Kalma FF: Yeh Moh Moh ke Dhage (Chapter 2: Page 4 (27th June 2019)) - Page 4

Originally posted by: asmitasb

Hey first chap was awesome. I like the atmosphere you created around Rane house. I can imagine a bungalow in a peaceful, full of nature kind of place and Malhars room is a big one with a bigger French window....Bliss! 😊

Thank you!!!!!

Thats exactly a scenario that I had imagined😊😊😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Loved your first part di..

Post next part soon..

Di vaise plz it's a request plz add your ff on index in main forum..

Thank you!!!!!!!!

Yes I did try to post the index but it said that newbies aren't allowed to post links. So that happened.

But I have posted another chappie 😊😊😊

It was so beautifully written Anna...

I love each and every line of this part...

Accha hua k malhar ne apne aansu baha diye...

Mujhe lAga kallu latter degi...

But it's ok mallu was so broken so she just give him wat was needed at that time...

Much needed solace and comfort...

Love the ending...

Interesting next part....

Chalo continue soon....

Mind blowing and amazing 🥳

Seriously khu tumhari story itni achi hai ki mere paas words nhi hai explain krne ke liye..it is so beautiful

Each and every line ..just loved it

Ur way of expressing emotions are just awesome 🥳

Keep going Anna 👏

update soon means soon (ISS baar bhut wait kraya tmne lekin ISS baar nhi )🤗

Originally posted by: Shona1991

It was so beautifully written Anna...

I love each and every line of this part...

Accha hua k malhar ne apne aansu baha diye...

Mujhe lAga kallu latter degi...

But it's ok mallu was so broken so she just give him wat was needed at that time...

Much needed solace and comfort...

Love the ending...

Interesting next part....

Chalo continue soon....

Thank you!!!!!😊😊😊

I believe until and unless a person leaves his past behind he won't be able to move ahead in life. So Malhar will slowly let go off his past and then grab onto his future that is with our Kallu and Pillu

Originally posted by: rammehra103

Mind blowing and amazing 🥳

Seriously khu tumhari story itni achi hai ki mere paas words nhi hai explain krne ke liye..it is so beautiful

Each and every line ..just loved it

Ur way of expressing emotions are just awesome 🥳

Keep going Anna 👏

update soon means soon (ISS baar bhut wait kraya tmne lekin ISS baar nhi )🤗

Thank you!!!!!😳

Is baar jaldi update karungi maybe on Saturday.

Originally posted by: Shona1991

It was so beautifully written Anna...

I love each and every line of this part...

Accha hua k malhar ne apne aansu baha diye...

Mujhe lAga kallu latter degi...

But it's ok mallu was so broken so she just give him wat was needed at that time...

Much needed solace and comfort...

Love the ending...

Interesting next part....

Chalo continue soon....

I have a question. Is my hindi dialogues okay because I am from a different country and whatever I have learnt is from bollywood and tv serials???

Originally posted by: Anna.Adh

I have a question. Is my hindi dialogues okay because I am from a different country and whatever I have learnt is from bollywood and tv serials???

Ya ya...they are perfect...

No need to worry....

Do continue....

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Ya ya...they are perfect...

No need to worry....

Do continue....

I was really worried about it. I hope I have done it well. But thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Anna.Adh

I was really worried about it. I hope I have done it well. But thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your welcome...

No don't worry it's perfectly fine...

No need to take fokat ka tension...

Just chill and do try to update asap...

One request if possible try to right an os on AnuSar...I really like them....