ArShi SS | Mere Samne Wali Khidki Mein (UPDATED 06/01/19)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mere Samne Wali Khidki Mein

Mere Saamne Waali Khidki Mein

Ek Chaand Ka Tukra Rehta Hai

Afsos Ye Hai Ke Wo Humse

Kuch Ukhra Ukhra Rehta Hai

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INDEX

Part I...Page 1

Part 2...Page 1

Part 3... Page 3 (NEW!!!)

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PART I : AGE 10 - 11

She moved in the house next to his when she was seven and he was ten years old.

The house next door stood on a slight rise, looming over the entire street with its modern golden walls and wooden planks. It was beautifully symmetrical, two massive, glass wings stretching to each side--- one facing his building and the other opening to the view of a river meandering its way to the edge of the horizon.

When nani had announced that one of their family friends were moving next door, he had expected it to be one of mama’s architect friends or mami’s posh socialite bhabhis. A family posh enough to live in the opulent house.

But the family that stepped out of the sleek black car that pulled up to his driveway was the last people he expected to move into his neighborhood. His mama nearly stumbled with joy a man wearing a simple blue kurta and white pajamas walks out of car. A woman wearing a perfectly pleated sari followed him and a beefy woman

joined them from the other side of the car with a dusky, lanky girl.

“Manohar Singh,” the man immediately enveloped his uncle into a suffocating hug. “Kitne din baar tujhko dekh raha hu!”

“Shashi Gupta,” his mama pats the man in the back. “After a decade, our college dreams are coming true.”

His nani, who had taken up permanent residence in the kitchen, cooking hundreds of dishes since she found out about the move, dashed from the door and embraced the two ladies. “Garima! Madhumati-ji!”

He stepped back awkwardly, looking for Akash who has strayed from the spot next to him to Shashi Uncle’s daughter. Oh why? Why had Di decided to go to college today of all days? He felt painfully out of place.

Sensing his discomfort, his mama wrapped an arm around him. “This is Rat...Ratna’s son, Arnav. And that one over there is Akash, my son.”

Shashi Uncle’s eyes softened ever so slightly. “Kaise ho beta? I used to go to college with your Amma and your mama.”

“You did?” He tried to stop the flurry of emotions that rushed through him at the mention of his mother, but his treacherous eyes betrayed him as tears pooled into them.

“I did. You mother was a very bright student. You must be just like her. You have her eyes,” the wrinkles around his brown orbs became more pronounced as he beamed down at him. He reached behind him and gently nudged the girl towards him.

“I see Akash bitwa has already met my older daughter,” he said, prompting a blush from his cousin’s cheeks. “This is Payal.”

She bowed her head gently. “Namaste.”

“Hi.”

“And this is my younger dau-” he extended his hand behind him, but his eyes widened as he realized he grabbed thin air. “Khushi? Khushi Where are you?...Garima! Garima! Where is Khushi?”

It took him a few seconds to realize that the younger daughter was missing as panic gripped Shashi Uncle’s eyes. Soon, the entire household set out to find the blasted girl. He watched as the beefy lady bent down and looked underneath the car before frantically running back to the house.

“Shashi babua,” she whispered, but her voice echoed the loudest amongst the commotion. “This sanka devi will be the death of you. Ever since she joined your household, she-”

“Enough jiji,” ShashI Uncle chastised in a tone that demanded no argument. “She is here somewhere. She can’t get every far.”

The woman merely grunted irritatedly, her face turning purple as she checked under the table decorating the foyer. “Satyanash kar diya. How embarrassing.”

His nani, who had been silent throughout the entire ordeal, called him. “Chottey, peecho dekho. Maybe she’s in the backyard.”

“Par nani,” he began to protest. He doesn’t even know what the girl looked like!

“Chottey.”

“Fine!” He meandered towards his backyard as slowly as his feet can take him, anger washing over his body as he thought more about the girl. Who was she? What was wrong with her? Didn’t she have any manners? The whirlwind of questions in his mind came to a halt as he spotted a thin, scrawny form slumped in front of his oak tree.

He stomped forward, not caring the way his feet crushed the grass and tulips underneath.

“Are you sanka-devi?” He asked, his breath haggard.

She shook her head in dissent and wiped her snot on the back of her hand.

Oh. “Who are you? What are you doing here? Did you see someone named Khushi around here/”

She stared at him for a moment before pointing to herself, her pigtails and the pom poms that adorned her sleeves dancing furiously in the wind.

“Wait you’re sanka devi….but I just….never mind, your parents are looking for you!”

Her eyes were downcast and she merely shook her head.

“They’re looking for you! Don’t you care?” What was wrong with her?

The silence that greeted him agitated him to his core. He lunged forward, the straps of her baggy overalls slightly falling down and the back of her bottoms hurtling in the mud until she stood up.

“What is wrong with you? Don’t you know how to speak? Idiot! Forget it, you’re probably not Khushi. You don’t even look like them!”

She blinked before wailing on cue, her hazel eyes filling with fat crocodile tears.

“Shut up! Shut up, I-”

“Arnav!” He paused. Fear wrapped its tentacles around him and he stood frozen, peering up minutes later to see his grandmother’s taut, glowering face.

“Nani,” He began to explain.

“Is this how you treat your new neighbors? Are these the manners I’ve taught you?”

“Par Nani-” Couldn’t she understand that he had found Khushi and was only trying to get the damn girl to speak?

“No Arnav,” she silenced him. “I’m disappointed in you. Apologize. Right now.”

“Ledkin.”

“I said right now.”

He clenched his teeth, lowering his head in defeat. “I am sorry.” I hate you.

She didn’t whether she accepted or denied his apology; instead she blinked at him with those large, freaky eyes before bolting away and loudly wailing her sister’s name.

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By age eleven, they are rivals in school and at home.

He let out a frustrated sigh as he watched her snuggle closer to his grandmother, burying her head in his nani’s arms and spewing some nonsense about jalebis. His sister occupied the seat next to her, brushing Khushi’s hair and letting out a soft giggle every so often.

His day had already been going terribly, that blasted Shyam Jha had stolen Akash’s glasses again, but he had cornered the sly little snake in the playground. He was almost about to get his cousin’s glasses back when Mr. Rao, Jha’s personal savior, had come to give him detention. Again.

A flash of annoyance striked through him as he watched Khushi. His life in school was already in shambles and she was here, in his home, to ruin his peace of mind as well. He funneled all his strength into his feet and used it to walk towards the couch and fling his bag in front of it.

“Di. I’m home.”

His sister looked up briefly, the smile from one of Khushi’s earlier jokes still lingering. “How was school Chottey?” She didn’t wait for him to respond.

“I made gol gappas, luchi and aloo ka dam for the first time,” she announced proudly. “And kheer. Hurry up so we can eat together.”

“Gol gappa? Luchi? Aloo ka dum?” He wondered, the words tasting foreign to his tongue.

“Haan,” she nodded back excitedly. “Khushi used to eat them back when she was in Lucknow.”

“Lucknow? I thought Payal’s family lived in Mumbai before.”

His sister’s face darkened, and she shifted uncomfortably in her spot, stealing glances at Nani and Khushi who had visibly stilled. “Khushi and her parents used to live in Lucknow before.”

“Oh.” Why couldn’t she just stay there? Why did she have to come here?

“Alright freshen up Chottey. We’re going to eat something new. These are all of Khushi’s favorite foods.”

He wrinkled his nose in distaste. “It’s okay Di. You eat,” he shot a bitter glance towards the girl hiding behind his nani’s pallu. “I’m going to Sheetal’s.”

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Hey! My name is Kaveri. I've watched IPKKND since the show first aired, and have been reading fan-fictions ever since. I recently decided to write my own story, and thus, opened up a new account to share my writing.

This story is inspired by the song Mere Samne Wali Khidki Mein (hence the title) and is titled accordingly. It will focus on how Arnav and Khushi will fall in love as they progress through their childhood and adulthood together. I'm not a very good writer, and this is just a hobby so please let me know if you have any constructive criticisms. Thank you!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi Kaveri,


Firstly I must say, this is great to be called to as a hobby🙂


Awesome start👍


Childhood Sweethearts is my favorite genre😍

And I'm sure I'm gonna love this!!


All the very best Kaveri ☺

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was a promising start! Love the title, it's such a fun song.

"I am sorry." I hate you. This part made me LOL, reminds me of so many times as a kid when you're forced to apologize, forget about sorry, it just makes you dislike them even more!

Sounds like Khushi's adopted and Arnav's a little ukhda with his share of attention going towards her. Looking forward to read more!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely story plz continue

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I so loved this story line.....please update soon. Looking forward

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Mere Samne wale kidki.....is one of my favorite Kishore da collection. ....Good job Kaveri

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part II: Age 13

By age thirteen, he understood that they were more similar than different.

It was his parent’s death anniversary, and he needed everything to go as smoothly and perfectly as possible. He feared that he will lose his sanity of it didn’t. He sat with his feet in the pool, the one his maa had constructed just for him, and looked at his plants. His mamma used to garden before, and that was how he had obtained majority of his knowledge about horticulture.

Hibiscus. Foxgloves. Morninggloryus. He know most of their names almost better than his home. He sighed as a faint breeze passed. Here, sitting in the garden that his mother had meticulously cultivated, he found his maa.

In that moment, his world collapsed--where light became dark, the pain coming and going like waves on frigid sand. He tried to remember his parent’s face, but only a hazy mosaic of memories surfaced like shadows. Why couldn’t he remembered what his mamma looked like? Why was he having such a hard time? Why did they leave him all alone? The questions swirled and suffocated him, its bony hands wrapping around his neck until he couldn’t breathe.

He closed his eyes and tried to focus on his mother’s voice. Cho...chott...chottey...He could almost hear her voice. He can-

“Arnav bhaiya?”

And then the spell was broken, and his mother once again became a fragment.

“What are you doing here?” He asked, his fingers balling into two tight fists.

“Arnav-ji. I didn’t know-”

“Don’t call bhaiya! Get out!” He didn’t realize how loud his voice was until she flinched. He didn’t give a damn. “I hate you. Get out!”

Still, she remained rooted in her spot. “Arnav bhaiya, I just wanted to say I understand.”

He stalked towards her, grabbing her shoulders roughly. “You understand? You? Do you know what it feels like to light your mother’s funeral pyre with your own hands? To watch your sister succumb to depression with no one, NO ONE to look over you? Do you know how it feels when people say they understand when they don’t understand when they don’t understand? Do you?”

He let go, and she shuddered back. Tears burst forth like water from a dam, spilling down her face. The muscles of her chin trembled like a small child’s, and she threw him a fearful look before she ran out.

It wasn’t until he left his room that he found his sister embracing Khushi. Anger bubbled through him and he charged towards them, pausing only when he heard his sister’s question.

“What’s wrong? Are you...are you remembering your parents?”

Khushi nodded, not bothering to wipe away the stream of tears that flow down her face. “Didi, why did they leave? I was so good...I tried to be so good. Then, why did they leave me?”

His sister wrapped her arms around her. “Oh sweety, they didn’t leave you. They loved you. Devi Maiyya just...just loved them a lot.”

“But I love them too. More than anything.”

“I know, and they’re always here. They’re looking down at you from the heavens.”

“Can I go to heaven too to be with them. I don’t like this world anymore...it is...it is too mean.”

“When it is your time, you will be with your parents.”

“Will you be with your amma and abba?”

“I hope so.”

He swallowed the lump in his throat as he watched his sister take Khushi to her room. The regret came to him much later, in a quiet moment when he was back in the garden and looked at the stars. It seeped into the foreground of his mind and demanded to be re-examined, coming in waves and taking a little bit of his deference each time.

He couldn't undo it, but he could make it right. He just didn’t know how, but he was willing to try. As he turned to locate her, she found him. Her eyes were red and splotchy, and she looked at him hesitantly before stepping into the garden.

“Khushi, I-”

She ignored him, instead lifting her hand to point at the sky. “Do you know those stars? The brightest ones? Those are my Amma and Abba. And that one ever there,” she pointed to another pair. “Those are your parents.”

Right on cue, the stars twinkled, making her giggle. “Look, they’re talking Arnav bhaiya.”

“Khushi, I’m so-”

She wrapped her tiny fingers around his arm and gave them a squeeze. “It’s okay. My Amma always told me that people say things they don’t mean when they were angry. You didn’t mean any of the things you said, right?’

“No, never.”

“Don’t be angry at Devi Maiyya. She just took your parents because she loved them a lot. Plus, they’re stars now.”

He wanted to tell her that he stopped believing in devi maiyya, but for some reason, he couldn't form the words. “Do you...do you really think that they become stars?”

“I don’t know,” she admitted without reservation. ‘But I hope they do. Otherwise….otherwise that would just suck.”

He stifled a laugh, wondering how this chit of a girl was one of the only people who knew what she was going through. “Khushi?”

“Hmm?”

“I am really sorry. I didn’t know.”

“I know. It’s okay Arnav bhaiya.”

“Don’t call me bhaiya.”

‘But what else do I call you?”

‘Anything but Arnav bhaiya.”

She blinked. “Can I call you Arnav-ji?”

He wrinkled his nose. Arnav-ji was horrible, but it wasn’t nearly as bad as bhaiya. “I guess.”

“Okay. I accept your apology, Arnav-ji.” She flashed one of those rare smiles she reserved only for Devi Maiyya and her sister, causing her heart to swell.

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Thank you to everyone who commented/liked the first part. I'm still not used to IF's new format so I couldn't reply to all of the comments, but I will do so in this post.

@Aishu136: Thank you so much for your kind words! Childhood stories are my favorite too, and I hope this part didn't disappoint.

@PagliTitli: Ah thank you so much! That part was one of my favorite parts and I really wanted to convey how their relationship started off on the wrong foot. Hopefully you liked this part!

@Uzii: Thank you!

@Sammymas: This song is one of my favorites too (if not my favorite)! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Please let me know if you liked this part!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Both of them suffered the same way their parents are no more n Arnav realised soon that he did the wrong as her parents are also no more n she is also lonely like him n yes they are more a like n rhank goodness he asked her to stop calling him bhaiya.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome emotional update...love this...Spcly childhood love is something so amazing. Cant ever get more of it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Khushi gets the attention of his nani and Anjali and he is jealous.

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