New Abhiya SS : Note page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi All


I got this crazy idea and I turning it into a 5-6 update Short story.


But, only if you guys want me to continue.


So, here is the background:

Once upon a time there was a cursed book and anyone who reads even one word in it got trapped into it. But , now it's 2019 who believes in all that plus no one really knows if there is even a so called cursed book.

So, what will happen when our Piya tries reads it?



Now, I will write part 1 and probably post it later.

Please let me know if you want me to continue.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting concept

Please write 1 part soon.I am waiting dear

Thank you for writing

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please continue dear.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please post first part soon. This is really exciting concept

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please continue its seems Interesting

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Story on abhiya always ready💃

Continue plz

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Piya is looking for a new book to read on the bookshelf at the bookstore. She finds a book there that looks dusty and dirty. She wonders why no one even cleans the book . She feels pity for the book and decides to check it out. She finds it rather very odd. So, she goes to the cash register in the front and says I ready to check this book out. The old lady looks horrified that Piya even chose this book no one touches. She decides to warn Piya.

The old lady: Piya beta please don't take this book choose another book.

Piya: why Auntie

Old lady: people say this book is cursed in fact anything related to this kingdom is cursed.

Piya: Kingdom and book cursed? Auntie how can a book be cursed. I think there probably were certain people who did not like this book so they told everyone that it is cursed. Auntie there is no such thing as a cursed book. Please tell me how much does it cost.

Auntie: Piya I cannot sale it to you after knowing what people say about it.

Piya: please trust me there is no such thing.

Auntie I really want to read this book now.

Auntie: okay Piya I warned you about the book but I still can't give you this book.

Piya: please auntie I really want to read it.

Piya decides to buy it at the other register and the young boy gives her the book.

At night in her room

Piya opens the book and reads a magical message that popsups and says

Savdaan this book is magical; read this book at your risk . The book can also even mean death. You have been warned

Then the message disappears

Then Piya reads once upon a time in the 15th century there was a kingdom named Vijaygarh. It was known for its victory and especially the royal prince.

Then a light comes out of the book and it pulls Piya into the book .

Piya feels she is drowning in the never ending dark tunnel. Until she ends up into a forest and she faints.

A group of young soldier searching for the missing child finds piya on the floor fainted. They take Piya to royal doctor and decide to inform their prince.

Rajkumar we found this young women in the jungle and she might be the witch who is sacrificing children.

Prince: Bring her to me

The soldiers carry a fainted Piya to Abhay

Abhay looking at Piya thinks what the hell is this women wearing. This witch is the pretty type.

At the same time few people come in and plead to the prince saying just now one of the village children got kidnapped. Abhay thinks then this women cannot be the culprit. He tells his maid to take this young women and provide her with appropriate clothes as she is the royal guest.

Piya wakes up after few days. She wonders where she is is and why she is in a royal bed and in the most soft silk dress.

To be continued soon.

So, how is it friends? Do you like it?

What do you think? Please let me know.

I am still trying to learn how to use this forum . I prefer the older version .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome starting

Oops pia didn’t believe that auntie & took that book

She herself invited the problems for herself

Oh god pia went inside that book😧

Abhay soldiers took pia to him

Glad abhay got to know pia isn’t that witch that killed kids

Now how pia gonna save herself?

Continue plz

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update dear.

I wish to pm all the buddy and introduce them with your work.but can't because I don't know how to do it in this new version.

It's too good.please keep writing.when I learn wil tell everyone about you and your work.


Thank you

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks for updating.

So Piya is now in the book. Excited to see how she and Abhay will interact further

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