PreRish SS ~Na Tum Jano Na Hum ~(Writer's Note,Page-13) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Age bhi likho

I wanna read more please.

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Originally posted by: mithilalovesksg

kjud writer ko pata mahi uske cjarector ko hua kya 😆 dont act like cvs you can be better than them ❤️

areee seriously , ab samjh ayi kyu CV is tarah behave karti hai .. it is genuine

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Aur kitna bhao khayengi app? Arr khete hone na. Just post koro taratari 😡

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jodha_Rani

Finally 🤗


Start mein hi ... drinks on him ,let's enjoy☺️😆

Sneha Ko kya hua ? Yaar plz ..don't keep it something big .woh papa ki pari hai

PreRish warming up😉 Aage kya hai ?

Jaldi pura update karo smiley9

pura update nehi , isko OS se SS banan liya , i mean short story ... itna lambi lambi confession 🤣

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Originally posted by: Jodha_Rani

Those pics

Haye...plz keep them happy family

lets see 🤪

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Originally posted by: Wistfulness

So it begins with guilt. Interesting.

Please continue. 😊

yah 1st Part will update to night

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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Aur kitna bhao khayengi app? Arr khete hone na. Just post koro taratari 😡

just half an hour later will post the First part

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Originally posted by: awesome

Age bhi likho

I wanna read more please.

Thanks for the response... after half an hour later will update the First part

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Part- 1





Bajaj Mansion

It is heavily raining outside. Mr. Bajaj is so much exhausted today. He is continuously drinking red wine and was in a deep thought. In between Sneha 3 times came to meet but Mr bajaj was lost in his world. Sneha , Mr RB's only one daughter. Papa's angel. After Watching her father silence sneha felt so much Ignorance n went to complain to Prerna.

Prerna was making Alu Paratha that time . Mr Bajaj and sneha's Favorite item during breakfast. specially from prerna's hand.


Sneha- "Mamma,papa ka keya hua?"

Prerna – "kyu? keya hua beta? Apke tabiyat ab kaise hai ? dekhu toh bukhad hai ki nehi?"

Sneha - "oho mamma, mai bilkul thik hu . koi bukhad vukhad nei hai .ab aur papa khamoka darte ho"

prerna in caring voice - "nei beta , apke tabiyat bohot kharab hogeyi thi kal rat. aur behus bhi hogeyi thi ap ,pata hai .. accha bolo keya hua ab?"

Sneha replied in sad tone - "papa mujhse bat nei karrahi hai, mai do bar khelne geyi, lekin unhone mujhe dekhai nehi."

Hearing this Prerna got tensed for a while.cos from last night Mr Bajaj was looked so upset, 1st she thought , it might be for any business issue . But After the 6 months of their contract marriage, for the first time she saw the huge silence of Mr Bajaj where he was not talking with sneha. still now whatever happened in life , Mr RB could never ignore his daughter for a second.Nothing is important for him more than sneha .

Though she hates that person core from the heart, but always adores the fact .how much he is attached with sneha. His world revolves around only on that little angel. How much he would busy in works or meetings, his first priority always is sneha. So after knowing that he was not talking with sneha , prerna got surprised .

But She dint make sneha understanding about her tension . just made a slight smile said-

"Beta , papa shahed apne kam mai busy hai , don’t worry ,jabbhi papa free honge , woh apse bat karenge. Ap kamre mai jao aur rest karo."

Saying this prerna was turning her way to Mr bajaj’s study room, though she always tries to avoid that person always . But never ignore her duty as wife and mom . .

"Mr bajaj, R u ok?" – prerna

But Mr bajaj is not replying. Again prerna is uttering, Mr. bajaj ,- saying this prerna knocked the door loudly.after knocking 3 times Mr bajaj responded for a bit n looked at the door without any expression.

Mr Bajaj -" Ha , prerna ,tum kuch bol rahi thi.."

Prerna (in excuse voice)- "nah, actually sneha was asking about u. Suva do/tin bar apse milne ayi thi , but ap bat nei kia toh socha puchlu , sab thik haina?"

suddenly Prerna saw Mr bajaj’s red eyes n pale face.

"Mr bajaj , r u ok na? u looked so stress. Ap soyi nei keya puri rat?"– prerna

Bajaj unknowingly answered- "I am ok prerna . Don’t worry about me"

"Ok ,Mr bajaj . mai khana laga deti hu. ap fresh hoke a jaiye"- Saying this prerna turned about to leave.

"Prerna,agar tum free ho toh keya thodi der edhar beth sakte ho?"- Bajaj felt so restless.

Prerna Stunned . Cos from 6 months they only shared a casual relationship where both talked only when they had any urgent or need . Otherwise they maintained their long distance n lived on their own world on their own way.

First time she listened Mr bajaj’s this soft tone, where he requested something rather than ordering.

"Ok , Mr bajaj. Kuch hua hai keya? If anything not personal,u can share with me" – Prerna Hesitated .


Mr bajaj stood up gripping the wine glass n went near to the window. After some silence

Bajaj- " prerna , I am sorry"

Prerna (in surprised voice)- "sorry for what mr bajaj ?"

Bajaj (in sad tone)- "mai tumahre sath bohot galad kia,tumko tumhare parivaaar , tumhare peyar, khusiya har ek chis se dur kia"


Prerna affected to hear those words . her eyes turned in red- "suddenly iyea sab aj achanak kyu Mr bajaj ? Aur ap mujhe sorry bol rahi hai ? u are The MR Bajaj ? iyea sorry ap jaise powerful Insaan ke mu mai sova nei dete . aur sabse bari bat ,jo waqt already gujar geya hai , mai usko duabara iyad nei karna chahti. jis mai serf dard ho. Mai apne dil ko ab samjha liya, shahed iyeahi mere kismet thi.kher , fujul ki bate hogeyi bohot, mujhe kam hai bohot. ap jaldi se khana khane aa jaiye. sneha is waiting for you. "

prerna was leaving hurriedly , bajaj grabbed her hand n stopped her way .

Bajaj - "nah , tumhare kismat maine biagada. Aj usi kai karma mujhe milraha hai sneha ke jariye."

Prerna (in tensed voice)- "sneha , matlab? aisa kyu bola apne ? Keya hua usko ?"



Precap -

Confession Of Mr Bajaj To prerna


Next Part - #Page-5

Edited by opsora2090 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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de dia , check page 3

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