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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Amazing os

Next time try to make it little long

And also try to describe emotions of characters and their actions in detail

Although I know I am not a professional writer

But its just little advice don't get me wrong

Will wait for you're next story

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@Bacillusbadius

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: bb14
Amazing os
Next time try to make it little long
And also try to describe emotions of characters and their actions in detail
Although I know I am not a professional writer
But its just little advice don't get me wrong
Will wait for you're next story

Thank you. I did not feel bad. This is my first OS. So this was just try.I just wanted to teach lesson to villains and wanted Kalyani to realise her love. So I fulfilled my wish here. I will try to write and follow your suggestions.

Edited by Bacillusbadius - 6 years ago