Tamanna 'nigah e yaar ki' #2|| part 15 @pg 42 on 31/07/19 - Page 26

Originally posted by: fariya20

Dear ma'am thought she knew about it

Her mom lied about horam being alive

Hey I got idea thanks chetnaa 😘😘

no worries..... shall wait for the update

Personal note

Before post my update I would like to say please read this story with open mind n heart

When I started this story I am imature teens doesn't know what life is

Here story has three main characters

Horam maan geet

They had their own thought and feelings maybe you won't like

Here everyone react according to their own feeling

Criticism welcome

Small teaser as didn't get proper time to type

Ladies eyeing horam and geet whispered among themselves

"Yeh mariyam ki dosri bahu Hai na?" someone said

"Hmmm" other replied

"Mariyam kitni naseeb wali Hai, bahu bari khubsorat lai hai maaan k liye"

when Other said in jealousy "dosri hai; Aur status say match bhi nahi karti."

"Ha wo toh sahi hai" they agreed with her

Other one said "ab Kya karti maan horam ko talaq nahi de raha tha Aur kon hai humari status ki ladki kaha horam ko bear kareygi maan k sath; ab dekho us bechari geet ko kar rahi hai na." all nodded in agreement

"Hai toh wo maan k zindagi mein dosri aurat hi na. Aur horam maan ki pehali wife" someone added in conclusion

"Hmmm"

all agreed gossiping about them.

Horam see geet going away from party in blank face she went behind her as she knows geet stood with sultanas friend who are good for nothing aunties

At corridor

Walking dazly she stood infront of her room gate

She went numb like some one sucked her whole blood. Her eyes went blank and body shivered badly

Slowly she moved from there in her dazzled sate

She was breathing high, heart burned like some acid was poured mercilessly on her

Only these words echoed in her ears

"dusri aurat ghar destroy karti hai"

"Dosri biwi buri hoti hai"

"Ek aurat ka haq snacht karti hai; usey zinda mar dati hai uskey pati ko cheen leti hai"

"Second wife is a sinner"

She closed her ears yelled

"Please chup! Chup! hum gunahar nahi hai, kisi ka ghar nahi toda mein nai"

She cried breaking down

Horam geet all you alright she asked seeing geet face full of tears opening her room door only she saw her sitting on floor crying

Geet look at the girl or woman infront of her try to remember her

Geet who are you she asked in confusion cleared her tears

Mein horam listen her name geet look at her with rang making her uncomfortable

Toh hai Horam she asked in sarastic tune

Geet tum mere Matlab ap thek toh hai she ask in concerned

What you guys think what geet answer

Am stuck this point

😞

Please

Correct me if I'm writing not up to your expectations 😉

Omg good update now horam and geet are wifes of maan..nice teaser dear now why geet married maan knowing he got married already why maan is not giving divorce to horam... making to think...these people always know to talk behind and hurt always without knowing their situation... excited for the parts do continue dear...♥️😘😘

Fantastic Teaser

Firstly its wrong that all these woman gossip and make Geet feel like

she is the one that came to destroy Maan and Horam's life

which is not true

Geet did not even know that Maan has his first wife at home

but now its time that Geet make both Maan and Horam realize they and the

family was wrong in not telling Geet anything

but Geet should also ensure that her marriage with Maan get strong and its time

that he spend time with her only

Finally you are back.

Honestly, I don’t know what to say cos neither Horam nor Geet is wrong. Geet never knew that Horam was still a part of Maan’s life and Horam thought Geet knew everything. I think Geet should tell Horam what she feels and how she was cheated. May be Maan and Horam can help her then. If not help, at least she can a support system for Geet.

thanks for the pm!

emotional teaser! feeling for Geet!

hate that those ladies blame Geet without knowing anything!

Geet should confront Maan!!!

continue soon

I think this has happened before?

woww what a Promising teaser woww....

did geet first time got to know that she is 2nd in maan life??

if yes than geet should answer "how will be a person after getting betrayed??"

Originally posted by: SundariP

I think this has happened before?

Yup reading own story 😂

Get this from previous remember I posted something like that

So thinking to used it

Due to some personal reasons I am taking leave from writing for some time may be a month or two

I knew some people get angry or some will hurt I am sorry dear but problem is really big which need my attention

So I am not able to concentrate on my writing believe me it so hard for me leaving in mid but please forgive me 😔

by grace of Allah Almighty I try my best to type give proper end of all my stories

In Sha Allah

I typed tamanaa update

So here is link

Part15

Pw. Thanks

Hope you like please do comment

I want to type one more update but time doesn't approved 😞