Samaina FF - Is he the one? (Ch 7- pg 6) - Page 5

Amazing update. Loved it . So now misunderstandings are clear . Eagerly waiting for the next update. Waiting for the revelation.

Disha

Originally posted by: sonushrivastava

Amazing update. Loved it . So now misunderstandings are clear . Eagerly waiting for the next update. Waiting for the revelation.

Disha

Thank you so much.🤗

Hi

A very sweet story.The concept is very nice. Innocent love story. The cartoons and the talk around it you have described brought a smile , I wished I had doremon's magic door to travel anywhere anytime 😊.

The interacrions between preeti,naina are very sweet.

They are at a very tender age and small things,fights crush mean a lot. Would love to see how you bring them together.

One thing I noticed you have updated it on regular basis irrespective of how many likes or comments you have got. Appreciate it very much. I know feedback matters but still you have continued. Keep up.

Thanks

Sajida

Originally posted by: Saji79

Hi

A very sweet story.The concept is very nice. Innocent love story. The cartoons and the talk around it you have described brought a smile , I wished I had doremon's magic door to travel anywhere anytime 😊.

The interacrions between preeti,naina are very sweet.

They are at a very tender age and small things,fights crush mean a lot. Would love to see how you bring them together.

One thing I noticed you have updated it on regular basis irrespective of how many likes or comments you have got. Appreciate it very much. I know feedback matters but still you have continued. Keep up.

Thanks

Sajida

Thank you so much. Also I am not only writing here. I posted it in other platforms too. There this story has gone so many parts. So I am not taking care of responses here. I am new to here. People don't know me. It will take sometime for you reach. I will wait. You noticed it too. Thank you so much.❤️🤗

Thank you for the update and waiting for the next quick update. Intezaar mushkil hota hai.

Originally posted by: Mesmita

Thank you for the update and waiting for the next quick update. Intezaar mushkil hota hai.

I will post soon.

While sameer was sitting in the ground, he heard someone crying. He turned and saw naina crying in a distance. He was in half of the distance to reach her but preeti enters. So he hid behind a tree. He could hear them.

"Naina what happened? Why are you crying? Please tell me. I know you are hiding something from me. Tell me."
Preeti had some tears in her eyes.

"P--pr--ee--ti..."

"You drink water first." Preeti gave her water from her bottle which she was carrying. Naina gulped the water in one go.

"Now share me what happened."

"Preeti You should not get angry on me."

"First you tell."

"You promise you won't get angry."

"How could I get angry on you sweetie-pie?"

"You promise."

"Ok promise. Now tell."

"Preeti I like someone. I has a crush on someone. I don't know I love him or not. At first, he was only friend only but later I had developed a feeling for him more than friendship. He is studying in my class only."

Sameer had heard everything. He was shock. He had tears in his eyes. So whatever arjun told was true.

Fb

"I think naina loves me as much as I do her. Yes guys I love naina. She is seeing me always. Talking to me whenever she gets chance. You know I am her childhood friend too. Friendship is the first step for love. I even gifted her a bottle during childhood. Then we shifted to another place."
Sameer was shocked but he didn't believe that.

~Fb~

Sameer ran away from there. While running he bumped into arjun. The rose and a dairy milk which arjun was carrying stealthily fell down.

"What happened sameer? Why are you running like this?" arjun voiced concern. Sameer looked at the things in his hand. Arjun explained, "Actually....umm...sameer....I am going to propose naina." Sameer's world stopped. He felt a rage of anger but controlled as arjun is his friend. Naina too love arjun. Let her be happy. I won't tell arjun what I saw. He will hear it from naina.

"All the best." Sameer tried to smile but failed miserably.

"You, munna and pandit should be near me during the proposal."

"Sure. Now I has some work. See you late.r" saying sameer ran away. He couldn't control anymore.

"Come after school, near cycle stand, don't forget." shouted arjun.

He decided to go his favourite spot but naina was there. So he went to his second favourite spot- Terrace. These were the places he always come whenever he feels like crying or getting anger due to his mother. It had became a habit since childhood.

He reached terrace. He fell down in his knees crying.

"Why god? Why? Why you always take away the persons I love. First my father. Then my mother. Now naina. I like her since starting. She was sweet. She even taught me maths. Nobody had ever taught me maths more than 5 mins as I always ask non-sense doubts. But she stayed calm and explained me everything. I don't know when I started falling for her. I always admire her and preeti's friendship a lot. She was like a mother to preeti. Munna and pundit are no less but too I need a mother badly. Than comes that one day, I broke her bottle. Now I understand. The bottle was gifted by arjun. I am always unlucky. I have my mother but she went to rohan. I have naina but she went to arjun."

Sameer stand up. "Sameer you are always used to this. Now move on. Be happy for your friend." But he don't know that it isn't easy.

At the other end,

"I know preeti. You don't believe in the concept of love. For you love is dead. But for me love is something I can't describe. You know preeti it hurts when your trusted people cheats you. When you believe that they cheated you and one day you find out that they are truthful to you and you misunderstood them. The feel of guilt. It hurts more preeti more. It is aching preeti it is aching here" said naina pointing towards her heart and hugged preeti tight. She cries her heart out.

"Naina don't talk with riddles. Tell me fully. Then only I can help you" voiced preeti very concerned and wiped away naina's tears.

"Preeti I don't know it is love or crush or anything same alien feeling. I feel jealous when he talk to other girls. I feel angry when teacher humiliates him. I feel like calming down him when he gets angry. Whenever I see hero on phone, tv or anything, I imagines him. I can stand and see him the whole day. I steal glances of him whenever I gets chance." A smile crept on her face while telling this.

"The most painful thing is when you don't know the other person loves you or not and you don't have the courage to them. I don't have the courage even to tell you. How could I tell him preeti? If I tell also It would break anand sir's trust. Preeti I loves the person you hates the most."

"Who is he?"

"Sameer."

"Sameer?"

"Preeti I hid something from you. You know na I will come early to school. So does he. No one was in the class. We can't talk to wall. So we started talking and we became friends. We became close that we shared about our families."

Fb

"My father will always torture me to get good marks. I am studying hard only for his sake. I need only a decent mark. How about your father? I think he will never scold you. So only you are like this"

Sameer was silent. "Actually naina, I don't have my father"

"Sorry"

"It's ok"

To lighten the mood naina asked, "Tell about your mother" But seeing his expressions she thought that she asked wrong question.

"She is with her husband and her son" his voice showed anger. Naina decided not to ask any further question. Seeing her face fading, he asked

"How about your mother?"

"Like you I don't have my mother"

"Sorry"

"No need of sorry. But I have my buaji and my sister. They are my two pyaris at home. My buaji's name is bela. Her husband, my mother and her son died in an accident. She only brought up us. She refused to another marriage."

"For you your buaji. For me my nanu" Both laughed.

~Fb~

"One day he broke my bottle which was gifted by shefali. She is my old school friend. It was the last memory I had of her. So I shouted at him. We had a fight. It was my fault. I shouldn't have shouted at him like that. I was not in my sense. At last, he forgave me. After that incident, we both didn't talk. Neither he nor me."

Naina told preeti how she missed him, fall for him and at last dulari's plan. Naina looked at preeti while preeti was made an angry face but she smiled.

"Meri buddhu nobita. Why are you crying when everything is going well. Don't think of anand sir he won't come again." Naina was shocked.

"He got married and was shifted to mumbai. Now only I get this news."

"But his trust. I can't break it."

"Are you loving for time pass?" Naina shaked her head fastly.

"Then get married with your parent's consent. You won't break anand sir's trust too." Naina was overwhelmed. She hugged preeti tightly.

"You are really my doraemon. Always taking me out my problems."

"Chal, let's go to class."

Naina entered the class with full smile and new energy. She noticed sameer talking with his friends but not with the usual smile. She saw swati glaring at her direction.

"I am sorry."

"Don't talk to me."

"I'm sorry. I forgot that you were waiting for me."

"Now forget me talking to you again."

"Will you forgive me Ms.Swati?"

"No."

"Please."

"Ok. I forgave you. Where were you?"

"It is a long story. You ask preeti"

"Ok."

Naina was taking her bicycle. Sameer, munna, pandit and arjun came there.

"Naina" Naina turned hearing arjun's voice.

"Yes"

Arjun bent down in his knees. "I love you naina"

Naina was broken and her eyes was ready to pour. Not because arjun proposed her. Because sameer was standing there near arjun with a smile on his face.

"I know naina. You are shy to express..."

"Just Shut up!!!" Naina shouted and leaved the place looking one last time at sameer.

Here she was broken. There he was jumping like a kid in happiness.

Only fate know what will happen.