Akshan FF- Aisa Kyu? Part 5 updated PAGE 5(19th Nov) - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
#41
Nice update 
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice update 

Love it
Continue soon


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Posted: 5 years ago
#43
Nice story please continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#44
I read all the chapters all are well written
Chapter 5 is bit shocking please continue soon 
Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

I read all the chapters all are well written

Chapter 5 is bit shocking please continue soon 


Thanks๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Will try to ...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Part 5:

Venue :"Dutta Villa"
As soon as the clock struck 7:00 , chaos started engulfing the atmosphere of the entire Dutta Villa or should I rather say
"EK NAYA SILSILA" ;)
Amidst the entire clan of guests, the two most ravishing and outshining couple were our very own MR.AKSHAT JINDAL AND MRS.GUDDAN AKSHAT JINDAL

Dutta:Are are aaiye hamare chief guests..
Akshan:Chief guests?
Dutta:Oh well! Haan aaj k iss party k chief guests hai aap aur ye khubsurat begum sahiba
Akshat: Accha to tumhara mtlb hai mai aur MERI khubsurat begum sahiba. Am I right?
Dutta:Haan bilkul...

The card party continued as per the show (except for the selling part ..it was just confined to money guys
So won't go into much detail )

Then suddenly Spotlight fell on a man descending down the staircase...
Guddan(sweating):Yeh yahan kya kar rhe hain?
Akshat: Shekhar?
The man:Good evening ladies and gentlemen : This is CBI INSPECTOR ,SHEKHAR SINGHANIA wishing u all a very happy Diwali
To aap sab yahi soch rahe honge ki mai aaj duty pe na hoke aap sab k beech kaise aa gaya..Right?
Well , yahan aana bhi meri so called duty ka hi ek hissa hai..

Proceeding towards AKSHAT
Shekhar: So Mr Akshat Jindal, aapki aur aapki wife Antara Jindal ke baare me hamare department me bahaut kisse hote hain..
Guddan: Akshat aur Antara nahi Shekhar Ji..Akshat aur Guddan boliye ..
Shekhar : Are nahi Guddan Gupta Ji hamne bilkul sahi kaha hai ..
Guddan:Phir se galat ..It's Guddan Akshat Jindal naaki Guddan Gupta
Shekhar: Bas is jhuthi shaadi se aap Akshat Jindal ki biwi nahi ban sakti
Guddan: Yeh aap kya bol...
Shekhar: Hamare investigations se hame ye pata chala hai ki 12 saal pehle ANTARA JI ka murder AKSHAT JINDAL NE KIYA THA ...
Guddan: Aae inspector hadh me rahi samjhe
Akshat: Shekhar yeh kya keh rahe ho tum
Shekhar : Arrest him
And the cops came to arrest Akshat
Guddan : Leave him .. inhone kuch ni kiya hai yeh apni jaan se pyaari biwi ko kaise maar sakte..
Shekhar: Enough of this drama!!!!
Le kar chalo isse..
Guddan:Akshat Ji aap ghabrana mat yeh Guddan aapko is jhute ilzam se bahar nikaal kar rahegi PROMISE
(In mind): Aisa kyu bol rahe hai ye Akshat Ji ke baare me
And scene ends on the determined face of Guddan, shocked face of Akshat and smirking face of Shekhar..

To be continued...


Beautifully written. ...plz update next part soon. ..interesting. .
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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

You are interested to read this one? ๐Ÿ˜†

I thought after such a delay nobody would be willing to read further๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Will try to...
Let's see ๐Ÿ˜ƒ