shamita ff rishta tha part 3 on 18 june - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Read both parts. I really enjoy. Some part was too funny I  literally couldn't stop my laugh. Update soon 
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Posted: 4 years ago
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part 3:-
asmita and shan both come to balcony in their respective places.
they look at the moon and remember their past.
flashes back,
they sitting near the bonfire. shan hold guitar and singing a song for her. asmita place her head on his shoulder.
shan:Mm hm hm, mm hm hm hm hm
Mm hm hm hm hm, mm mm mm mm mm mm mm
Dil ko tumse pyaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua
Main bhi aashiq yaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua
Chhaayi hai betaabi
Meri jaan, kaho main kya karoon

asmita:shan,kitna acha gaate ho tum.
bas dil karta hai tumhare saath saath mein bhi gao..

shan:waise ek chiz notice ki hai..
asmita:kya..
shan:ek chand asamaan mein hai ek mere saath hain.
asmita smiles and hide herself in his embrace.
asmita:jante hoon shan tumhare bahoon mein mujhe sab se sada sukun milta hain..
ache tumhe kaha milta hai sukun.
shan:pata nahi..
asmita hoped that he will answer like same but no.
flashback end.
asmita and shan both feel emotional after remembering their love.

then both remembers the quarrel.
flashback,
asmita:kya shan log toh aapne girlfriend ki liye chand taare tor ke laate hai tum mere liye itna nahi kar sakte.
shan:asmita,maine koi rocket rent pe nahi lia jo jab chaha space pe nikal lo aur mujhe koi esa premi batao jo sach mein chand taare tor ke laya..

asmita:toh main konsa chand taare tor le aane ko bol rahe hoon.
flashback ends.

they both get sad and come back to the room.
(they are in different places i enact thier scene together.)
asmita see a baclert and remembers how shan gift it to her.
flashback,
shan make asmita wear the baclert who appreciates his choice. they look so happy.

flashback ends.
asmita take the baclert and getting sad.

Teri meri aankhon ne
Milke jo khwaab bune
Woh bade pyare thhe
Teri meri paaon chale
Milke ke do pairon tale
Taare hi taare thhe

Saari baatein mujhe yaad hain
Woh chand raatein mujhe yaad hain

at shan place,
he also feeling sad he take out hiz Rolex watch which is given by asmita

Mujhe bhi tere haathon ki narmiyan yaad hain
Woh maasoom pyari si besharmiyan yaad hain
Yaad hai sab mujhe yaad hai
Saari baatein mujhe yaad hain
Yaad hai sab mujhe yaad hai
Saari baatein mujhe yaad hain

asmita:aaj tumhe bohat dinno baat dekh ke tumhe shan acha laga.
aur bhi jada handsome ho gaye ho.
shan:aaj tumhe dekh ke bohat acha laga.

arpita come to asmita.and said that they have to go to attend a party and ask asmita to get ready.
asmita feels fishy.
2 months later,
at restaurant,
asmita is near the counter and heard a familiar sound he turn and find asmita sitting near to him with a boy.

shan see this and sit infront of their table..
asmita surprised to see him.
asmita turned to the boy who is ridoy ranjan.
her family wants her to marry him.

shan understand this and take out his phone to make disturbed to asmita

asmita talking to ridoy while giving glace to shan.
asmita:arre kya hua ridoy tum kuch bol nahi rahe ho.
shan replied to asmita while act like he is talking on phone..

shan:arre main kaise kuch bolo tumse nazar he nahi hatt rahe hai.

kya lag rahe ho tum. main toh tumhe aanke far far ke tumhe dekh rahe hoon.
asmita give glace.
ridoy:arre main kya bolo tumhe he bolo.
asmita talk more sweetly to dhruv to make shan see her.
asmita:you know what jab maine tumhe pehli baar dekha tabhi main tume pasand karne lage.
woh uss din woh party main.
ridoy:really toh yeh baad uss din he bol dete.
asmita:kaise kehte uss din pehli baar mile the.
shan:ab bolo na bolo bolo..
asmita giving angry glace to shan who enjoys to irritate asmita.

asmita:waise late ho gaye tum aane mein.
shan:arre baat maat karo uss baremein.
kitna traffic ho gaya hain .
move he nahi kar sakte.
now ridoy also noticed shan.
ridoy:haan raste mein bohat traffic tha.
asmita:is okey i can understand.
shan:haan ab toh tum sab samjhte hoon na,
sab kuch,pehli kitna samjha ta tha magar tum kaha sunte the.
lekin ab sab samjhte hoon.

shan mimics like asmita.
shan:aur ab "i can understand "
ridoy turn to shan.
ridoy:aap hum logo se kuch keh rahe hai.
shan:aap kp yesa kyu laga main toh aapne ek more than friend se baat kar raha hoon.
a beautiful girl.
im so excited.
you guys carry on.
ridoy talk to asmita.
and shan keep replying to her making asmita irritated.
and finally asmita give up.

asmita come to shan
asmita:hello, excuse me.
aap se baat kar rahe hoon.
asmita on phone:baby ek min ek aurat baat karna chate hai.

asmita get more angry.
asmita:kya hai ye sab main kab se dekh rahe hoon aap yahan bath ke mujhe dekh rahe hai.
hum logo ke baat sun rahe hoon mujhe counter de rahe hai kyu.
shan:hello, madam yeh aap ka bol rahe hain.
main aapne more than a friend se baat kar rahe hoon.
a beautiful girl.
asmita:arre rakhe ye aapne beautiful girl aapne pas.
manager come to them.
manager:ma'am any problem.
asmita:manager see this man.
sitting here.
don't order anything.
manager:ma'am he is the owner of this restaurant.
asmita:what owner.
manager:yes..
amsita:and maam you were hearing my talks.
yeh koi sharifon ke level pe aayta hai,aap mere private  batein sunn rahe hai.

asmita giving angry glace to shan.
Precap: don't know.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I read them all now.....very funny....please do continue...also if you could Shaan and Asmita in italics or bold when you are writing their conversations that would be great....sometimes it gets hard for me to keep track of them if I am pretty engrossed in the reading..thank you!