it began. Thank you so much!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: lovefk

So I read it again just now! I wonder till what extent is this prerna willing to go to explore herself and their relation! now since they're divorced I'm assuming prerna has reached the stage where she's learnt to finally keep herself before anybody else before any Anurag or any RB also for that matter. Now that she's lived with him all this while she's probably learnt how to play the games he indulges in and whatever it is that makes him tick. I so wanna read more about this prerna how is she going to manipulate the situation in her favour! I kinda wanna whine and say chalo please write next part 6/7 months later ahah but then I also want to read about their stolen moments with one another. The push and pull and what is the final nail in the coffin that'll make his words come true about sham shaadi!

hey on a serious note please don't abandon these ones okay they're bloody good its okay we'll try to wait patiently for the updates if you're busy! but pliisssssssssssssssss do write more about this situation!

The problem with writing this ahead of the others was I didn't want to compromise Prerna's characterization beforehand. Between this and then, she's changed a lot and I want that change to reflect in my OS series organically. Something that will come up in the latest OS. So there's a lot at play here. HAHA YOU'RE THE CUTEST!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#74

Does this mean you're updating anytime now?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nish_vir

I stumbled into the forums solely coz of rishabh's entry and my gawdd!!!❤️what a pleasant surprise it was!!!

First of all, you write so well...must i say that your words hold way more power than the visuals ever would👏Like i couldn't contain my praise for you despite myself being a lazy bum!

1) Read this story thrice and bookmarked it.

2)I'm in love with your rishabh bajaj. My gawd!! He is so....gosh so....alluring, sizzling, enticing, exudes power and feels so....arousing!👏I'm at loss. I am really craving another part to this Os, the continuation to the ending.

3) he continued to make crude remarks and yet....yet each one of those fell not a sigh short of graceful. It was your intriguing play of words that filled him with magic. Every emotion, every expression was so well expressed that I was feeling dizzy!

4) That powerplay of amour you showed us was so...exciting and thrilling. Above soapy romantic eyelocks, it was the dangerous truth of instincts.

5) Those lines....I want to spread you, your lithe frame beneath mine in pleasure...and till the end where he refused to even allow her memories of another man...they have my heart...YOUR rishabh bajaj has my heart. Thank you for writing such an amazing piece. You have my utter admiration at your disposal for I find myself in helpless awe of your work.

On that note, do mind telling this admirer how are you such a sport with the words...like I'm genuinely curious ...

Ah the joy of writing is to come across reviews like these! THIS IS SOO GENEROUS, THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I'm so glad you loved my Rishab. I wouldn't be continuing this because I'm already doing a proper OS series on them so I don't want to compromise a lot of the plot there before it happens Haha. You can read their story there.

OMG THANK YOU FOR SAYING THAT. IT COMES OFF AS SUCH A RELIEF! I really debated over those remarks. They were necessary but they couldn't have felt crass because that would've defeated the whole purpose also kind of put a dent in who RB is to me. So maintaining the balance was really a tight rope to walk and I contemplated a lot while writing those lines. FEELS ALL WORTH IT NOW <3

AWW THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm grinning ear to ear. You are far too generous, and I undeserving. My routine is pretty boring. It's read, read, read, read, think of all the ways a word can be used, write.😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Does this mean you're updating anytime now?

Today, yes.😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Breezi11197

Truly a masterpiece!!!

Thank you <3 😭

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Posted: 6 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: MOnamy11

This is too hot to handle!!

I remember in KZK 1 Mr Bajaj got one portrait made of Prerna, but your Rishab did it himself! And the way he soothed Prerna's jealousy. Uff . Your dark Mr Bajaj is just too good .

I remember that too. It was a little throwback to that moment. AAH THANK YOU <3
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: .amigos.

Ah the joy of writing is to come across reviews like these! THIS IS SOO GENEROUS, THANK YOU SO MUCH!

You totally earned it!😃

I'm so glad you loved my Rishab. I wouldn't be continuing this because I'm already doing a proper OS series on them so I don't want to compromise a lot of the plot there before it happens Haha. You can read their story there.

Where can i find the series you are talking about?! I'd love to read it!

OMG THANK YOU FOR SAYING THAT. IT COMES OFF AS SUCH A RELIEF! I really debated over those remarks. They were necessary but they couldn't have felt crass because that would've defeated the whole purpose also kind of put a dent in who RB is to me. So maintaining the balance was really a tight rope to walk and I contemplated a lot while writing those lines. FEELS ALL WORTH IT NOW <3

AWW THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm grinning ear to ear. You are far too generous, and I undeserving. My routine is pretty boring. It's read, read, read, read, think of all the ways a word can be used, write.😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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