Be Mine ff P8 on PG25 updated 15th june - Page 11

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

This was a good one..like always..also thank you for the pmšŸ‘šŸ¼

Rakshit misunderstood drishti as always like in the show but in the end he said mrs. Shergill..so it means somewhere he did accept her as his wife.. that's a good sign then..hehešŸ˜‰

But why no precap Saru.. please update soon coz I'm more excited now that how these two are going to get along 😁

Edited by Silver_dew11 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome updtšŸ¤—

So dadi wants Rakshit to become a responsible person..

Uff misunderstandings on first night itselfšŸ˜’

Hee tears affected him but anger overpowered his love as always..hope this misunderstanding get cleared soon..

Cont soon

Plz updt soulmates too😊

Thanks rashi..šŸ¤—yes soon it will take new turn..keep reading.

Yes wil do it today partner

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshukaurkhushi

O zaalima

O zaalima

Coming up 100 baar puncha kyun ki y shaadi kyunki bedil shergill se shaadi

Drishti

Bedil jaisa kuch nai tha dil shergill

Apna muh band kariye Mr shergill

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Hahah epic

Tera koi jawab nahi re baba🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Zola029

Lovely SS !

I really hope Rakshit knows soon he misunderstood her though !

Poor Drishti :(

Thanks zola.. ā¤ļøitni jaldi todi patachalegi lol..

Stay tuned..🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks dear šŸ¤—

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Silver_dew11

This was a good one..like always..also thank you for the pmšŸ‘šŸ¼

Rakshit misunderstood drishti as always like in the show but in the end he said mrs. Shergill..so it means somewhere he did accept her as his wife.. that's a good sign then..hehešŸ˜‰

But why no precap Saru.. please update soon coz I'm more excited now that how these two are going to get along 😁

Thanks yar geetušŸ¤— yes he will accept her eventually. Aage koun hai humari sherni so he has to ..

Precap. Hahah suspense keliye..lol. just kidding bhul gayi..will update soon stay tuned..šŸ¤—

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Posted: 6 years ago

Dadi request for marriage. And she agreed. Missunderstanding bet two. Hope it clears soon Rakshit was in love with someone one. Waiting to see what will happen next

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Posted: 6 years ago

Here goes part5šŸ¤—

Well said mahima.

Yes raks don’t do anything stupid that u will regret later.

So mahima has noticed they like each other haan.

Ohh noo it’s tine to move on raks.

A very big misunderstanding.

Poor dri.

Continue soon dr.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Saru...

Unres.

PART ONE

PART TWO

PART THREE

PART FOUR


PART FIVE

After marriage rakshit and dristi took mahimas blessings. Rakshit hugged mahima and whispered " i will never accept her as my wife" never dadi and i wont forgive you for this.

If you do so you will regret all your life for ur actions lalla ! Dristi is one of a kind. You will realise that soon. God bless.

She hugged dristi and said you will have to fight for your rights dristi. Hope you will succeed in making this house as a home soon with ur efforts and love. God bless you!

After sometime dristi went to rakshit room to freshen up. She unpakced all her things and arranged them in cupboard and went to meet divya. Divi was fast alseep by then. She sat near her sister and thought about how she agreed to the marriage.

Flashback night before marriage- Dristi was sleeping in the hall that night when mahima recovered from mild heart pain..one of the house helpers toni came and woke her up saying mahima dadi is calling her to room. Dristi went running to meet her incase she is unwell again.

Come in dristi !

Aapne mujhe bulaya mam?

I cant thank you enough for saving my life Dristi. Please have a seat. I need to talk lot of things .

Mam your not well . Please take rest

No Dristi im fine. I want to ask you what is your opinion about rakshit.

What? My opinion? Mam rakhsit is one of the most genuine people i have ever met. Due to him my sister is alive today. I cant thank him enough for that. If in anyway i can repay i will be more than happy even if its cost my life because my sister is more valuable than my life

Will you marry rakshit dristi.? This is the only way u can repay me or him for the matter because money doesn't matter to us. Will you help me in bringing him on the right path? Will you help me in changing him to the person who he used to be before.. will you ??

Dristi was shocked beyond words. Shw just whispered .Mam are you serious? Why me?

Because of two things. You are responsible and strong and at the same time compassionate towards others pain. I admire you the way u brought up divya alone is commendable. If you enter this house as my bahu and my rakshits wife i am sure this house will be home like i said before. And secondly i have seen you and rakshit on various occasions , the way you react to him and glint in ur eyes in his presence. I know you like him dristi. And most importantly i know you want divya to study hard and become whatver she wants. I will make that happen.


Toh yeh baat hai dadi ki daath dani padagi for this move

Dristi waa tongue tied . She niether can deny nor can accept what mahima said.

Dadi i m sorry but i cant accept charity. I can and i will manage divya' s studies. I will work harder to accomplish her dreams. For her i can give my life but cant marry someone for the sake of it. Its about my self respect too. And you can rest assured i will return all your money too in the future. I know it will take time but i will. And yes i am attracted to rakshit . Not because he is handsome millionaire but becoz of his selfless heart.

No dristi im sorry! You have misunderstood me completely. I shouldnt have used repay word. To say honestly its me who need your help . Please marry Rakshit . I have complete faith on you that you can make him responsible and a better person.

Dadi...Even if i agree do so, what about him? Did u ask him? Did he agree.?

Yes dristi he agreed for the marriage. But he wants a simple marriage and that too tomorrow only.

What ? Itni jaldi shaadi?? Par dadi?

I can manage beta. If you have anyone to invite then we can wait.

No dadi we have no one expect my friend shikar and his sister geetu . I have to talk to divi , i will take your leave dadi.

Is that a yes dristi?

Dristi who was about to go turned back and gave a smile to dadi and ran away shyly.

Aww dristi is in love with rakshit vaise yeh kab hua!!

Cut to present.

Dristi cameback aftee checking divi. She sat in the sofa looking around the room.

Her room!! She thought fondly. This is mine and rakshit room. She was having jitters in her stomach. So many emotions are rushing through her. Her heart trying to collect her thoughts and emotions is beating faster than ever.

She looked around the room. Majestic king size bed with wardrobes at side. Vast size balcony with lots of plants and sitting chairs and table. Simple elegant and yet sophisticated.

She began to remove her jewellery and thought of changing to into something causal but stopped herself thinking of rakshit. Where is he? She began to feel shy in anticipation of meeting him.. what will he say.

She still remember his touch from their first meeting. Even after all this time if she remembers that incident she can still feel that strong emotion.

She sat on the sofa and began to relax. She was very tired awaiting for him and slowly she drifted of to sleep.

Rakhsit who just entered the room foind dristi sleeping peacefully on the sofa. He came near her to wake her up but found that she is fast asleep. He lifted her gently and placed her on the bed. He sat beside looking at her.

I .. im sorry dristi i cant accept you. My mind and my heart are in conflict right now. I cant be of anyone except jannu.. i promised myself that i will never give her place to anyone. He thought of the advice his friends gave him on the day before marriage.

They can atleast be friends

Is his jannu alive or dead

He is gonna break all his promises soon nai??

Flashback

Rakshit kissed on dristi forehead and bade ber goodbye and went off to meet his friends. He told them how dadi is planning his marrige and they know about his past and about his promise too. They tried to convince him for the marriage but with no result. Atlast one of his friend said

Marry as per your dadis wish rakshit and leave her or divorce her as per your wish.

Have you gone mad? I cant insult any woman like that and if at all i marry her then she will become my wife . Its impossible. I cant do that

Think about it yar. U dont want to marry. But u have to do it becoz of dadis health and her wish. If you want you can spend your life with that girl but you are bound by ur promise like a emotional fool. You have to choose what you want. Marry her and tell her all about your past and ask for a divorce or else plan a life with her. Decide for yourself . By the way whos the bride

I dont know...

Cut to present..

Rakshit went to washroom for freshening up. He heard voice of dadi after sometime.

Dristi..im very happy today. Toni keep all the gifts here please. And you may leave now thank you.

Here are the gifts you have received on your marriage my dear. Im glad u kept my word and married my grandson. Welcome to the family. As i said you dont worry about money and divi. I will take care of everything. Goodnight.

Drisri said thank you dadi for everything. She hugged her and said thanks for giving me my love ..in her ears.

Rakshit was shocked that dristi married him for his money. He cant believe the woman he began to adore will be so moneyminded. Slowly he came out of the washroom and began to pack his clothes in suitcase.

Misunderstanding on 1st night😭

I hope it gets sorted soon

You are here? When did you come rakshit?

Hmm rakshit sir se seedha rakshit.. sunkar acha laga mere naam tumhari muhse. Anyways im leaving to banglore. I dont know when i will be back.

Banglore? Now? We got married just few hours ago and today is our...

First night? I know. But i have to go.

Why rakhsit what happened? Did i do something?

No.

Then y are you so angry? What happened?

Im angry on myself that i married you even after knowing its you under the veil. Now neither i can leave you nor i can stay with you. Why did u agree to marry me in the first place.? For money or status you will get as mrs rakshit shergill?

Dristi didn't utter a word after listening to his accusations. She was shocked beyond words that rakshit whom she began to love was thinking low about her .She looked up to find him in tears.

Tell me dristi..

Rakshit..

He slowly walked upto her and cupped her face in his hands and gently wiped her tears. He was so lost after seeing her tears that he just couldnt muster courage to do what he was about to do. And he thought of her and dadi conversation and walked back and said i cant stay with you anymore. Will apply divorce once im back. Goodbye.

He gets weak when he sees tears in her eyes

How adorable seeing him wiping her tears

He is gonna regret his decision of doubting her n leaving her


Dristi went to the window in trance and saw him leaving in his car. She broke down and cried her heart out. She cant forgive him ever for the way he behaved . Did i marry him for money? How can he even think like that? She packed her clothes and began to leave.

She turned to look at room once and stopped in her tracks. Why am i leaving? Galti usne kiya hai ! Saza mein kyun bhuktu? Uski himat kaisi hui meri charatcer aur self respect par ungli utaneki? You have to pay for this rakshit shergill.

She will hv to make him pay severely

Plz make her a bit bold if u want (sincere request from ur loyal reader cum friend)

Rakshit parked his car aside and began to think about dristi. He felt bad about the way he talked and began to feel restlessness remembering her tears..why am i so affected by her tears and her mere presence? What's happening with me?

U'll know it soon Mr. Shergill

And he remembered her conversation with dadi and began to get angry. No i am not wrong. You messed with wrong guy mrs shergill...



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Loved it totally

In love with ur writing

U write soo well

Plz update soon

Edited by Sobiya153 - 6 years ago

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